FF:kaisay mujhay tum mil gaien/pt 40-pg 63New

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Note:hi all im starting this new FF called kaisay mujhay .........before writing anything else let me tell u something i've never written anything else like this n totally inexperiece in writing.If u people dont like this do tell me without any hesitation.Im very much confused that should i write this or not?but gathered all my courages n starting it.inspirations r all IF girls.

It is started after that rain episode ends coz on that day i strongly felt that happiness is much more required in mahl not only for 1 or2 days but for long.I dont allow those witches to enter in mahal just after my YuRa finished that lovely song.
Plz ignore typos and some words would b used in urdu while quoting dialogues coz my native lang is urdu.Hindi is bit harder 4 me to written so plz i apologize.If u wont undrstd the word do tell me i ll give u trans in english.

Kaisay Mujhay Tum Mil Gaien

Next morning starts with the chirping of birds.Sunlight enters in the room of Rani and Yudishter.The essence of familiar fragrance compelled him to woke up.He slightly opened his eyes but couldn't be able to see.he felt surprise but suddenly smiled that Rani's hair had covered all his face and the fragrance of it made him ecstasic.He gently took her hairs in his hands and smelled it again,the softness of her hair made his heart melted.He saw on her face and his sight refused to turn back.The expressions on Rani's face were so cute as she was looking adorable.Yudi's memories has turned back at that morning when they were alone in hut n he got hurt.He suddenly remembered that moment when he opened his eyes and saw a fairy was sleeping beside his bed with a childish smile on her face and how he was mesmerized n how pretty she was looking that day in her pink chiffon shirt dupatta and golden chooridaar.After seeing her some beautiful words automatically came in Yudi's mind,he smiled n thought

chehray pay mere zulf ko phailao kisi din

kya roz garajtay ho baras jao kisi din

razon ki tarah utro mere dil main kisi shab

dastak pay mere haath ki khul jao kisi din

pairon(trees)ki tarah husn ki baarish main naha loon

badal ki tarah jhoom k ghar ao kisi din

khushboo ki tarah guzro mere dil ki gali say

pholon ki tarah mujh p bikhar jao kisi din

guzrain jo mere ghar s to ruk jain sitaray

is tarah mere raat ko chamkao kisi din

main apni har ek saans usi raat ko dai don

sar rakh kay mere seenay p sojao kisi din

he smiled again and gently caressed her cheeks n said

''aap aj bhi us din ki tarah buhat khobsurat lagrahi hai n rani aur aj bhi ap kay chehray pay sotay huay bachon ki tarah maasoomiat hai''
''sach kuwarji''

the melodious voice whispered in yudi's ear and he surprised to see that rani's eyes were closed n cute smile was stuck on her face.

''rani aap jaag rahi hain kab say humain to pata hi nahin chala''

she slowly opened her eyes and said shyly

''ji kuwarji hum tab jagay jab aap humaray balon ko apnay hath meleke apnay chehray p phela rahay thay to humari aankh khul gai''
''oh rani aap kay baal kya khich gai thay aap ko dard to nahi horaha, humain pata hi nahin chala ap kay balon main say itni bheeni khushboo arahi thi k hum apnay aap ko rok nahi pai.he asked her worriedly.
''humain aisa nahin karna chahiye tha aap ko takleef hui aur app ki ankh khul gai humain maaf kardijj........rani quickly placed her fingeron his lips n said

''nahin kuwarji yeh aap kya keh rahay hain bulk hum to aap ki awaz sun k khush horahay tyay k aap hum say itna pyaar kartay hain.kya jab hum sorahay hotaiy hain tab aap hamesha humari aisay hi tareef karty hain?
yudi smiled mischiviously n said

''nahin hum hamesha aap ki tareef nahin kartay bulkay kabhi kabhi to aap ko pyaar bhi kartay hain.Aaisayyy..''he tried to came closer to her cheeks but she slapped his arm slightly n said shyly ''kunwarji''

he said ''kya kunwarji''

