FF: Our Little Love Story - [Ch. 6 - Page 2] - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Nikasha,
Its awesome. I never read a FanFic before. This is my first time and I really enjoyed it. Soon we will have baby here... that's so exciting.
Keep it going.
Take care
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Chapter 5:
"Congratulations Mr. Aadesh Khanna, your baby was delivered safe and sound."
A huge smile was formed on everyone's faces, as they knew they had a new member of the family.
"May I go see Urmi, doctor?"
"Sure, why not. I will bring the baby to you shortly."
As everyone piled into the small room where Urmi was lying down, Urmi let out a small grin. Exhausted as she was from her hard work, she couldn't help but smile with the results. Soon, the rattling of a small bed was heard, and the soft tears of a newborn baby girl dropped gently on the floor. As the nurse carefully placed the baby into Urmi's tense arms, Urmi couldn't help but cry. Not because she was sad, but because the baby was one of the most anticipated things in her life, and she had waited 9 long months for it.
"Mr. Khanna, I will need you to come with me, and fill out a couple of forms, before I can discharge your wife." the nurse said patiently.
"Yes, nurse, I'll be with you in a minute." Aadesh said hastily.
He kissed Urmi softly on her forehead, and rocked the baby for a minute, and left shortly.
"Urmi, I am so proud of you. Today, you have given me one of the worlds greatest joys, the joy of being a grandmother. Oh No, I feel so old!" Kripa said with a smile on her face.
"Where is she, where is she?" said yet another familiar voice.
The clip-clop of high heels were heard, and a woman gray-haired woman entered the room, dressed in a plain pink sari.
"Urmi beta, how are you doing? You're not to tired, are you? Are you hungry? You look so tired my dear, you need rest." said the panicky voice of none other than Urmi's mother, Rama.
"I'm fine Mama, I'll take a nap in a bit." chuckled Urmi.
A sharp knock on the door was heard, and a well-kept doctor entered the room.
"Mrs. Khanna, in order to have your daughter's birth certificate, we will need a name for your daughter." said doctor Malaviya.
"Doctor, my husband and I haven't thought of a name yet. Would it be ok if I talked to him for a bit, so we can think of one?" Urmi asked.
"Sure, I'll go fetch him right now."
As Aadesh entered the room, Urmi told him the matter. After having a brief discussion with the family, the two came up with a name: Manali -- Manali Aadesh Khanna.
-End of Chapter 5-
-Ms. Nikasha S.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I was able to read your mind before reading the full update that name of baby will be Manali.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh No! That doesn't make my FF surprising and interesting then.😒
-Ms. Nikasha S.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Chapter 6:
*3 Years Later...*
"Mama, mama, where are you?" said a small shy voice.
A young girl looked all over her house, from the living room, to the dining room, the kitchen, the sitting room, the prayer room, and bedrooms, and the bathroom. Yet, none of her doting parents or her grandmather, was in sight. She searched every nook and crany in the house, but her efforts went in vain.
"Manali beta," said a faint voice that was none other than Urmi's,"I'm outside, in the near the pool."
Basking out in the hot sun, lay a woman with a well sculpted body. With stylish, white rimmed glasses shielding her precious eyes, a stunning orange bathing suit, and bright yellow flip flops, she didn't look at all like a mother of a 5 year old.
"Manali, where were you? I was wondering where you were." said Urmi's frantic voice.
"Mama, I came out of the bathroom, and I was looking all over for you because I wanted you to help me wash my hands." Manali's sweet and innocent voice replied.
Giving out a short chuckle, Urmi replied, "You silly girl, I told you we are outside. Come, let me help you flush the toilet.?"
"Of course I did Mama, I know I have to before I leave the bathroom.." Manali replied as she paced towards the bathroom.
As a sharp wooshing sound echoed through the house, Manali's hands were lathered in soap, and smelled devine. After rinsing and patting her hands dry, Manali marched out with her mother, to greet her father.
"Let me go chance, I'll be back soon, okay?" Urmi replied sweetly.
After a while, the sound of high heels was heard stepping down the stairs. As Manali looked from her mother's feet, to her neatly parted - sindoor filled hair, she was awestruck.
"Wow, she thought, I wish I could look as nice as that."
A honk was heard interuppting her thoughts. As the 3 ladies of the house, Urmi, Manali, and Aadesh's mother stepped outside. Shortly after, once grabbing his brief case, his wallet, and his phone, Aadesh opened the door to his car. As he stepped out of his Mercedes Benz, he cheerfully greeted his wife and daughter, who were soon joined by his mother.
"Mama," Manali said at the dinner table that night, "When will I get married?"
Urmi and Aadesh laughed loudly, and answered her saying "Beta, you will marry when you are much older... say in twently or so years."
"But I want to get married now!" Manali replied, on the verge of tears.
"You will, you will, all in good time." Aadesh's Mom answered, with a smile on her wrinkled face.
-End of Chapter 6-
-Ms. Nikasha S.😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow that was so nice it was gr8 my eyes where just glued on the screen lol

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