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Riti

@-Reeti-

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Posted: 16 years ago

#851

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Naina apne room main hai
aur Raj Knock karta hai
Naina door kholti hai to samne Raj khada hai
Naina:ahh Sir Aap...Good Morning sir
Raj:Good Morning Naina
Naina:Kya baat hai sir aap pareshan lag rahe hain I hope sab theek hai
Raj:Ahh Nothing naina woh bas main gunny ke baton se thoda sa pareshan hogaya tha
Naina:kyu sir i mean aisa kya kaha unhone
Raj:kuch kaha to nahin par likha zarur hai
Raj:I know naina mujhse ek bohat badi ghalti hogayi par mujhe uski sachhai janni thi
isliye maine gunny ki Diary padhli
Naina:What ??
Raj: han naina par agar main na bhi padhta to kya hota Gunny ab bhi deeya ko chahta
hai
Naina:kyaaaaaaa ??par humne to kuch aur hi socha tha
Raj:han aur pata nahin Chohan ka kya hoga??
Naina:Sir I think hame Abhimanyu sir ko ye baat bata deni chaiye
RAj:naina Aisa Hum Kaise kar sakte hain Chohan yahi sochega ki
hum uski aur Deeya ki dosti nahin chahte
Naina:Khair Kuch to karna hoga na sir
RAj:aur khatarnak baat to ye hai ki Na deeya ko pata hai ki Gunny
usse chahta hai aur na hi gunny ko pata hai ki deeya usse chahti hai
khair ye sab chodo aur chalo breakfast karte hain
Naina:Aaaa Sir..
Raj:Yes..
Naina:ek sawal karoo aapse
Raj:han poochona
Naina:Ap yahan apni ghalti confess karne aye the hai na
Raj:......Han U r right Mujhe apni ghalti kisise confess karni thi
to tumse kardi kyu ki sabse jyada bharosa to tumhi par hai....
Naina aur Raj Ek dusre ko dekhe jate hain
Raj:ahhmm...Aaa Chale...Naina...
Naina....Ahh..yes Sir.....

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Gunny aur Sameera jate jate taqra jate hain
Gunny:Ohh Cadet Shroff...
Sam:Good Morning sir...
gunny:are wah gud to akhir kar tumne sir bolna sikh hi liya
Sam:yes Sir Sikhti kaise nahin K M A ki jo cadet hoo
Gunny:right...Ah Cadet Shroff May I Ask U some thing
Sam:Yah sure Sir..
gunny:Its Very personal???
Sam:yah U can sir
Gunny:Kya aap ko aisa lagta hai ki main aapse pyar karta hoo
Sam gunny Ki baat sun kar hairan reh jati hai
aur phir thodi der baat bolna shuru karti hai
Sam:Nooo sir...aap ko aisa kyu laga???
Gunny:Nahin Bas Aise hi
Sam:I know sir hamare sath bhi wohi ho raha hai jo Capt Naina Aur Maj Rajveer Ke sath hua tha
Gunny smile karta hai
Gunny:Nahin Sameera aisa kuch nahin hai woh to bas kuch logon ko aisa lagta hai
Khair tum chodo tum enjoy karo
Sam:yah sir..

Woh dono chale jate hain

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Raj Naina Aur Alekh ko apne room main bulata hai
Naina:aapne bulaya sir
Raj:ohh yes....Capt naina and Capt Sharma aap sare cadets aur faculties ko
inform kardo ki hame jald se jald KMA wapas jana hai
Naina:whot sir..??
Raj:yes Naina BRIG chandok ka Order hai ki hame jald hi Academy Wapas Jani hai
kyuki Pichle Saal ki tarah Academy main phir se inspection hone wala hai
Naina:whot???yani phir se Maj bhargava Ane wale hain
Raj:Hahaha ..naina aisa nahin hai
Alekh:Apun to Dar hi gaya ki kahin wo hitler phir se na tapak pade
Raj:Alekh Woh nahin toh koi na koi to aur ayenge aur I hope ki woh
itne Sakht na hon
Naina:sir..kahin pichle saal ki tarah wo kisi cadet ya faculty ko nishana
to nahin banayenge na
Raj:pata nahin lekin Maj Bhargav ki tarah....
ALekh:Kameena koi nahin ho sakta
Raj aur Naina ALekh ki baat se hasne lag jate hain
Raj:Any ways aap sabko inform kar dijiye
ALekh & Naina:YES..Sir..
Raj:Dismissed.

