27th May Written update:-Chor Machai Shor complete

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Posted: 16 years ago
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what happens when there is 1 computer and 3 people wanting to use it?Traffick jam thats what. im sorry for the lateness but dont worry my hubby and Bro WILL pay for it later😔!!! MUhahahahahahašŸ˜‰šŸ˜†


Jhuties head for the kitchen, Bhali is in the kitchen worried about Jhuties getting to there before Rani, Jhuties arrive in the Kitchen (speak of the devil and the witches appear). they ask for Kajri and Bhali are shocked ( if Kali opened her eyes anymore her eyeballs would pop out) Kajri calls from behind im here, Jhuties say we pay u poor working what were u doing over there, Kajri replies that i was getting things ready for the S aka Vishesh Samaro (huh? can anyone explain?) Jhuties reply there is no VS just bring out whatever there is and people can eat that and go, hurry up and they leave. Kali fans her self and does such z-grade acting of feeling dissy saying Hai Ram Hai Ram what will happen u will have to quicly start making the food, and Rani replies that dont worry ive already made it (jai ho Rani Maiya ki), and she lifts the lids to some Huge Handiyan (OMG u would have to be blind to miss them and they were right infront of the door!!!) Bhali is shocked (kali does those eyes again).

Rani basically made the food before so that she could do her little spying act while everyone was busy eating, kali tells jhuties the food is ready and they tell everyone to head to the hall to eat, only catch a slight glimse of Yudi in the back ground walking by šŸ˜. Rani goes to the jhuties room to find it locked and just the kali appears with the key (now thats magic), here we find out how when bhanu copied Rani's jail key she also copyed jhuties room key to (Wah mere Jame Bond), Rani looks around for the book she cant find it, enter Mrityu.

He asks her what is she doing and like usual Rani maiya cant think of anything on her own quick enough, he walks to her grabs her hand and pulls her along the corridor (now if only Yudi was not zombfied then we would had some Dishoom Dishoom, oh well) Kali hides behind the door and utters a quick prayer for Rani's safety (while ur at it ask for a brain transplant for her too) rani says the typical, hume chor dijeye, humne kuch nahi kiya, hume jaane dijeye!!! 🤢 (creatives pls create some new dialogues like, eh Koothe yeh Dhai kilo ka haath ut kiya to log Ut jaathe hain, ok that may not be knew but it would be differentšŸ˜†) god does this lines and these corridors go on for ever!!! kali follows behind niting her nails, (why dont u bite Mrityu!!!)

Jhuties are telling CR, Nisha,Rumi and Yudi how happy they are that they all behaved themselves (like a school teacher would tell her pupils) and the all get happy (woof woof) Mrityu appears with rani and Jhuties ask him why have u baught her? and Mirityu says she was in ur room, Rani hides her hand and Jhuties see, They ask her what are u hiding?, show us? Rumi are eager to check what it is and RB goes and forces rani's hand open to find jewelry, thumki asks u sole Kajri and from our room? (no u dont say?, sometimes they do have the most obvious dialogues)

Rani opens her mouth and says "woh mein". Jhumki says shut up, i always thought u werent ryt, get out now and never show us ur unlucky face again, understand? Kali listens on making wworried faces from behind a pillar (arre yeh hide and seek phir shuru ho gayi?) Rani walks off

in the kitchen Bhali say how good it was that Rani stole otherwise she would have been cought (not that she didnt anyway) Rani says i need to save my job but how? Mriyu enters and asks ifs shes all packed. she agree's and says u go im coming.

in jhuties room Thumki says im hungry (didnt she just eat?) and says oh god this stmoch see what people do for it, that poor kajri stole and its all for this stomach, Rani comes in and say's im goin Jhumki says what should i do breack a coconut for ur bidai? if ur going go, Rani says i just want to aplogise u've done so much for mew and i stole from u im sorry, i thought id make u something before i left, she leaves the gaerela on the table and walks of (OMG thats for Yudi, traitor) Thumki eyes it, and quickly picks it upt, she says ok if u dont want it all have it to Jhumki. thumki says heere moti humare kis kaam ke if she goes then who will make good food for us? listens from the door. Thumki says pls forgive her, Jhumki says today she stole jewelry tommarow she can steal anything, Thumki says so what she wont be able to understand it. and there tu tu main main starts again.

Thumki stops Rani and jhumki says if u hadnt eaten the halva u waouldnt be saying this, she pick up the halwa and is about to throw it when she smells it, and then eats it, thumki says chal gaya na halwe ka jadoo, its her first mistake let her of she wont do it again, Jhumki says no she wont stay and heads for Rani

thumki grabs her and "sataya gaye hai Budiya?"šŸ˜† ive been explaining to u for ages and ur still wont listen, jhumki calls thumki a budi kori, jhuties get angry and turn their backs to each other, jhumki looks at rani, turns around and says ok i forgive her, rani says thnks and jhumki says lekin ek shart hai, to proove ur loyalty u have to take a test, rani asks what and she replies wait a while and then ull know.

in the kitchen bhali and rani wonder what the test is.

the end

per-cap:- u see the whole family, and mrityu stood by a line of coal, Jhumki says eh goonghat wali kajri we told u had to do a test its time now. (i think they are going to burn the coal and make her walk on it)

Comments:- yaar what an eppy, i had heard that a way to a mans heart is via his stomach now this is the first time i saw that a way to a a witches job is also through their stomach!!! ok not really a good eppy, ill give it 3/10 i mean there want even enough of yudi to brighten it up!!!

do u agree?

xXx Bee

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bobbiedhillon thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bee, Can you change the date from 17th to 27th May. Thanks.
TSharan thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks a lot for the update Bee!!! let's see what happens tomorrow.....something to bring Yudi out of that stupid look...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Bobbie thnks for letting me know 😳 i didnt even realise my mistake, was to busy trying to get the update done

@ Anshu yes i hope so too, i hope that the day Yudi wakes up is not far away!!! because that would mean the day i have to hunt down and beat up the creatives is getting closer šŸ˜‰

xXx Bee
Edited by Bee3nazz - 16 years ago
Jenifer. thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Bee.
Clever Bhanu. Seems like BhaLi are the only ones with some brain cells to boast about. What a role reversal.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ Jen yes i totally agree with u, Bhali have finally figured how to use that muscle they have in their skulls.
however Rani suffers from flashes of amnesia and sometimes remembers what its used for while othertimes (which also seems to be the majority of times) totally forgets that she has a brain to begin with!!!

xXx Bee
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ur welcome payal!!!

were have u been ive missed u dear!!!

xXx Bee
evonora thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thank you Bee for the wonderful update…

Someone please knock me over with a feather…I think I fell asleep…seriously they need to pick it up now…enough of this.…!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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High Level thaka hua Episode!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!šŸ˜•šŸ˜•
come yaar we are dying to make YURA/KANJALI win but for what with thi dirt!!!!!!
Come on enough is enough its been weeek anfter week and spell is still there!!!!
I don;t think with this slow and tirey track Kapil or anybody would be intrested or ecxited for winning any award
Is thre any SPA nomination for Mrityu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😔
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Posted: 16 years ago
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lol @ nidhi, hmmmm now theres a thought maybe the creatives want mrityu to win an award!!! 🤣

xXx Bee
Edited by Bee3nazz - 16 years ago

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