Written update: May 6th (Complete)

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Deepu is walking down a sidewalk and has flash backs of everyone shouting at him. Panchi apologizes to her dad in the car and he says he understand and tells her what happened is for the better and that they should be thankful of Jyoti for showing them the truth despite him being her brother. He says that she should not cry over Deepu because he is not worthy of her.

Everyone is crying at home and Dadi remembers how happy she was when Deepu was born and how sad she was when Jyoti was and asks for forgiveness from Kamal because of all the insults she has thrown his way because of his daughters.

Deepu walks alone in the street at night having flash backs again. At home Padma and Kamal are lying in bed and just stare into nothing when Sudha brings food. She asks them to eat but they don't respond and she leaves the food on the side and then leaves the room. Padma looks at the food and remembers calling Deepu when a rishta came for Jyoti to get him to mess it up and remembers him saying he doesn't like doing it and she says she does it for them. She starts to cry very loudly and kamal tries to comfort her but she just cries and he closes his eyes. Deepu is sitting on the street and then Sudha is shown having flashbacks and then looks at an engineering book. Deepu is shown on the street again. Panchi is in her room and opens a card he gave her before throwing all the things her gave her on the floor and they show Deepu again.

In the morning Sudha tries to get Jyoti to eat or drink tea but she says no so she gets her a tiffin and tells her to eat it on time. Jyoti just stares at her with tears in her eyes and Sudha tries to comfort her with tears in her eyes as well but Jyoti just turns and leaves.

Deepu walks along the street and sees his friends and tells them everything and one of them says that his family must be less angry now and then says he sees Jyoti. She stops he scooter but when Deepu folds his hands for forgiveness she drives away. The other two friends leave Deepu even when the other friend tries to stop them. The friend says Deepu can stay with him until his family comes to get him in a few days.

At the orphanage jyoti comes in and has flashbacks. Uncle walks in and asks if she is ok but she says she is fine and he says that it doesn't seem like it. Sachin walks by and pauses at the window and listens. Uncle asks again and she says that it is because it is very hot outside. Uncle says he doesn't know if he has a right to ask but he says that sadness is better dealt with when shared and she says that she has lost and tells him about Deepu. Sachin looks sad and angry. She says that she doesn't know how her parents will deal with this and wonders why all this is happening to her because first it was her little sister and now her brother. Jyoti runs out crying past Sachin.

Jyoti is crying outside, Sachin gives her a handkerchief and then tells her he has heard everything because of his heightened senses. He says everyone has problems but some break down and some face them with strength. He says that she doesn't seem weak so why is she crying. He says she doesn't look good crying and that she looks good angry and giving lectures. Jyoti just stares at him and smiles and he says a small smile has made her face so much better looking. She says they should so work smiling and gets up and walks away. Sachin stands and says when he feels all the wrongs in the world his problem doesn't seem to big.

At night, Jyoti comes home and Sudha asks her if she wants tea and looks in Jyoti's tiffin which is full but Jyoti says no. Sudha tells her that she should eat and Jyoti says she doesn't feel like it. Sudha says no one does and that padma hasn't eaten. Jyoti asks if she hasn't eaten all day and Sudha says she hasn't eaten since the night before. Jyoti tells her to get a thali. They both go into padma's room and Jyoti tries to get her to eat but she pushes her hand away. Jyoti says she knows that without Deepu she wont be able to eat just like them but she must because they cant stay hungry forever and tries to feed her again but she pushes her hand away again. Jyoti angrily says that if this is the case they should have not kicked deepu out and she is going to find him but Padma grabs her hand to stop her. She tries to sit up weakly and jyoti helps her. Padma then eats a bite with shaking hands. The whole time Sudha watches, crying. Padma slowly with great difficulty and then says that she would be able to swallow even if her comes and starts to cry with Jyoti holding her with Jyoti crying as well.

Deepu goes to his friends house and knocks. His friend says he cant help him because everyone has found out about him and his parents have told him not to be friends with Deepu anymore. Deepu leaves and roams the street and then stares at a building.

Preview: Deepu buys two samosa's outside his house and Sudha sees him. He sits to eat and then decides to go wash his hands and leave his food there. A dog comes and eats his samosas when he is gone.

Edited by sakuraa - 16 years ago


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