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Posted: 16 years ago
awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww so cuuuuuuuuuuuute.. i just loved it how she hugged rajat 😳.. sooo ccute.. gr8 the problem ended faster then it began 😆 .. loveddd it.. continue soon😛
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Posted: 16 years ago

WwaaWW so nice *Big smile*

Gr8 done ...I liked it so *CLAP*

Thank you Mahi :)

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Posted: 16 years ago
hi guys! my dear Fan Fic readers love u all
well u all know im back know. as i told u all that i was in backhome and got married so know im back and i will continue writing my fan fic :)
so here u go with the next part :)
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Part 62
Poonam has spent a very good day with Mansi,. They went to shopping, eating ice cream. they just had great time like always. Poonam comes back with little shopping bags at home. there she has bought a best friend bracelet for her and Rajat. When she scomes home all boys are sitting in front of TV. Pooja is in her room. the adults are sitting out in the graden and having chit chat
Poonam: hi guys!!!!
all: hi....
Rajat: how was ur day?
POonam: fantastic
Rajat: happy 2 know... =)
POonam: yup... where is Pooja di?
Mannu: upstairs
Poonam: okay thnx c ya...
Poonam goes upstairs to Pooja di. Pooja is calling with Komal her best friend. she talks with her abt the situation on the wedding last days
Pooja: hmmm... i mean i cant understand this guy! such a looser.... ya im 100% sure that he knows what i want know.... im gonna 2 leave him... no not know but after when i will come back to frankfurt... he still giving me miscalls SMS's weird guy! aunty knows very well what's my nxt plan know and even my parents know that... ya... thnx for being there girl i was so depressed ... okay okay sorryy lolz... love u bye bye
Poonam: hi di
Pooja: hi sis what's up u look very happy
Poonam: ya its qauz of Rajat... i had a fantastic with Mansi u know abt last night
Pooja: hmmmmmm qauz of Rajat hahah im very happy 2 know that =)
Poonam: so... what's up?
Pooja: nothing much i was calling to Komal ...
Poonam: cheer up!
Pooja: yup... ohhh so many shoppers what is in it? something for me?
Poonam: ya a sexy top *gives it di*
POoja: wooow nice....
Poonam takes the bracelets out for her and Rajat. one is blue and one in red.
Pooja: what's this?
POonam: a gift for Rajat
Pooja: why dont u say him?
Poonam: u know what sis i hv the feeling that he knows already abt my crush on him...
Pooja: really.. but how did u realized?
Poonam: i dont know he is acting a little different. i mean he his my best friend but he looks like more to me so...
Pooja: hmmmmm
Poonam: okay i hv 2 leave to give this gift 2 him.
Poonam runs down in the kitchen and there she sees Rajat driking water.
Poonam: hi...
Rajat: oh hi hru?
Poonam: fine good happpyyyy..... lolz
Rajat: happy 2 know
Poonam: ehmmm Rajjy i hv something for u
Rajat: for me?
Poonam gives him the blue bracelet
Rajat oh... it doesnt need it...
POonam: it was... shut up fake rajkumar ... hahahahahah do u like it??
Rajat: yeah its awsome thnx poonam
POonam: stop here... no sorry no thnx in friendship right?
Rajat: oh ya right...
they both hug but this hug is going really looooooonnnggggg.... somebody knocks the door and Pooja di is coming in
Pooja: ehm ehm ehm may i disturb ya both?
They both blush.
Rajat: ya sure... nice gift no?
Pooja: hmmmmmm veryyyyyyyy nice...
Rajat: okay then i think i should leave
Pooja: no u can stay here i think i should leave what u say
Rajat blushes and goes away from there
Poonam: did ya c? he was blushing! i told u di....
Pooja: wait wait wait not so fast just wait and watch... well i wish good luck 2 both of u...
Poonam hugs Pooja di and she is very thnx full 2 her. Poonam thinks abt the long hug and feels happy insidly. she love Rajat like hell!!!
2 be continue...
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 63
In The Evening Pooja di packing her bags. Next day they will go back home 2 frankfurt. So everyone are packing their bags for leaving tomorrow. Rajat is sitting in the room and the bag is looking very mess up. He looks all the time to the bracelet and thinks abt Poonam's lovely reactions. Her hugs her smile her talking with Pooja di abt she loves him. But he is still confused. maybe it was his misunderstanding.
Poonam is sitting in front of her computer and getting boring. she knows that Rajat is going tomorrow back that's why she is very sad abt it.
