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Posted: 16 years ago
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Raj aur kranti ke beech kisi baat pe jaghda ho gaya tha,wo dono ek doosre se baat nahi kar rahe the,aise hi kuch din beet chuke the,ek din subah jab raj court ke liye nikal chuka tha,tab mamaji ghar aaye.wo lovely ki shaadi ke liye sabhi ko bulane aaye the,shaadi ko abhi 10 din the par wo chahte the ki kranti unke saath chale,ek baar teeno betiyan ghar par saath hoti to achha hota,kuch dino ke liye hi sahi,gharwalon ne haan kar di,kranti chali jaati hai.Nirmal ghar aa chuki hoti hai,sanjay shaadi ke din hi ghar aayega.mamiji in dono shaadi se khush nahi thi,badi mushkil se wo dono ko bulane ke liye raazi hui. Raat ko ghar laute waqt raj ne soch liya tha ki aaj wo kranti ko mana lega,ghar aate hi usse pata lagta hai ki kranti 10 dino ke liye mamaji ke ghar gayi hai.raj ab pareshan hone lagta hai,ek to waise hi itne dino se baat nahi ki thi,ab 10 din kaise beetenge,main to 10 sec bhi usse dekhe bina nahi reh sakta. Idhar sanjay bhi nirmal ke a one se pareshan tha,uska bhi mann kisi kaam me nahi lag raha tha,do din kisi tarah gujarte hain ab to dono se raha nahi ja raha tha. Kranti bhi raj ke baare me soch rahi thi,ek taraf chinta ho rahi thi ki sab kaise kar rahe honge,doosri taraf gussa bhi aa raha tha ki ek baar poochna bhi jaroori nahi samjha mere baare me. Nirmal bhi sanjay se baat karna chah rahi thi par kaam ke karan mauka nahi mil raha tha. Raj ke kamre ki phone ki ghanti bajti hai,raj phone uthata hai R-hello kranti doosri taraf se aawaj aati hai,oye majnu main sanjay R-oh tum S-haan main,biwi ke khayalo me khoye hue ho R-nahi bas aise hi S-mujhse mat chupa ,tere jaisa mera bhi haal hai. R-kyon na hum unse milne chalen S-haan wo meri sasuma jo hamesha aag ugalne ke liye taiyar rehti hai unka kya?? R-to phir kuch sochen S-to phir chal ghar ke bahar aaja main gaadi lekar aata hoon R-itni raat ko???? S-arre tu aa na jaldi se,main phone rakh raha hoon. raj taiyar ho ke jaane lagta hai,hall me kullu ji akele baithe satranj khel rahe hote hain aur khud me hi gunguna rahe hote hain-Ek bangla bane nyara . R-bauji ab kaise jaun??? woh parde ke peeche chup jaata hai{they always played a imp. role in the show,remember😆😆}
Kullu-parde ke peeche kya kar raha hai puttar,ithe aaja tu,ithe
R-bauji woh ek case ki imp. file thi aur kuch unse jude saboot bhi,mujhe dhayan nahi aa raha ki maine unhe table pe hi chod diya ya phir almari me rakha hai,soch raha hoon ki ek baar dekh loon.
Kullu-koi gal nahi puttar,saboot agar table pe honge to kya hua,hai to tere apne daftar me,ek din saboot bahar rahenge to thand thodi hi lag jaani hai.
R-bauji bahut jaroori hain.
Kullu-achha to chal main bhi chalta hoon,main thodi khuli hawa me tahel lunga.
R-bauji aapki tabiyat kharab ho jaani hai.
Kullu-oye nahi puttar ,ek baar saboot ko dekh lunga,thodi baaten kar lunga to tabiyat apne aap changi ho jaani hai
R-bauji.......
Kullu-tune mujhe bewakoof samajh rakha hai,main tera baap hoon ,tu jo kar raha hai,mainu samajh nahi aa raha kya,ye kyun nahi kehta bahu se milne ja raha hoon.
Chaiji-aap dono abhi tak soye nahi kya???
Kullu-raj puttar ko jaroori case ke silsle me jaana hai,bada hi pareshan ho raha hai.
C- itni raat ko kahin nahin jaana hai,jo hoga subah dekh lena.
Raj se ab nahi raha ja raha tha.phone ki ghanti bajti hai,sanjay ne paas ke ghar se phone kiya tha.
R-hello
S-abe wahin se hello hello karega ya phir ghar se bahar bhi niklega,apni doosri shaadi ke liye taiyar ho raha hai kya,itni der to nirmal bhi nahi lagati.
R-chaiji main ja raha hoon,nahi to musibat ho jayegi
Kullu-haan puttar tu ja,aur ho sake to saboot saath hi le aana,saboot ke haathon ka khana khaye do din ho gaye
raj muskurata hai
C-achha to aapne usse kranti ke paas bheja hai,aane do usse phir batati hoon???
sanjay aur raj dono mamaji ke ghar ke paas pahuchte hain,gaadi thodi door pe khadi kar dete hain.
TO BE CONTINUED.................😃😉
Edited by meftal - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago
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good work!!! please continue sooooooon!!! :-)))
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow Mef.................its awesome dear👍🏼, very hilarious conversation ...................update d nxt part sooooooooooooooon...............jo bhi kaho humari MRD family ne tumme chhupe huye writer ko bahar nikala hain😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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2 good pl update soon
sweet love story
waiting
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very very sweet bechara raj kranti ke pyaar mein preshaan.....aur kranti😔.... very sweetly written my dear enjoyed the conversation... ......
Edited by sami01 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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@ greenday-thanx i will be writing it soon. @ dinky thanx ,but i am not writer at all @sasha thanx to u also @sami why r u unhappy with my kudi,she is so sweet,kitna khayal rakhti hai raj ka😆😉 well i loved ur picture collection especially last one,but i was unable to open the again for replying due to error report ,so i have done here only.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wow meftal...
Kisi ne sach he kaha...
chupke chupke aap ki kubiyaam bhi bahar a raha he...
I simply loved all conversation...Sanjay, Raj, Kullu and chaiji...
they way Sanjay said... Abe wahee se hello heloo karega...
and Kullu's.... thu mujche bewakoof samach rkha he.. meim thera baap hoo... Awsome....
waiting see the nxt part...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hayeeeeeeeeeeeee....................mef it was hilarious.............................
🤣🤣
bachara Raj........................kitne papad belne pad rahein kranti se milne ke liye.................
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and kullu ...he is so intelligent...........
he immediately senses something is fishy......................after all baap kiska hai..................................😆
loved the line......................saboot ke haathoon ka khana khaye kitne din ho gaye........................
waiting fot the next part........................
plz update soon .............

