Na jane mere dil ko(ff) sept 13, part41pg 41

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😊 I am really looking forward to writing njmdk because it connects with my old ff. I really hope you lot, like it and enjoy reading it as much as I will writing it.

Sagar: Divya and Amar's nephew. 21 and is attending University in India for a masters degree in buisness. He is a very calm person and doesn't like to start a fight with anyone, but his pet peeve is people who talk too much and are annoying. His closest friend's name is Jay and he has a cousin named Diya. He doesn't have any parents because they had a car accident.
Vidya: Waiting for her prince charming......20 years old and is also attending Uni. She is a very loud, annoying and crazy person. She's basically a fighter, anyone who starts a fight, she'll throw one at their face. She has one major pet peeve people who think they are all that and smartical. She loves fairytales like a little girl and is obsessed with shah rukh khan and his movie- Dilwale Dulhania le jayenge. She imagines herself as Simran waiting for her Raj. (sigh doesn't everyone?) Best friends with Diya and lives with her since her parents live in the UK. She has an older brother 22 years old names Jay.
Diya: Sweet, innocent and very caring. She is Sagar's cousin, she is 20 years old and is also attending Uni. She is very soft spoken and is a very good loyal friend although she is very mischevious. Her best friend is Vidya. both of them are opposites that cool each other off. She has a small crush on Vidya's older brother Jay, but isn't quite sure of what she feels is right or wrong.
Jay: Very loud-just like his sister. He is 22 years old and is just finishing his degree. He lives in Diya's house since Vidya lives there. He is very cunning and mysterious as well one second he's right beside you the other he's right in front of you. He is a sports maniac.
Part 1
No pov
A group of people are laughing and enjoying their time around in a circle, two elderly people-amar, divya and 4 youngsters-Sagar, Vidya, Jay and Diya. They are all playing truth or dare
Diya: okay papa, your turn, truth or dare?
Amar: hmm let's see truth
Diya:who is the best jodi in this room
Amar: that is very simple Diya beti, Sagar and Vidya
Sagar and Vidya's heads shot up to look at each other, right then they looked away. But then Vidya's big mouth came in the way
Vidya: we aren't a couple uncle!!! Why don't you say Jay and Diya? Thats not fair!
Sagar got annoyed as usual Vidya's big mouth got to its toll.
Sagar: Vidya be quiet
Divya: no, no whats this- Jay and Diya, is this the truth
Vidya smiled and whistled.
Diya snapped her hand on her mouth to stop more commotion.
Diya: no, ma you know I'm not like that, we're just good buddies, and if I ever do like someone I would tell you.
Divya smiled at her daughters simplicity.
Amar: lets continue with the game then, I pick Sagar, truth or dare
Sagar: truth
Vidya: oh come on man, you can't even take a dare? Sagar do dare. Please for me? Be a man! Please?
Divya pouted, Sagar looked at her confused
Sagar: I would do nothing for you can't you wait your turn. Please chacha ji lets continue and no more disruptions
sagar said eyeing Vidya
Amar: okay okay beta, name one thing about Vidya that you cannot stand
Sagar: I don't know chacha theres too many things
Vidya looked at him furious
Vidya: nai mein tho theek hoh, no need to consider my feelings
Sagar: you have feelings, mrs. Simran?
Sagar asked surprised
Vidya: oye don't you say anything and don't you go to my prince charming!
Sagar: Her prince charming
Vidya looked confused
Sagar rolled his eyes
Sagar: the one thing I hate the most about you is your prince charming- unreal
Right then Vidya got up
Vidya: don'y you say anything about my Raj!
Sagar got up as well
Sagar: please calm down! I'm just saying-
Sagar was cut off by Divya-
Divya: dekho the two of them have started again.
Sagar and Vidya sat down
Vidya:Sorry aunty ji,
Sagar: okay I pick Vidya truth or dare
Vidya: Thats easy Dare!
Vidya said with big bold eyes
Sagar sat there thinking.................
Sagar: I dare you too....tooo go to sleep...I don't want to play this game anymore!
Vidya gasped
Vidya: is it because I'm playing
Sagar: no now go do your dare.
Vidya: okiie doo
Vidya said as she skipped to her bedroom
Everyone starts laughing
Scene fades
I hope you liked it!
Comment and critcize
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wooo...great start..........its very interesting....do continue soon.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yes it was really good
but it had some of the other part in HDDCS
please continue
it was a great start
you said they are adults
well they don't act like it!
plz cont.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Loved the start!! Please continue soon!!