Manu: POOONNNAAAAAMMMM . where are u?
Poonam: im here
Manu: what's up? can u help me plz... with my bag?
Poonam: ya sure...
she goes with manu bhayya upstairs 2 help him.
when she comes back she acrosses the room where Rajat is sitting with his bags. actually he is liying on the bed with closed eyes and the bracelete in his hands. Poonam sees all this and feel a little bit happy abt that scene. maybe he loves her 2. She goes in and stands there. she watches at him and dont say anything. suddenly Rajat stands up and he sees Poonam in front of him.
POonam: oopps im sorry... i didnt want 2 disturb u... i may leave
Rajat: ahhh no its okay dear im fine i was not sleeping... * looks at the barcelet and puts it on his hand*
Poonam: byeee
Rajat: wait... can u help me plz? i dont know how to make it clean again..
POonam: lolz ya sure
Poonam helps him to cleans the room up and puts the clothes in the bag. Rajat looks very lovely to her and Poonam is just bz with packing his bag. Poonam is sad but she tries to not express her feelings abt that he is going.
Rajat: thnx Poonam... *smiles*
Poonam: no thnx... ihv 2 leave bye
Rajat: wait!
Poonam: what?
Rajat: i want 2 ask u something... come sit ...
POonam: ya ask
Rajat: may i aks u a personal question? if ya dont mind
POonam: ya lol ask
Rajat: u asked me at the wedding that have i ever fall in love? i said no i didnt... may i ask u the same thing? qauz i feel that ur hiding something from me...
Poonam: hahahahahaha ... no i didn't lol * she lies*
Rajat: why are u laughing? Poonam i know u from our childhood ur hiding something from me ... come on tell me... and yeah ihv noticed something in ur eyes very sad today. i thaught u have great time with Mansi.
Poonam: ya im sad.,.. if i be honest ur leaving tomorrow so.. u know i love my friends and if somebody special goes away from u it hurts... right?
Rajat: yes it doesn't but i dont like this i want 2 c my friends always happy qauz im happy.. what u say?
Poonam: ur happy that ur going?
Rajat: no... qauz im gonna 2 miss someone very special but i dont want 2 c that person crying or sad infront of me qauz i want 2 leave from here with nice memories u know
Poonam: ya...
Rajat: know smile and dont look sad like this ok?
Poonam: okay*smiles*.... well i think i should leave know my mom needs help in the kitchen c ya tomorrow morning. good night =)
Rajat: good night!
In The next morninn the bags are staying at the door. Poonam looks at the them and feels again sad. suddenly Rajat is staying behind her and she cleans her tears. she turns and Rajat sees her like this. He cleans her tears and hugs her. ... Poonam feels realxed.
POonam: ill miss u Rajjy
Rajat: ill miss u 2 Poonam ki raat... know smile!
She smiles.
Rajat: no not like this... i want 2 c Poonam happy.
Poonam givs him a big smile...
Rajat: much better....
he takes his bag and puts in the car.
Rajat's dad: ready guys?
Manu: ya mausa g what abt u
Rajat's dad: fine shine
everyone are going in the car with there bags. everyone sitting in the car. Gautam and his parents staying to the. But where is Poonam? she stays up in the balcony and crying a lot.
Rajat: hey where is Poonam?
Gautam: dont know she must b here...
Rajat looks up and suddenyl he sees Poonam crying and staying in the balcony... he gets confused again.
After 5 mints Poonam comes down for saying bye to the family. Rajat shows her to clean up the tears. she does gives him a big smile and say bye to everyone.
all are going inside but Poona looks at the car still it doesnt to be see. when the car is gone she turns in a very sad way and goes in her room to sleep.
Rajat is sitting in the car and remembers all the days expression talks everything abt Poonam...
2 b continue...
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Posted: 16 years ago
first of all happy marrid life nice updates i mean like sooooo cute i just love it... rajat fake rajkumar i love that anywayz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 64

After hrs and reaching home they all go to bed and sleep. but Rajat cant sleep. he misses Poonam very much. he thinks abt the days that he spent with her in Hamburg the wedding, her birthday etc. the most embarssing moment was when he was angry on Poonam. he thinks abt the words what Poonam said to him. its just not easy to forget that all this. is that love? he cloeses his eyes and tries 2 sleep. but still he dreams abt Poonam =).
Pooja di is having a nightmare abt all the disasters, when she met Mannav there. Again she screams and wakes up. but this time she is not scread. she checkes her mobile and there she sees a SMS from Manav.
