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Nikasha

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Hi Friends!🤗

I'm a little bored so I thought of writing up a FF (Fan Fiction.) If it is appreciated, I will continue until this section is archived.

Chapter 1:

A loud honk was heard as a tall, dashing businessman got out of his car. A doting wife greeted him excitedly, wearing a simple blue and yellow salwaar kameez, a diomand encrusted mangalsutra, a pinch of sindoor in her maang, and stackfuls of colorful bangles on her arms.

"How come you came home so late today?" Urmi asked in a worried tone.

" I was caught up with some clients, Urmi. Come, let me take a shower, and we can have dinner."

Urmi smiled and nodded her head, relieved her husbands absense was nothing to worry about. As they walked past the green lawn, swimming pool, and birdbath, Urmi thought to herself.

" I can't believe I am so lucky, to have a caring husband like Aadesh, who would never do anything put me in harm."

Similarly, Aadesh thought to himself as he walked up the steps to face an enourmous wooden door. As he rung the doorbell, he thought to himself.

" I can't believe how fortunate I am to have a loving wife like Urmi, who could never think anything bad about me."

A middle-aged woman wearing a creme coloured sari and gray hair tied tightly in a bun, opened the door for the couple.

"What took you so long Aadesh, I was worried about you."

"It's nothing mom, I was just ... you know spending time with Urmi."

Urmi blushed instantly and ran inside the house, without saying a word to the woman.

"Mummy Ji, I made you some dal chawal for you and Aadesh to have for dinner." Urmi said bashfully.

"Really Urmi, it's my favorite!" Aadesh retorted, smiling ear to ear.

"You know Urmi, another of my favorites included you." Aadesh said slyly.

Urmi's already red cheeks turned even redder, as if her cheeks has been replaced with two tomatoes.

"Enough with all the talking you two, lets eat." Kripa said with a small smile on her face.

The three sat down in the dining room, and looked around. The house was nothing huge, but it was something to be proud of.

"Remember how we first met Urmi?" Aadesh asked.

"How could I ever forget..." Urmi replied.

-End of Chapter 1-

Well guys, this FF is nothing great.😆 I hope you like it, and feel free to comment/critisize and give a few suggestions to make this FF better.

-Ms. Nikasha S.😊

Table of Contents:

Chapter 1 - Page 1

Chapter 2 - Page 1

Chapter 3 - Page 1

Chapter 4 - Page 1

Chapter 5 - Page 2

Chapter 6 - Page 2

Chapter 7 - Coming Soon!

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Posted: 16 years ago

wow gr8 i was just thinking y there is no ff in atvaa vachan form as we have a very good ff writers at india forums

well y dont u start the way it is going on tv n then adesh marrying urmi n then love etc

but ur ff is very good a good start

keep updating

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Nikasha

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Thanks for the suggestions, Pavitra.

I'm planning to do something similar to that, keep reading to find out what I mean!😳

-Ms. Nikasha S.

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Posted: 16 years ago

aww this ff is really cuteee!! how they meet and fall in lovee then get married?? lol haha i cant wait to see more..

keep itt upp nika!

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Nikasha

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Thanks Mehu! I'll explain all of that in the following chapters.

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Chapter 2:

"Ma, you do remember our love story right?" Aadesh said excitedly.

"No Aadesh, I don't seem to remember. You brought Urmi home one day, and I had a liking towards her. I talked to her parents, and here we are now, 6 years later."

"Mummy Ji, how can you not know? Aadesh we must tell her."

