Hum sab ki dil ki halat

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Kaise likhhe apni dil ki baat

Jo beyaan kare abhi ke halat

Kabu me nehi hai jasbaat

Jane kab hogi fir GP se mulaquaat

Ek hi hai filhal sahara

Pyara MRD forum hamara

Sab ko hai yeah bahat payara

Jasie hamari ankho ka ho tara

Suna suna hai lagta

Raat 9:30 hai jab bajta

Dil se MRD ka kheyal nehi hai mitta

Keya kare RK ka jadu sar charke hai bolta

Abhi tak sab ne kaushish ki hai puri

Ta ke chalti rahe forum hamari

Aage bhi rakhenge apni apni kausish jari

Jaha tak ho sake nibhayenge jimmedari

FFs ke andaaz e beyaan keya kehna

Shukriya nehi para humko RK ko bhulna

Ek naya post tha mujhe kholna

Likh diya rhyme me jo tha bolna

Keya kare naya post ke liye kuch aur topic nehi mila, to active rahne ke liye yeah likh dala. Hope u all will like it. Love u all.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Wah wah wah.👏 👏 👏......kya baat hai
Ek hi hai filhal sahara

Pyara MRD forum hamara

Sab ko hai yeah bahat payara

Jasie hamari ankho ka ho tara bilkul sahi bonai

Abhi tak sab ne kaushish ki hai puri

Ta ke chalti rahe forum hamari

Aage bhi rakhenge apni apni kausish jari

Jaha tak ho sake nibhayenge jimmedari puri honesty ke saath

These two stanza are my favourite. very well written bonai.⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
keep it up 👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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well written as always , i have heard songs u suggested and am working on ur task too will come back to comemnt in detail and to full fill my zimedari..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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tussi kamaal kar ditta yaara..............

maza aa gaya sach mein ek ek baat hamare dil ke haalat bayan karti hai
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks Dinky u like the poem. to keep the forum active we all r trying what we could do. I saw ur poem, will comment on that on ur post.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sami01

well written as always , i have heard songs u suggested and am working on ur task too will come back to comemnt in detail and to full fill my zimedari..



Thank u ji. Did u like the songs thora thora? maine to requests ke flood laga rakhha hai aap ke paas kaunsa wala task u r working on? nevermind aap to jo bhi karoge achha hi hoga, take ur time and yes true zimedari to nibhani paregi bhai..........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: akashruti12

tussi kamaal kar ditta yaara..............

maza aa gaya sach mein ek ek baat hamare dil ke haalat bayan karti hai



main bhi khush hu aap ko yeah par ke maza aaya.

hum sab pagalo ki ek se hi halat hai abhi.
milegi unki jhalak hum e jaroor kabhi na kabhi
Thanks for ur comment.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Bonai badi sunder si kavita
sab ke dil ki baat kar di
we r also waiting when they hit
but I yet wait 4 ur short story
woh mind ko refresh ho jata hai
reading about their character I feel
so near 2 them
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very well written Bonai.
I think all of us are missing mrd a lot
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Posted: 16 years ago
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well said bonai..............
you know we all are waiting like anything to see them once again.........................
I really miss my MRD..................

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