Talent Hunt ~ Vote Here!!

Righto!!! - 8 ENTRIES!!!

Guru Told me that Voting is not credible, so all of you have to name which entry you like the best on this forum. Thanks.

VOTING DEADLINE 5th OF JUNE...PLEASE VOTE BEFORE THAT DATE ( ONE WEEK)

Gur Here:
Ok Guys I would just like to add that, this is the format that is followed every where on IF. For all contests, the voters have to post their choice in the open forum. As the polls are not credible. So please do not hesitate to vote for your favorite one. It's your own personal choice, so no one should feel objected. Guys I hope we get as many votes here as possible. Only votes here will be counted!!


Summer's speech!!!! 🤗

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My speech



I just wanted to say THANK YOU!!! to each and every one of youz, you all have some kinda talent hidden there..i loved reading every entry, whether it was a poem, a short story, dialogues or pictures...each and every one of you have some kinda talent hidden there and your creativity have erupted through this.
👏👏👏. We shall be presenting single awards to each one of youz at the end...so even if you dont get the most votes through public voting you would still get an individual award that would display what type of writer you are and mark out its individuality/uniqueness.




Im sure the Jaanta would love reading all the entries. I have made the entries anonymous for voting purposes, i dont want peopel to be biased when it comes to voting. Please vote with all the honesty and PLEASE DO NOT VOTE FOR YOURSELF!!! LOL .

It has been a wonderful experience, thank you so very much for the fun!!!! Loved reading it!!

Thank you!!


Ps we shall give individual comments on each of the entries once the voting has been finalised. !


Ps note THERE iS A CHANGE TO ENTRY 8

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Entry 1

anokha mod hai yeh jeevan mein
bhavnaaon ka bhanwar hai mere mann mein
badalne waali hai duniya meri
pal mein hai darr, pal mein khushi
aane waale kal ki hai prateeksha
par samay ko rokne ki bhi hai ichchha
kal kya hoga, soch ke dil ghabraaye
kahin aaj ke apne na ho jaayen paraaye
par kal ki chinta karenge kal
warna kho jaayenge aaj ke pal

Entry 2

As the Days Passed

On the first day, everyone showered care

They made me believe I could overcome my despair

They said life is full of hurdles that you have to learn to cross

It's all about standing up and facing your loss

On the second day, they told me I wasn't alone

I felt a bit of concern in their tone

They told me that they will be at my side

It was time to accept my problems and not hide

On the third day, turning to God seemed right

He is the Almighty; He'll show me the light

To Him, I cried my heart out

He would fix my problems I had no doubt

On the fourth day, the truth hit a bit too late

I realized that all this WAS part of my fate

Tears strolled down my eyes as realization struck

I told myself that this was all the cause of my bad luck

On the fifth day, I needed someone to lend me a hand

But when I reached out all I found was vast land

I panicked because not a soul was in sight

Falling to the ground, I realized that this was alone my fight

On the sixth day, my eyes went numb as the tears dried

As I lived on I felt a part of me had died

Neither comfort nor rage came

As I understood that only fate was to be blamed

As the days passed one by one

I felt as though I had lost and fate had won

To compete with destiny is not my goal

But rather to accept it in my heart and grieve for it in my soul

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Entry 3

The Play of Destiny.

The story starts with this family who live in a very remote part of of Bihar, India. They are very poor, and live in a small shed house. The father(Summer) tries hard to earn money so he can feed the family. But because he has a limping leg, no one gives him any work. So sometimes, the family has to feed themselves by either begging or sleep without eating anything. ROA, their oldest daughter tries her best to feed the family as well, she goes around the village and does odd jobs. But ROA is already married, when she was young, to a King. But until now she lived with her parents as they were waiting for her to mature before they send ROA to her sasuraal. And now that she has matured the family is worried how they will manage to do her Gauna(farewell/bidaai to her husband's place) since they don't have any money.

Now you must be thinking how come ROA got married to a king if they were poor😕. Well the raaz is that her family used to be very rich at one point. But when she was around 18, her father Summer was facing some financial problems. So he invested his entire money into the stocks market, through a young broker named Cloddy. Now this Cloddy guy was very cunning, he just made profits of every single person he met in his life, including his friends. If he ever bought anything for his friends, he used to double rip them the next time they bought something for him😆. So you see, what kind of a cheap guy he was.😛

So yea he took all this money from Summer, and invested it in stocks. But the stock market suddenly crashed and all of Summer's money went down the drain, and they were forced to move to their ancestral village in Bihar. 😭

And bechare King ji had no idea about ROA and her familys condition, as according to the old traditions, the husband is not suppose to know about his bride or her family condition before the girls bidaai. 🤔

Summer tries to arrange the money for ROA's Bidaai by stealing someone's cows in the village, but he is caught and sent to jail😒, and in order to get him out they need to give 10,000 rupees. And more problems arises for the family when Gur (ROA's brother falls sick). Varsha(ROA's Mother) has no options left, she is facing troubles from all sides. She then does what many other poos do to their daughters, she decides to sell her daughter ROA. A man in an another village buys her, but ROA was a smart girl, before she could go with that man, she runs away from home, and takes shrine in a temple.