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx pennu and namita i am happy that u enjoyed the conversation.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sanjay ghar ko har taraf se dekh raha hota hai.

R-ab ander kaise jaana hoga

S- kuch nahi bas mughle azam ki banai is deewar ko paar kar upar tak jaana hoga.

R-teri tabiyat to theek hai na

S-mujhe dil ki bimari hai,tere paas koi ilaaz hai

R-pata nahi parjai ji tujh pagal ke saath rehti kaise hain.

S-ab chal nahi to yahin subah ho jayegi.

Dono ped ke sahare upar tak jaate hain.chat{terrace} ka ek khula bhaag tha jisse ghar ka aagan saaf dikhai deta hai,sabhi sone ki taiyari kar rahe the,nirmal ko aata dekh sanjay apni rumaal neeche gira deta hai,sanjay ka rumaal dekh nirmal chauk jaati hai,upar dekhti hai to sanjay tha,woh use upar aane ko kehta hai,nirmal chup kar upar aati hai.

N-sanjay tum yaham ma ne dekha to tum jaante ho na….

S-ek to main tumse milne is pyaar ki deewar ko chad ke aaya aur tum ho ki naaraj ho rahi ho.

N-arre jija ji

S-inhe bhi apni begum ki yaad aa rahi thi to ye bhi hamare saath upar tak aa gaye.

Raj sanjay ko ghoorta hai

S-dekho pyaar me inki aakhen kitni bai-badi ho gayi hai.

N-sanjay chup karo,tum kab sudhro ge,jija ji kranti ka karma neeche se daayin taraf hai,aap jaayen.

Raj chala jaata hai,who dono upar hi rehte hain.

Kranti khidki ke paas khadi ho kuch soch rahi thi tabhi darwaja khulta hai.

K-tum yahan kaise,mamiji ne dekha to nahi??