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Fabulous start, Pyiyanka Di!!! It's really good! Keep up the great work and plz continue soon...
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I had a really good response to the first part..yay!
Part 2
In the Morning no POV
Divya is walking to Vidya's room. She goes in and see's that she is asleep, she see's a little diary book thing held across her chest while she was sleeping. She kisses her forehead and takes it out of her hands and puts it on the nightstand nearby. "Vidya, wake up, you;re going to be late for University, you need to get up early, you have morning classes and Sagar is going to have to take you and he said if you don't get up on time and isn't down by the car in 20 minutes he is going to leave" Divya says. Right then Vidya's eyes pop oped, she pulls the covers off of her. " stupid, what does he think of himself" Vidya says to herself. She see's Divya there and takess her blessing and right away runs to her closet throwing out clothes here and there. "I need something to wear!" Vidya said. "Aunty ji take something out for me, alright" Vidya said, scurring to her bathroom. She came back whilst brushing her teeth and trying to comb her hair at the same time. Divya sat Vidya down and started combing her hair. " Here let me" Divya said. Vidya smiled. " aunty ji I never thought of it untill now, can I call you mama, I mean you know mama and papa are abroad and all" Vidya said. Divya smiled and kissed her forhead"okay now spit and change your clothes, today don't come home for lunch and don't eat the stinky cafeteria food go out with Sagar okay" Divya said. Vidya's eyes went wide"do you want me to die, I won't come out alive, he'll eat me, you saw yesterday the way he was looking at me as if he was going to eat me up in one bite, what if at lunch he makes me his lunch" Vidya said panicking. "don't worry, beta out of all things he's not a monster" Divya said. "are you sure" Vidya said. "yes now change" Divya said. She went out of the room laughing."Pagli" Divya whispered to herself.
Vidya changed and ran all the way outside. She saw Sagar sitting in his car reading a book. " typical" Vidya whispered to herself entering the car. "hey" Vidya said. Sagar didn't even look up and waved a hand at her. "where's Jay and Diya? They aren't coming? When are they coming?" Vidya asked. Sagar sighed"here we go again" he whispered to himself. "relax Vidya, they don't have classes today and Jay doesn't need to attend anymore he'd done his exams he just needs his results." Sagar said. "Oooooooh that explains so much!" Vidya said. "yes vidya it does" Sagar said sarcastically. He started the car and started driving. Vidya being herself started looking through things. She went through a cuboard at the front, she opened it and picked something out. "eww boxers, you keep this in your car?" Vidya said. "Vidya we live in Mumbai where there are lots of beaches and I like to swim"Sagar said annoyed. "put it back and stay seated properly" Sagar said. "okay chillax" Vidya said. "is that a new word chillax?" Sagar asked annoyed and mad. "why are you so mad at me constinly I don't understand, what did I ever do to you, I;m a lovely girl!" Vidya said. " I don't know" Sagar said. "so you hate me for no reason" Vidya said blankly. Sagar sighed" I don't hate you, it's just you get annoying sometimes, me and you are like wind and water" Sagar said. "opposites" Sagar said. Vidya sat there thinking then right away she started changing channels. "see thats what I mean Vidya" Sagar said. " Okay but I don't get it opposites attract, I always try to be friendly to you yet you don;t want to be my friend? Thats lame and rude. I mean look it at it this way. A polar bear is hungry so a grizzly bear goes to him and offers him some delicous food but he won't accept." Vidya said. "nice analogy, what are you callimg me a polar bear?" Sagar asked smiling laughing for the first time with Vidya. "well I called myself a grizzly bear didn't I, so whats the big deal?" Vidya said. "oh"Sagar said rolling his eyes. "still why don't you want to be my friend?" Vidya asked again. " I just don't understand you and being a friend is understanding someone" Sagar spoke softly. "yeal well you haven't ever tried understanding me but yet I have so it means I'm your friend but your not mine" Vidya said. "stop making things complicated Vidya" Sagar sighed. "how mcuh do you want to understand me, we've been living under the same roof for 1 1/2 years" Vidya said. "see your not understanding" Sagar said kind of rudely. "yeah well let me understand, if you don't let me I'll never understand!" Vidya said rudely. " Look I don't believe in meeting someone then saying bye and after Uni me and you are going our different ways so why the hurt in between. Thats just why I don't want to be your friend or anybody's friend for that matter. It hurts when you get close and have to let go" Sagar said. "well then you're going to be a loner, because people come and go out of your life, and friends help you, they don't hold you back. Like Diya she helped me when I needed a place to stay in Mumbai." Vidya said. "well I could care less alright" Sagar said as he entered the University's parking lot. He parked the car and both of them got out of the Car, Vidya slamming it. "don't slam the car" Sagar said. "well you can be a car's friend that won;t last that long yet you won't be mine" Vidya said as she passed by him rudely giving him a death glare.