"Well, here is how it all started Ma:

Urmi was a new student in school. I was her new Mathematics teacher. Urmi had a strong disliking towards Math, and hated it to the core. I loved Math will all my heart, and tried to make others love it as much as I did. She was in need for a tutor, and I gave in. Slowly Urmi started progressing, and passed her Math exam with flying colors. To celebrate, we decided to catch a movie together, Dilwaale Dulhaaniyan Le Jaayenge. As we ate our popcorn, our hands touched, and we both laughed it off. Urmi's parents were happy to see Urmi's sudden improvement in Math, and wanted to meet me. They strongly approved of me, and jokingly said I would be the perfect man for Urmi. We started going out for lunch and such, and we found out we had quiet similar interests. It was unbelievable how quickly our relationship went from student - teacher, to friends. From friends, it gradually went to boyfriend and girlfriend, and from there..."

"Okay Aadesh, now I know."

"Aadesh, you forgot to tell Mummy Ji about the Prom, where we danced the night away, hand in hand." Urmi said as she reached over to grab some spicy mango pickle.

"No, no Urmi, you mustn't have pickle while your pregnant. Food that consists alot of spice is never good for the baby. Anyways, please tell me Urmi, about your experience at the dance with a naughty boy like my son Aadesh." Kripa said.

"Now that, is a night I will never forget. A night that gave me dreams I still remember and cherish. A night, that will stay in my heart for internity."

"Uff Aadesh, enough of your filmy dialogue. Just tell Mummy Ji what happend already, or I will throw you out of our bedroom." Urmi said with a slightly annoyed tone in her voice.

"Well..." Aadesh began.

Ring, ring, ring, ring. The phone went off, interupting his pleasant story.

"Oops, sorry about that. I have to take this call Urmi, it's from a very important client." Aadesh said, his face turning red in embarassment.

He walked away briskly, his body movements as if he was some sort of Salman Khan, walking stylishly towards his lady-love.

As soon as he was out of sight, Urmi began:

"Oh God, Aadesh and his phone. It rings every minute, every second. Sometimes at night, sometimes early in the morning. Sometimes I just feel like throwing the savvy thing away. I almost feel as if he loves the phone more than he loves me." Urmi said with a tone of complaint in her voice.

"Now now Urmi, you know that isn't true. Come now, lets forget all this. Atleast now you can tell me, what made that night so special?" Kripa asked.

"Well...," Urmi began...

-End of Chapter 2-

I'm not sure if my FF is going anywhere.

Your comments will let me know how I'm doing.😳

-Ms. Nikasha S.😊

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Chapter 3:

"Well," Urmi began, "Right after we got our exam results, our school was having a Prom for the graduting batch of students. Since I had never been to a Prom before, I was dying to go. All of my friends were going, and I didn't want to feel left out. I picked out my attire days before the prom, a lacy white sari with silver embroidery, a stunning diamond necklace set, chunky silver and white bangles, and dainty silver stilleto high heels. Not having a date, I went to the prom with my friends, for the fun of it. As I attended, a waitor came up to us and offered us drinks. He gave me a special drink, and I gulped it down. Suddenly, my head started spinning and I felt extremely dizzy. Before I knew it, I was dancing shamelessly to the songs the DJ played. Track after track, I became dizzier and dizzier, but I kept dancing. Suddenly, I felt a firm hand grabbed mine, and I stopped. Infront of me was a man, a man who I had only seen in casual wear and teacher attire, stood in front of me wearing a dark blue suit. Being dizzy from the drink, I couldn't see who it was properly. Before I could say anything, he said..."

"May I have this dance?" Aadesh continued after finishing his phone call.

"I immediatley accepted, for I knew my mental state wasn't right. He slowly twirled me around, careful not to make me dizzier. From the kind gesture and attitude, I guessed it was Aadesh who I was dancing with. I was right. We started dancing, across the dancefloor, gazing into each other's eyes for what seemed like an eternity. We had no clue the whole school was watching us, some out of jealousy, and some out of shock and awe. As the final twirl approached, people started clapping to no end. We couldn't help but smile, and hug each other. Our principal, Mr. Aggarwal crowned us Prom King and Queen, and let us sit on a throne. As the Prom ended, Aadesh led me outside towards the fschool courtyard. He sat beside me, and told me about what happend before he danced with me. I was so ashamed, and I felt as if I could never look at Aadesh in the eye anymore. Aadesh told me I was being foolish for thinking so, and he said he felt as if the dance had brought us closer together, and gave our relationship a whole new meaning." Urmi concluded.