R-nahi dekha

K-par unke kamre se to har koi aata jaata dikhai deta hai

R-main chat se aaya

K-kya chat se ,tum pagal to nahi ho gaye,kuch ho jaata to,aisa bhi kyat ha jo chat se aana pada

R-woh chaiji ko tumhari chinta ho rahi thi,to mujhe dekhne ko bhej diya

K-achha….woh bhi chat se,dekh liya na ab jao

Kranti khidki ki taraf dekhne lagti hai,raj uske karib jaata hai,apna ek haath uski kamar pe rakhta,doosre haath se uske baalon ko sehlate hue ,kranti ke kaan me dheere se kehta hai-I am sorry.

K-jao mujhe tumse baat nahi karni hai

R-ab nahi ladunga

K-jhoote kahin ke

R-sachhi…….{kisses on her cheek}

K-dekho who chand kaise badalon ke peeche chup raha hai

R-mujhe bhi who chand ban jaane do jo tumhare pyaar ke badalon me kho jaana chahta hai

K-in phoolon ki khushbo kaise har taraf fehli hui hai

R-mujhe bhi woh phool ban jaane do,jo tumhe apne pyaar ki khushbo ka ehsaas kara sake.

K-ye thandi hawayen chu kar gujarti hain,to jaise samay ek pal ke liye ruk sa gaya ho,aur sab kuch kitna achha lagne lagta hai

R-mujhe bhi woh hawa ban jaane do,jo tumhare har dard ko tumse door le ja sake,aur tumhe har khushi de sake

Kuch pal ke liye har taraf khamoshi thi,dono ek doosre ki aakhon me dekh rahe the jaise ek doosre me kho jaana chahte the.

Tabhi lovely kranti ko bulati hai,raj darwaje ke peeche chup jaata hai

L-tum kisse talking talking kar rahi thi

K-kisse se to nahI

L-par maine listen kiya

K-tumhe yun hi laga hoga

L-mujhe watch karne do

Lovely ke ander aate hi,raj bahar chala jaata hai,lovely chali jaati hai,kranti bhi chat ki taraf jaati hai,Raj……………

Tabhi mamiji bhi neeche se aa rahi hoti hain-Nirmal arri kahan chali gayi

S-raj jaldi kar,sasuma aa rahi hain

N-sanjay jaldi jao

k-arre samhal kar jana

dono neeche jaane lagte hain

MAMIJI-kaun hai wahan

N-ma main hoon

MJI-itni raat gaye tum dono upar kya kar rahi ho

N-kuch nahi ma,main aur kranti purane din yaad kar rahe the

MJI-tum dono ko bhi na jaane bewaqt kya kya soojhta rehta hai,chal ke so jao

Mamiji chali jaati hain,nirmal kranti ke chehre pe alag hi khushi mehsoos karti hai,kranti raj jaate dekh rahi hoti hai,nirmal ko khushi thi ki kranti ki jindagi me bhi uska koi apna hai.

Raj ghar aata hai,kullu ji ne jagat kaka se keh rakha tha ki raj ke aane ki khabar unhe dede

J-malik chhote sahib aa gaye,malkin bade gusse me hain.

K-hmm jara ye jug ka paani bahar gira de

Jagat ji paani gira ke chale jaaten hain,

C-kahan gaya tha tu

R-chaiji bataya to tha

c-jhoot mat bol,jo sabot lene gaya thaw o nahi laya

tabhi upar ke kamre se aawaj aati hai

KULLU-arre yahan pe kisse ne paani kyun nahi rakha,kissi ko meri parwah kahan,ab is budhe ki sunta kaun hai

Madhu aur kewal unke kamre me daudte hue aate hain

M-kya hua bauji aapki tabiyat to theek hai

KUllu-ab tum dono kahan se aa gaye

Kewal-bauji aap itna chil-la jo rahe the

Kullu-oye tum dono ne mujhe koi chhota bachha samajh rakha hai,jo chil-la raha hai to chup karane chale aaya,ja ke so jao,baat karten hain.

C-ji aayi,ye bhi na,kab gussa ho jayen pata hi nahi lagta

R-thank god!!!chalo barrister raj,aaj to bauji ne bacha liya.

Ek bangla bane nyara……….

Raj muskurate hue apne kamre me chala jaata hai.

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