''aap bhi naa''

''kya hum bhi naa''

''ab aap nay sawal pocha hai to humain jawab dainy dejiay na''
he holds her hand and gently pressed his lips against her cheeks
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THAK.....THAK.....THAK

their cute moment was interrupted by the servants knock at the door.she told them that RS n CR is witing 4 all n will reach at the dining hall in 15 min.rani quickly wanted to got off the bed bt yudi hold her hand tightly.she gave him a pleased look. he smiled and left her hand n said''ok jaiye kya yaad karaingi laadli bari bahurani sahiba''she felt shy to hear this laadli bari bahurani .before entering to washroom she said naughtily''koi baat nahi kuwarji abhi thori dair pehlay hum laadli patni thay ab laadli bahu sahi kyun??
and to hear this yudi put his hand on his heart n said''haiii...abhi aap nay saray laad uthanay kab diay''.she
smiled back n entered into washroom.
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All family members were sitting on the dining table.suddenly raja sahab said to all that i've a surprise 4bari bahurani.Hum say kuwar Yudishter ney un ke liye kuch maanga hai!!!



note. poem in this ff is not written by me.this is written by famous urdu poet.i just quoted it here

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DETAIL OF ALL PARTS:

PART PAGE #
1 (after rain episode) 😛 1
2 (at dining table) 😆 1
3 (Kali and NISHA+YURA) 😆 4
4 ( YuRa + Nisha+ RuMi)😃 5
5 ( Nisha) 😳 6
6 (Tulips wala) 😛 7
7 (YuRa in village) 😉 9
8 ( Rani's home) 😆 10
9 (YuRa in Car) 😳 12
10 (Farm house) ☺️ 13
11 ( First morning at farm house) ☺️ 16
12 (swing wala) 😛 17
13 (apple plucking) 😳 😛 19
14 (Water fall) 😳 21
15 (Shirtless Yudi) 😆 22
16 (Horse riding) 😛 23
17 (YuRa retuned at their room) 😳 25
18 (mobile vibration wala ) 😆 26
19 (YuRa in room) 😳 27
20 (Hut) ☺️ 28
21 ( Rani in pain) 30
22 (Bhutta part) 😛 32
23 Mango wala ) 😛 😉 34
24 (Cycle) 😛 😆 36
25 (Garden + Hut) 😳 😳 38
26 ( stolen power cut idea)😈 🤣 40

