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Posted: 17 years ago
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😊😊guies an girls ye meri dosri ff hai mene jo pehle likha tha wo shayad acha nahin tha par soch rahin hun ke ye acha lagega

year-2008

month-april

day-7

a butful girl is sliiping on her bed like a child.

suddenly a knock on the door

are hai aap agaye naina uth na.

hi guies it is raj he is back b 4 1 week to kma as his previus post and naina is posted as the commander of 1 st year cadets

raj:nahin leftenant alek use sone dijiye aap bahar chaliye ap se kuch baat karni hai

alek:sir aap thik hai apun apun to soch bhi nahin sakta ki aap wapas agye ho apun baht khush hai sir aur ab Naina aap ko dekhegi to kudegi

hi end of part 1 kaisa laga

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Posted: 17 years ago
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good but toda clear kar k likho taaki pura samajh aa sake .ok 😉 😉 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow kamal update .. but plz yaar thoda bada update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was superb but i want a long one
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wow but pls toda bada aur explanative 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice, but pls, a longer update 😳
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gr8 but want longer update...........
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mindblowing.. 👏 👏 ......plzzzzzz update soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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naina:alec us waqt kaun knock kar raha tha jab me soi thi

a:wo koi nahin tha bas orderly tha

n:alek tu kahan pe tha

a:wo naye cadets ke sath ghoom ne gaya tha apun

n:acha agar maj nair pata laga na to

a:to kya ab apun ko is academy se nilkal ne ka dhamki to wo nahin dega .bas chilayega aur apna gala kharab karega😉 acha sun koi tujhse molna chata hai

n:kaun mujhse kaun milna cha raha hai

a:koi hai

n:kahan pe hai

a:capt Rajveer ke room me

n;what?tu uuse capt Rajveer ke room main kese bitha sakta hai .tu janta hai wo kamra sirf capt rajveer hai aur wahan koi aur nahin ja sakta.aur me us kamre kisi aur se nahin mil sakti

A:ab ab bitha to diya hai mil le na dubara nahin karunga

naina ati hai raj ke room me aur bina knock kiye andar jati hai

raj wahan pe mu us taraf karke khada hotahai to naina ko uski shakl dikhayi nahin deta

na:kaun hai aap

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Posted: 17 years ago
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n:ap ko sunai nahina diya ap ko kya kam hai mujhse?jo bhi puchna hai ap bahar chlke puchiye .ap is kamre main nahin rehe sakte.

r:kyon ye aap ka kamra hai

n:nahin par (naina ko awaz sna hua laga hai) nahin ye rajveer sir ka kmra hai to ap yahan se chalie

r:ab ye banda kaun hai

n:leasten me aap se tamis se bbat kar rahin hun to aap mere rajveer sir se tamis se pesh ayiye

r:kya me use tamis se pesh aun my foot

n:dekhiye main aap ko jaan se maaar dalungi

raj suddenly ghum jata hai aur naina ko uski apni ankhon par bharosa nahin hota

na:aap ap kese ap thik hai matlab

raj naina ke pas dhire dhire ata hai

r;han me thik hun aur puri tarh se thik hun aur tumne kya socha tha ki me mar gaya hun

n:sahtup me aap se kabhi bat nahin karungi

r:acha thodasa bhi nahin karogi

n:nahin karungi

aur use zor dar ka hug kar ti hai aur raj ahhhhhhh

kya hua oh my god ap ko chot ayi hai nahin naina wo bas

ap dikhyi ye me dress kar ti hun

r:nahin naina thik hai

n:ap chup rahi ye

ra:shirt utar ta hai

n;wid a cotton

r;ahhhhhhhhh aaaaaaaaa jal rahai nain

n:kya aap bache hain kya jal raha hai

r;acha to sirf bacho ko jal ta hai kya

n:nahina par ap to sipahi hai na to ap ko jal na nahin cha hi ye

naina tum baht baten kar ti ho aur dekho

meri cadet Naina 'ah' Sing ab leftenant matlab officer bhi ban gayi

n:aur is academy ka bst cadet bhi

r:kya tum ho best cade naina tum .oh my god idon b liv this

na:kyon me aap ko koi darpok lagti thi

ra:naina me aj baht khush hun tum soch bhi nahin sakti oh naina and he hugs her tightely and naina bhi dhire dhire uski bahon me kho jati hai

hai friends end of part 2 waiting 4 ur coment

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