"Urmi, I cannot believe you never told me of this night. The night must be the best night of your life." Kripa said.

"No Mummy Ji, that is not true at all. The best day of my life was much later, on our wedding day. If only Papa was with us, I felt so incomplete without his blessings." Urmi began.

"Your wedding is a night no one can forget, and we will always cherish the moment when you and Aadesh became husband and wife, giving your relationship a meaning like no other." said Kripa.

"Aadesh and Urmi's wedding was one of the grandest weddings our city has ever scene." said a familiar voice, belonging to none other than Mr. Shastri.

"Mr. Shastri, what a pleasant surprise! Where is Rama Ji?" Kripa asked curiously.

"She has a slight fever, but I'm sure she will get better soon. Anyways, I remember every single detail, every single moment of Aadesh and Urmi's wedding."

"Why not tell us Papa, for old time's sake?" Urmi asked.

"Sure thing beta, I'd love to." Mr. Shastri began, with a small smile on his face, a smile, Urmi could never get enough of.

-End of Chapter 3-

-Ms. Nikasha S.😊

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Chapter 4:

" A man was sitting around they holy fire, surrounded by hundreds of talkative family members. He was dressed in a dashing red sherwani, with unique embroidery. In place of a pant any American man would wear, was a silk churidaar pajama. Upon his head, was a pink turban, with a bright coloured feather on it. A man, I know as my loving a doting son-in-law, Aadesh. A woman entered the wedding venue. She was dressed in a stunning maroon lehnga with heavy golden embroidery. A heavy golden chocker with beautiful stones was clasped onto her neck. Matching earrings and a maang tikka were on her as well. Around her feet, were 2 lightweight golden anklets, that jingled with every step she took.Adorning her wrists were dozens of red,white,and gold bangles, each with their own intricate design. A woman, who I had raised and brought up all my life, a woman who I will always know as my naughty little girl. A woman, named Urmi. Aadesh approached her and placed a necklace of assorted flowers, around her neck. As did Urmi. Once Urmi took her place beside Aadesh, the priest began chanting hymns and religious words. After performing various tasks, Aadesh took a large amount of sindoor, and gently applied it in Urmi's parting. He took a long, diamond encrusted mangalsutra with several gold and black beads, and placed it around Urmi's sore neck. The two got up, and took seven vows, those seven vows that every husband and wife take, those seven vows that protect a husband and wife for not one life, but for seven lives. They took their parent's blessings, and went. Urmi weeped as she left her parents house, the house she had spent her whole life in. As she sat in a well decorated car, she bid her parents a final good bye, and was on her way. On her way to a new life, a new house, a new family, and a new beginning." stated Mr. Shastri, with tears flowing from his eyes.

"Papa, why are you crying? Aren't you happy we got married?" Urmi asked softly.

"Of course I'm happy you silly girl, these tears are but a mere show of how much I love the path your life has taken. I'm even more happy, for soon I will have a young one to take care of, my very own grandaughter." Mr. Shastri said with a smile on his face.

"What makes you think we will let you take care of our little one, I will give her so much love, you will have nothing more to give her." Kripa said between short chuckles.

"Speaking of grandchildren... when is she due Urmi?" Mr. Shastri asked curiously.

"The doctor said it is due anytime this month. What is the date today, right - May 3rd!"

"I hope this little bundle of joy comes soon, I can't wait for it to play in my lap." Kripa said proudly.

"Your wait may be over Mummy Ji!" Urmi stated between sudden cries of unbearable pain.

-End of Chapter 4-

This chapter is short, and sweet.😳

-Ms. Nikasha S.😊

Edited by -Nikasha- - 16 years ago