27/ 28 ( Yudi's Birthday) 😳 😳 😳 42 /43

29 ( Birthday celebration ) 🥳 45

30 ( YuRa in Room ) ☺️ 48

31 ( Terrace ) 😍 49

32 ( bangles ) 😃 51

33 ( Dandiya ) 52

34 ( Restaurant ) 😛 53

35 (After having dinner,returned at farmhouse) ❤️ 55

36 (Next morning in room )😳 56

37 ( Rani pretends that she is going to her mayka)😉😆 58

38 (Moonlight ) 😳 60

39 ( Naughty him and she forcefully made him asleep)😛 61

40 ( swimming pool )😳 63
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bsingapury thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it is lovely dear it is really lovely.........and you know what i like most........you gave credit to urdu poet for his creation .........and that's the thing shows your truthfulness and i am really impressed with that.....wonderful
keep it up and keep writing
and i fyou dont't mind i have suggestion for you use little bigger fonts and seperate dialogue lines like sentenses it will be easy to read......i hope you won't feel bad my saying to u about it......
and about scene in theri room i really loved it........keep it up and keep writing i am really proud of our forum who is blessed with all such creative people in all different area.........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Another FF!!!!...Oh I'll have to keep logging to read...One genuine request...please dont leave any cliff-hangers😉!! Meri toh saanse atak jaati hain cliff hangers se!!!
I loved your poems😃...please do continue...Its just awesome👍🏼!!! Another talent in our forum👏⭐️!!!
Edited by rosh.88 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Keep it up Faiza! It was lovely to read......a suggestion...pls give some space between the dialogues....otherwise it gets a bit confusing to read...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow it is amazing plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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THANK U ALL 4 UR SUPPORT
BEENA;dear i wont mind any suggestion n i liked the way u gave me those n about giving credit to original poet it was his right.thnks 4 showing ur emotions n encouragement.
ROSH;THANKKKKKS dear.and about this cliff hanger i 've learnt it 4m RKAB creatives😉 dont worry after these cliffhangers u will alwayz get happy moments😊again thnks 4 the poems
ANSHU;THNKS i'll keep ur suggestion in mind
SADIA;thankkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkk u .i'll continue it 4 sure😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Faiza,
I really enjoyed your FF. These days that's all I can do because I can't stand the current track of RKAB. 😊 Very romantic.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 2
R
ani looked surprise to hear that n said ''kya surprise pitaji''RS said yeh to aapko kuwar yudi hi bataingay''
CR said''lekin aap to keh rahay thay k kuwar yudi nay aap say kuch maanga hai''
RS smiled n said''ok hum surprise khatam kartay hain kuwar aap sab ko bata dejiye''
''chotimaa hum rani ko apnay saath 15 days kay liye apnay farm huse p lejana chahtay hain.pichlay dino hum sab k saath inna bara haadsa hogaya aur hamari wajah say raani ko itni takleef uthani pari is liye hum kuch dino k liye unko is environment s door lejana chahtay hain''
he added that even doc has said that she is medically fit n i want to eradicate her physicl n mental stress.
CRsmiled to hear this n said kuwar u have stolen my words i wanted 2 send her village so she could meet her family but ur thought r more caring.
so u should go with her to village b4 reaching farmhouse'
''ji chotimaa''he said obediently
yudi hold rani's hand under the tablen chewed his lips corner to hide the smile.
rani widened her eyes n whispered''haath choriye kunwwarji sab dikhlaingay''
he slightly nodded negatively.
saksh saw all this as he was sitting besides him.he cleared his throat n said ''kya hua kuwarji kya breahfast main mirchain hain jo ap nay apna haath khanay say rok liya aur raaniji ko daikhiye unka mun bhi laal horaha hai unhain paani dejiye na''
yudi quickly left her hand n coughed''haan haan mirchain hain''
all were surprised n nikki said mirchainnn???
saksh said nothing nikkiji it was our private conversation n gave mischiveous look 2 yudi.
in the meantime yudi got his confidence back n said 2 RS''i said something else to u pitaji?''
RS smiled n said yes kunwar said that after all these circumstances we all suffered but nikki n saksh were newly married n they didnt get their enough time 2 enjoy so he finally decided that they r going with them 4 their honeymoon.
saksh was really surprised to hear this n said''lekin mahal main itna kaam.........''byt yudi stopped him n said''no arguement.this is ur wedding gift n many more surprises r waiting 4 u so b ready friend!!!''
to hear this saksh smiled n looked at nikki.she felt shy to heard all this.
then R BHOOMI abruptly said''yeh kyaa baat hui pitaji aap sab ko to bhej rahay hain hamain bhi rudrji k saath honeymoon p jana tha hum bhi to aj tak nahin gayee kyun rudr hum theek keh rah.........''n when she looked at all they all were trying to hide their smile except rudr whose mouth was opened with surprise like ohhh....
To see all this she felt shy n quickly left her chair n ran towards the stairs.
they all laughed n rudr said embarassingly''humaray liye upar walay nay alag hi piece chuna hai''
n to heard this they all were😆


part 3 on pge 4

Edited by Faiza_sam - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Faiza...this is short, sweet and cute!! I loved it.....Bhoomi cannot keep her mouth shut right? good going once again😃

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Posted: 16 years ago
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LMAO!!! I love the ending!!! the last line by Rudr was amazing!

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