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Abhi apne room Main hai
Raj usse milne jata hai
Raj:ahh may i come in
Abhi:Raj...Tum Bhi...Come
Raj:kaise ho
Abhi:hum theek hain..
Raj:thank god
Abhi:Par hume pata hai ki tum yahan kyu aye ho
Raj:achha kyu aya hoo
Abhi:yahi pata karne ki is baat ko jan ne ke baad ki Deeya Humse nahin
balki gunny se pyar karti hain hum Theek hai ya nahin right ???
Raj:chohan..
Abhi:hum Jante hain raj...
Raj:Par Kaise???
Abhi:Humne unko rote dekha hai Unke liye
Raj:aur tum phir bhi..
Abhi:Raj....Pyar humesha dono se ho zaruri to nahi
Raj:Ha..Tum Sahi ho .....
Abhi:Tum....samajhte hi ho Khair chodo aur batao KMA ke liye kab nikal na hai
Raj:shayad kal subah
Abhi:okk hum tayar hojayenge
Raj:ha...Chalo Take care ...good night
Abhi:good Night.

Raj apne room main jata hai aur ye sari batein Deeya sun leti hai..

aur jab raj bahar jaa raha hota hai to deeya usse darwaje ke pass
khadi nazar ati hai
Raj:aap yaha..
Deeya:I am sorry
Raj:aap mujhe sorry na boliye kuch bolna hi hai to jakar gunny ko apni
dil ki baat batayiye kyu ki woh bhi aap hi se pyar karta hai pichle 10 salon
se
Deeya:Whot???
Raj:jee..maine khud unki diary padhi hai
Deeya:par woh to sam se..
Raj:aisa aap ko lagta hai
Deeya:kyaaaaa??
Raj:jee....i hope u r goin to tell him
Deeya:yes I will

aur deeya wahan se bhagne lagti hai aur ye baat abhi dekhta hai
aur raj piche mudkar abhi ko dekh raha hai aur uske kandhe par hath rakhta hai
Abhi:Chali gayi woh...
Raj:sambhalo Chohan apne aap ko
Abhi:hum theek hain Raj...Tum chinta mat karo
Raj:Hmmm tum jake aram karlo
Abhi:yahh gud nyt'

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Deeya gunny se milne gayi hai
aur gunny usse bas dekh raha hai
dono chup hain
gunny:tum yahan
Deeya dheere se uske paass jati hai
deeya:tumne bataya kyu nahin mujhe
gunny:kya?
Deeya:yahi ki tum mujhse pyar karte u fool
gunny:lekin tum toh Abhi se
Deeya:Just Shut Up.I LOVE U dam It.
Gunny :deeya yeh tum kya keh rahi ho
Deeya:tum ek baar to batakar dekhte
Gunny:tumne bhi to nahin bataya yeh soch kar ke main sameera se pyar karta hoo
Deeya chup ho jati hai
aur phir dono ek dusre ko dekhte hain aur phir ek dusre ko hug KArte hain
aur phir kuch der baad ek dusre se alag hote hain
aur dono ek dusre ke ankhon se asoo pochte hain
Deeya:Abhimanyu loves me...
gunny:hmm I know
Deeya:Mujhe unke liye bura feel hora hai
Gunny Deeya ko teerchi nazron se dekhta hai
Deeya hasne lag jati hai
gunny:aisa kuch nahin hai main sirf tumhari hoo okkkk
Deeya:hmmThats gud
and wo ek dusre ko dubara hug karte hain

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Naina Aur Alekh Sare Cadets Ko inform kartey hain ki unhe usi waqt KMA wapas jana hoga

to sare cadets udas hojate hain

Naina:common cadets aap log sodiers ho na ki normal civilians
ek soldier ke liye 7 din ki bhi chutti kafi hoti hai
Alekh:aur phir waha pe inspection hone wala hai to tum logon ko bachke rehna padega
Naina:common cadets Aap sabko yaad hai na u all are soldiers so be Brave
all right??
Cadets:Yes Mam..