And back at home Varsha jee cries at her destiny, her husband is in jail and her son is sick and on top of that her daugter has run away from home😭, through which she planned to get some money. Varsha then decides that this is enough and that god will have to listen to her today😡! She goes to a temple and prays and prays, bangs her head against the temple walls😭. Rings all the bells in the mandir😭. And then then there is a thunderstorm all of a sudden, and it starts raining. Varsha jee is sure that this a good sign, she runs back home, and she is surprised!😲

Her husband Summer and the stock broker Clodpolish whom they last met years ago is waiting for her at home. Clodpolish falls down at her feet, and asks for forgiveness. He tells her that he had cheated them years back, and that all thier money was safe. Clodpolish feels sorry for his actions, and tells them that his inner consciousness always troubled him, and that's why he had to come back to give the money. Summer and Varsha jee forgive Clodpolish and now they get onto their mission to find ROA, who has run from home.

Clodpolish goes South, Varsha North, Summer East but no one went west, ahh there must be a ocean there😛😆. And then they finally manage to find ROA at a temple. Her parents tell her the entire story and she happily forgives them. And they all hug. I mean not alll, clodpolish cant's hug ROA, she is already married😔!

They then leave for home, parents are ahead and clodpolish and ROA were walking behind and then all of a sudden there was a thunderstorm. ROA get's scared and quickly goes into Clodpolish's arms. Cloddy and her then stare at each others eyes, and in the background tujhe dekh dekh sona, tujhe dekh dekh hai jagna, maine yeh zindgani, sang tere bitaani, tujhme bassi hai meri jaan hai jiya dhadak dhadak jaye, jiya dhadak dhadak jaye.... starts playing. It was love at first sight for ROA, and for Clodpolish it was dream come true. An the rest is history...😉


Par aap socho ge ki King Jee ka kya kua, well let's just say woh ek puraani kahani thi. Bachpan mein aisi chhoti chhoti baatein hoti rehti hai, aur yeh ROA ka aaj tha😃.

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Entry 5

I can see God in you, the only entity

Yes, I am your worshipper

You're the limit of generosity

I don't deserve it

But was lucky enough to get to encounter it.

I don't have any fear of losing humanity

As long as you're there

I don't care what others have to say about it

As long as I'm sure you'll stand by me, no matter what.

You questioned nothing

You asked for nothing

What you gave was from your heart

You said nothing

You never judged me

Smiling, you gave what you gave

You're known to me, yet a stranger

You are so special, one of a kind,

I could look forever and never find,

Anyone else as wonderful as you,

Though I've hurt you and I feel so bad

For saying things that made you so sad

You can understand this nascent heart

For only clouds can understand the mountains

Only birds can understand the wings

And only water can understand the wet

So if you can forgive this friend

You'll never see that part of me again

You're someone who's always true to me

Whether near or far apart,

Someone whose love and care I'll always

Hold and treasure in my heart

If you're the ocean, I'm a drop of water

If you're the pleasant land, I'm a grain of sand

This nascent heart was too late in realizing that

The divine entity was in front of it.

Because the goodness was so far-fetched

It gingerly kept repeating only one thing, "Is it true?"

Kept confusing the little confused soul

Until the day everything got as clear as crystal

No more doubt, I'm no more skeptical

I can see God in you

Yes, it is true

Now that I know the real you.

and post this song as well. It goes with the poem: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XB5GJnI8NDE

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Entry 6

A tryst with Wonderland ....


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Entry 7



Gur (melodramatic) - kya ye sab zaroori hai ?
Father-in-law - kya jo tum kar rahe ho zaroori hai ?

Gur (thinks for long , then) -haan
Father- draamebaaz, mujhe to tu pehle se hi pasand nahin tha

Gur - (his facial expressions change, a look of anger, all cameras focus on him)
Ye aap kya keh rahe ho....papa.......Ye sunne se pehle main mar kyon nahin gaya (background sound - thak thak thak )
Father - tujhe milne se pehle main kyon nahin mar gaya ?tujhmein meri beti ne aisa kya dekh liya ?