Precap: Vidya is yelling at someone named Shreyas and trying to punch them and Sagar see's.
Thats all for today, hope you liked it. Comment and criticize.🤓
Edited by loveisreal222 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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yay!!!!!!!!!!!! you updated
i didn't really noctice because i kept looking at the page number
i bet vidya is going to yell at the person for sagar😆
great
update
continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and i mean real soon
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Wonderful update, Priyanka Di! It's really good!!!! Keep up the fantastic work and plz continue soon....
Edited by sv_4eva - 16 years ago
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Lovely update Priyanka...I really love the way SV seem to be fighting all the time...but of course...it'll turn to love soon...right?? Please continue soon!!
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Okay I've been getting a lovely response by everyone who is reading.

Part 3 No Pov Sagar was sitting down by the water fountain inside the school(crazy isn't it?) He was reading a text book for political science. Suddenly he heard shouting and screaming. He saw a big crowd gathering. He was curious so he asked a girl what was happening.
Sagar:excuse me, whats going on?
The girl shrugged her shoulders, than he heard a familiar voice.
girl: Stupid, idiot, you try to call me b**** again, try.
He sighed and pushed through the crowd and saw none other than Vidya herself.
Vidya looked and saw Sagar.
Sagar: what happened?
Vidya: Well I was just going-
Vidya got cut off by the boy she was fighting with, and he was muscular.
Boy: she is a liar, she was walking and then my hand just accidently rubbed by her bum, so she slapped me and I called her a b****
Vidya: Liar, you touched me on purpose
Sagar: Why do you always have to pick fights Vidya, for goodness sakes your an adult
Vidya: I know and an Adult would do what I would do.
Vidya looked at the boy and she tried punching him and he grabbed her arm and started twisting it. Sagar saw he was hurting her and that his intentions were bad.
Amar: let go of her!
boy: what do you want punk? Do you want to fight.
The boy let go of Vidya and started fuming anger
Vidya; why are you getting in the middle of this Sagar, don't you have to read books or something.
Sagar: Shut up Vidya, let me handle this.
The boy got closer and hit Sagar.
Boy: I didn;t know Sagar felt for his b****, look I;m Sagar and I love Vidya! Isn't she your b****?Sagar got angry as he called her names so he punched him right in the gut. Then some girl came and told him to stop and he left. The crowd dissapeared and the only 3 people that were left was Sagar, Vidya and the Silence. Vidya saw that Sagar was hurt on his arm. She walked to him and picked up his arm. Sagar looked confused.
Vidya: It looks like it hurt, thank you Sagar but next time please don't come inbetween a fight, you're only going to get hurt and only friends get hurt for friends, and clearly you're not my friend so please next time don't interfere
Sagar looked kind of hurt at her words. But isn't this something he wanted.
Sagar: you could've gotten hurt.
Vidya: so?
Sagar: so? what do you mean so, so it's alright if her hurt you?
Vidya: Why are you all up and in my buisness, I said thank you. Whats wrong
Sagar: Can't I worry for you?
Vidya looked away.
Vidya: look you don't need to do me any favors.
Sagar: Oh so it's alright if he touches you, next time I won't stop him, then what are you going to do?
Vidya: there isn't going to be a next time.
Sagar rolled his eyes.He looked at his watch. He took Vidya's arm and started walking with her.
Vidya was confused and surprised.
Vidya: where are you taking me?
Vidya asked, she kept asking and asking. He took her outside and let go of her arm. She spun around and landed on his chest. She stayed like that for a while before realizing what position they were in.
Sagar: get in the car
Vidya got more confused
Vidya stomped her feet and replied
Vidya: no, tell me where you're taking me.
Sagar picked her up wedding style and put her in the car.
Vidya: what on earth, that wasn't fair
Sagar got in from the other side.
Sagar: Lunch
Vidya: oh yeah.....
Precap: Food Fight!!!!

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