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sab log bag packs karne lagte hain

Alekh bahar lern main betha hai
wahan Roshni ati hai
Roshni:Hello sir.
Alekh piche dekhta hai
Alekh:tu yaha aur ye sir kayko bulaya apun ko
Roshni:aise hi !!
Alekh:tereko kya hua hai tu udas kayko hai
Roshni:kuch nahin aise hi ab hum KMA wapas jayenge to hum mil nahin payenge na
Alekh:terko pata hai tu Rajveer sir ki behen kisi bhi angle se nain lagti
sir itne samajhdar hai tu heydi heydi hai
roshni Muskurati hai
Alekh:chal ab jake kapde pack kar kal subah jaldi nikal na hai
Roshni:hmmm

End Of The Part😃

Hello Friends How r u all ye maine UD kar diya hai aur ab aap logon Ud 3 din baad milega .I hope u like it .riti.😳

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pooja

@RVsPOOJA

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#852

di,kya ho gaya hai tumhe?
itna jaldi jaldi ud kar rahi ho?
abhi agar heart attack aa jata mujhe to?
anyways jo bhi ho,ud kamaal ki thi👏
aur ye story mein kya hua meri to kucch samajh nahin aaya!😕
😕deeya ne gunny ko jaake sab bata diya,ab bechare abhimanyu ka kya hoga😭?aur guuny ko to pata bhi nahin hai ki deeya officer hai,kahin iss wajah se jhagda naa ho jaaye!🤢
aur ye naina raj sirf doosron ki gaadi ko dhakka denge yaa fir khud bhi kuch karenge?
oh no,fir se inspection!
ab kya band bajayega bhargav?
jaldi ud karna main wait karoongi!😊
😊bye luv you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Edited by cutiepooja - 16 years ago

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Riti

@-Reeti-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#853

Hello friends how r u all
I dont Think Any one wants to read this FF any More So I am goin To close It soon coz There is nothing in this FF .but I Promise That I will Start A New FF on LRL Concept So plzz CO opereate Take Care Bye
Riti😳

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fanatic 21

@fanatic 21

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#854

updt was very good.......👏

rn wer gr8 n so was der convo......👏

aalekh raj n nainas convo was too good ...also d convo of naina n aalekh wid cadets was awesome....

in btwn convos of deeya n raj n abhi n raj also sam n gunny wer very nice as well👏

i'm sad dat u r goin to finish dis good fic soon😭.....dont worry sab dheere dheere comments jarror karenge.....aur baaki u 've ur faithful readers to support u.........😊😊

waitin for ur next updt😛

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

#855

that was simply superb

Gunny aur Diya ka to ho gaya but what about Raj and Naina

i hope is baar inspection main Bhargav na aaye

plz continue soon

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pooja

@RVsPOOJA

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#856

kya di,update nahin kiya tumne ab tak?

Edited by cutiepooja - 16 years ago

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#857

A big sorry for replying so late...

The update was very nice..a lot has happened...

Raj comes to naina as he is disturbed by what he has just found out...after all who jab bhi pareshan hota hai to use naina hi yaad ati hai...Naina bhi raj ko aache se samaj ti...she knows that he is feeling guilty...

Raj aur naina dono ek dusre par sabse zyada bharosa karte hai...their bond is special.

It is good that gunny has spoken with sameer about his feelings..they both understand that they do not love each other...

Abhi is heart broken to find out that Deeya does not love him but i like the way in which he has taken this news...this way he will be able to move forward soon...

Deeya and Gunny finally confess their feelings to each other...i am waiting to see raj and naina do the same..

Alekh and naina handle the cadets tactfully...everyone is disappointed that they have to return to the academy so soon...lets hope that bhargav does not show up...

Please don't worry about the replies...i am sure that other are just busy...but i would love to read a new FF of yours..

please continue soon

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#858

Hello madam,

Finally ye topic mere aakhon k saamne aa hi gaya varna mai is ko dhoondh dhoondh kar pareshaan ho rahi thi.

Nice part.

Abhi ko lagta tha ki bahut acchi patang udata hai vo par humare Raj jee bhi kam nahi hain na us ki patang kaatne k liye accha kiya Deeya ko le aaya . Raj k dimaag ka bhi jawaab nahi hai maana padega.

Alekh aur Khushi (Roshini) bhi kamaal hain ek doosre se naraj bhi hote hain aur ek doosre se baat kiye bina reh bhi nahi sakte hain. Alekh bechara jaanta tha ki Khushi to baat karegi nahi to jab tak vo nahi bolne laga us k pet me dard ho raha tha aur jaise hi keh diya sab normal.

Gunny Deeya se pyaar karta hai tat is shocking to fir Sam k saath kya tha? Aur agar aisa hua to Abhi ka kya hoga, i fear?

update kariyoooooooo jaldi.

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 16 years ago