SMS:
hi Pooja, hey come on yaar plz talk 2 me. i know i was very bad 2 u. but u even didnt tell me the reason why u were reacting like this. i mean come on... i promise i will remove ur misunderstanding. PROMISE! know plzz pick up the fon whenever i will call u nxt. love Manav!
Love ??? hmmmm, very confusing.! NO NO NO! pooja dont do this again! she will not do it! she know what's the nxt step is. what is this bloddy love? she doesn't belive in true love anymore qauz she has already take the big risk in her life abt it with a very bad way. she should listened to her family which she didnt and today she is sitting there alone...
Next Morning Pooja is making breakfst in the kitchen. she wakes up very late qauz she couldn't sleep the whole night qauz of this one '' love'' SMS! she is angry. Rajat comes to take something fron the kitchen and there he sees Pooja di with a cup of coffee in her hands, its getting cold and she even didn't take on SIp of it!
Rajat: Pooja di?.... POOJA!!!! DI!!!!
Pooja: what?
Rajat: ur coffee is getting cold....
POoja: its already cold...
She puts the coffee away and starting to washing the dishes up.
Rajat: is everything ok?
Pooja: no! .. 2 be honest
Rajat: i c... tell me...
POoja: ihv got a 'love' SMS from Manav, can u belive this?
Rajat: what? ... duffer!
Pooja shows him the SMS and Rajat is laughing n laughing.
Rajat: sorry... di but this guy is just 2 me like he just knows that how 2 spell the word but feeling is not his way
Pooja: that's what im thinking... but u know what? today is the day last day!
Rajat: haiin? what? last day?
POoja: ya last day of his fake love... today... i... im leaving him!
Rajat: wooow! congrats! im with u! i would never spend a life with such a looser!
Pooja: hmmm just one call more and then! ... finitu!
Rajat: di im very happy abt ur desicion. i want 2 my sister happy all the time.
POoja: happiness is not more in my list *cries*
Rajat: who said that?
Pooja: my faith!
Rajat: wrong!!!!!! ur the best !!!! really honestly if i would be not younger then i would get marry to u! kasam c! hahahaha
POoja: same here *laughs*
they both hug and POoja feels a little bit relaxed. know she is just wating for the call....
2 be continue...
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the part is a little bit short qauz nobody is commenting... which is very bad!
yaar meien socha tha wapis aoongi to bohut sari comments honge but yahan to ek patta bhi nahin hai!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
di first off all congratulations🥳.may u hav happy married life🥳😃.secondly i luv ur ff 👏pls continue it soon 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 65
Pooja is sitting in fron of her Computer and looking at wedding pics.
They whole family looks very happy. the Bridal is very pretty and the Groom is very handsome. awww so sweet she sees the pics when they both do finding the ring in the milk ritual.
Pooja's mom: hey dear? what are u doing?
Pooja: nothing mom ...
Pooja's mom: wonderful pics right?
Pooja: ya...
Pooja's mom: anything new from Manav?
Pooja: msgs... SMS... misscall....
Pooja's mom: what abt u...
Pooja: im not answering!
Pooja's mom: very good!!!!
Pooja: u know what mom?
Pooja's mom: no...
Pooja: im gonna 2 break this sagayee... what u say?
Pooja's mother kisses her daughter on her chicks and wishes her all the best....
At the afternoon Pooja is reading her fav book and suddenly her mobilefon bells. She looks at the fon. Manav is calling!!! just one word in Pooja's mind : FINISHED!!!!!
she picks up the fon....
Pooja: yeah?
Manav: HI! thnk god ur having pick up the fon hey listen where have u been the last days i was msging u calling u but no resposnse. okay fine i know i was very wrong to u at the wedding but oh come we can try it again what u say?
Pooja: so u want 2 say u hv realized ur mistake right?
Manav: No... i mean yes... i mean come on forget it yaa...
Pooja: no?? yes?? ur unsure abt it?
Manav: hey babes... let's meet.... on Saturday im coming 2 frankfurt let's have great day done?
Pooja: oh ya sure and dont forget to bring the blond girl with u im looking further 2 meet ur new girlfriend..
Manav: who? Plooja what's wrong with u?
Pooja: im fine... well dont forget to bring the girl with ill buy for u both a ring and u can get engaged with her on saturday right?
Manav: POOOJJJJAAAAA!!!!