Gur (shocked) - papa , aap ko kya ho gaya hai, aap mere aur uske beech mein mat aao, hum dono ke beech koi nahin aa sakta, koi nahin
Father - chal bak bak band kar beta, bata kis samay wedding karni hai ? aur kahaan ?

Gur - i think we can do the wedding quickly ,in the ten minutes ,when the commercial break comes while the show "kyonki cloddy bhi kabhi ashoka tha " comes
Father - fir shuru ho gaya !😡 teri inhi harkaton ki wajah se teri teen baar pehle hi wedding hote hote reh gayi. Abe bete, tu bhi to itni weddings dekhta hai tv mein, koi das minute ke andar poori hoti hai ?

Gur -(thinking with a funny expression , background tone - james bond) -yup, ye baat aapne sahi ki, ok i'll follow whatever you have to say
Father -(relieved) ok then , come on........

And the wedding went of without any hassles ! And everyone lived vampily ever after 👏



Entry 8

I met up with abhijeet in khar market. He was bargaining with thopu da for 1 kg of hilsa fish.

I asked him for an interview and he agreed.

It goes something like this:

Me: Lets start off by asking you about how your career began:

Abhijeet: Well, i was gifted with the most melodious voice in the world. I was the most handsome fellow in my class as well. I was sure i could become a star singer. My father disagreed . I left home and went to bombay to earn my fortune. Pancham da Gave me a song and thats how my career started.😎

Me: tell me, you always get angry if someone sounds like an established singer, yet you yourself are branded by many to be a kishore clone.(😉- I had to say this- my readers need masala!! 😉😉)

Abhijeet: those people can think whatever they like. They're a bunch of no talent pests who don't understand music.😡😡

Me:I dont understand you, sir.Shocked (😉)

Abhijeet: of course you won't understand! you asked such a mindless question to me, how would you understand?!! 😆

Me: hmmm.. sir, dont be ofended, but the only hit songs you ever gave us were songs from yes boss, chalte chalte and 1 song from oso. what is the reason for this??

Abhijeet: Oh shut up!!😡What do you know about music? quality matters, not quantity!!

Me: oh.. so what ur saying is that kumar sanu's 28 recordings in a day which won him a guiness record and his 5 filmfare awards in a row compared to your one award for main koi aisa geet gaao mean nothing to you!!😉

Abhiheet: 😡😡

Me:Chill ,old man! hair today, gone tommorrow, remember? why do you think himesh hasn't lost his temper on srgmp after the hair plug? Wink anyway, hehe.. moving to current topics, why does your hair fall on one episode and grow back on another? did dr. batras give you some alternating package or something?

Abhijeet- No comment. Please ask me relevant topics or i leave. 😈

Me- (ok guys. he's calmed down.. i have to use my trump card now!!)

Me- alright. anyway, what do you think of amazing talents, such as say...(😉😉) ..ATIF ASLAM?

Abhijeet- 😡😡😡 How dare you !! Atif aslam can't carry a tune to save his life!!! I DESERVED PEHELI NAZAR MEIN!! MEEEE!! MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!

Me- ohhhhh.. so THATS why you scolded aneek for singing it!! A bad memory = a fallen follicle, right?

So anyway.. you spend most your time insulting new singers and go as far as to call songs themselves "besura".. So who do you think IS good these days?!

Abhijeet: why of course,

Me- who the hell is this?😕😕

Abhijeet: Are YOU MAD?!!! This is TOSHI! he is better than all the legend singers ever born!!! he is more talented than anyone i met, even... ME!!!

Me(sarcastically): even you?!!! Well, he MUST be very talented then.

Hey, wasn't he the guy who got famous for singing the following songs?:

Piya re

piya re

piya re

piya re

and last but not the least,

piya re!

Abhijeet : and don't forget piya re. I am writing a book called "you, me and toshi" for only Rs. 1200..

Me- aaah.. i see your philosophy.. less sales so higher price right?? Your really are a genius!

Abhijeet - Why yes I am, thank you. this was the first sensible thing you said today.

Me- thanks for the interview , abhijeet...

Abhijeet- It's abhijeet sahaab. now get lost.

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Hey All,

just want to say ROA and Summer u guys did a great job coming up with this, u really got the members creative juices flowing. Congratz to ROA, Summer and all those that participated 👏 👏👏 all the entries were great. 😃

My vote goes to Entry 2



BAZ give me a hug for all this!!!! 😳

Hug please? 😳

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Oh okay then since u r my scottish friend here's a hug for your great idea.

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Thanks baz...do you want to copy and paste your previous comments too??

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