Hum sab ki dil ki halat - Page 2

Aap ki kavita too good ,kya baat hai ,

har ek word ,express karta mere dil ke haatal hai,

sacha kahan hai aap ne ,

MRD ke absence mein ,Forum ka hi saath hai.

missing MRD.

Originally posted by: sasha722

Bonai badi sunder si kavita
sab ke dil ki baat kar di
we r also waiting when they hit
but I yet wait 4 ur short story
woh mind ko refresh ho jata hai
reading about their character I feel
so near 2 them

Thanks Sasha for liking the poem and sorry for replying so late. short story 😕 will try definitely asap 😃.
kam ke mare meri jaan ja rahi hai.

Originally posted by: ranjnanarang

Very well written Bonai.

I think all of us are missing mrd a lot

yeah we all r missing MRD like anything 😭. thanks fr ur comment

Originally posted by: namita25

well said bonai..............
you know we all are waiting like anything to see them once again.........................
I really miss my MRD..................

abhi to sirf ek hi mahina hi hua hai, thora intejar to karni paregi. we all r now waiting & waiting 😃 and watching the mixes......... Thanks u like my poem.

Originally posted by: luv_guru

Aap ki kavita too good ,kya baat hai ,

har ek word ,express karta mere dil ke haatal hai,

sacha kahan hai aap ne ,

MRD ke absence mein ,Forum ka hi saath hai.

missing MRD.

wah wah apne bhi rhyme me bahat khub tarif ki hai, post MRD, yes very true forum ka hi sahara hai. thanks fr ur comment and sorry for replying so late.

As usual you wrote your haatal(our haalat) in a very cool way...

Originally posted by: pennu

As usual you wrote your haatal(our haalat) in a very cool way...

I simply loves to go thru your poems...

all of them soo simple and so humble....

I just gave a big sigh after reading your poem...

well I am not at all good at writing peomss..

so let me write a song...

"Ek haseena(Kranti) the.....

Ek diwaana(Rajveer) tha....

Kya serial... kya mrd...

kyaaaa zamaanaaa thaaaa......."