Pooja: shut up u bloddy bas***d! i loved u like hell and u were unfaithful to me??? u always ignored me i thaught okay fine he is bz that's why he doesnt have time for me but after that one scene on the xmas market u really have broken my heart like... do u even know what love means? i was so wrong i had argument with my prents just qauz of u. i have never listened to them but u swine!!!! u really are a BIG LOOOOOSSSEEERRR!!!!! u will never find a true love and friend! Manav!!! just get out of my life! just get out! im breaking this relation!!!!! for ever and ever!!!!
go and f**k many girls at the same time but know Pooja will have a better life without u for sure!!!!
Manav: what.... hey what the hell? what are u talking abt?
Pooja: u know it very well what im talking abt!!! I HATE U!!! I HATE I HATE U I HATE U I HATE U I JUST HATE U BLODDY f**kING PIG!!!!!!
she dropes the fon downn.. she has done it everything is finished! everything has been lost Pooja is alone... she has lost. she starting to cry very loud. Rajat acrosses the room but he suddenly listens to her cry. He knocks the room and comes in the room. he looks at her and is very shocked.... he runs to her... and try to make her calm down... but Pooja cant stop criyng...
Rajat: DI DI DI !!! what happend?
Pooja: i hate him i hate him he is a big Looser i hate him!!!
Rajat: shhhhhhhhhhh ' hugs her* , shhhhh di di !!!!!! ...
Pooja: why why why why why why whyyyyyy??????? * cries loud*'
Rajat: shhhh.... di di! calm down di calm down! know tell me what happened?
Pooja: everything is finished! im a BIG LOOSER!!!
Rajat: shhh.... DI know tell me what happenend!
Rajat looks the fon and checkes the recieve call numbers and there he sees the number of Manav. for a few mints ago he called Pooja di. same date.... the call was abt 10 mints!
Rajat: oh!!!!.... Pooja didi.... calm down! its okay1 this idiot is no more in ur life ur free know! calm down......
Suddenly Pooja's mom runs upstairs. she sees her daughter finished. She asks Rajat what happened and he tells him the story.
Her mother hugs her daughter and tries 2 calm her down..... but Pooja was not be quit! she was almost out of control....
Pooja's mom: Rajat... go and call Komal right know! she will handle it!!! she will not stop from anyone of us plz call her... 34567732 ... her number quickyl!
Rajat runs down to the fon and calls Komal Pooja's best friend...
Komal: hallo?
Rajat: hello? komal di?
Komal: ya... who is this?
Rajat: im Rajat... listen Pooja di is not well i mean she is criyng... actually she has finisehd the relation with Manav and know she is criyng, she is just not to stop. Di can u help her?
Komal: oh god! im coming!!!!
Rajat: thnx....
after 20 mints Komal arrives at Pooja's home, she runs upstairs in her room. and till then Pooja is relaxed and drinking water. when she sees Komal she runs to her and hugs her tightly.... she again starting to cry... Komal tries to calm her down but she is crying and doesnt stop. Komal asking to the ppl to leave her alone with Pooja. they all go out and the door closed.....
2 be continue.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
poooor poooja i feel so bad for her thank god she has komal and all of her family to support her.. i loved how you wrote them.. thanx alot for making this FF
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 66
Pooja cries and cries and doesnt stop. Komal tries to stop and control 2 herlself.
Komal: shhhhhhhhhhh... jaaan merr jaan stop crying everything is fine know ur free know uhv left this looser. its okay know plz calm donw meri jaan
Pooja: why why why why why why whyyy???????? why i loved this person so much? why? why he was unfaithful to me why? why i ... loovveeddd... whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy'?????????????
Komal: be quit... shhhhhhh.... listen every human being makes mistake and u also did now u hv realized ur mistake and its okay know!
Pooja: i will never forgive myself and never this bas***d! i sweeaaarrrr *cries*
Rajat knocks the door and comes in. Till then POoja is a little bit quit. she sits with he closed eyes on her bed and Komal sits nxt 2 her holding her hands.
Rajat: di? how is she know?
Komal: much better...
Rajat: uffff.... i cant belive this... how can be someone....
Pooja: Rajat & Komal i want 2 tell you something both! i wish u both that u will never never and never get in this situation like me today! Never get unfaithful to ur love never ever ... if u do this then dont remember me.. make ur love so much strong that dunya ki koi b takat ise tor na paye... my love was cheap and weak! but dont make urs...!!!! plz for god sake dont this...! enjoy ur life qauz this life is very short... and dont forgte to loved and get loved by ur partner. love is the most beaituful gift from god which he has given us! but some dont have the faith to get it propebly... so plzzz !!!
Komal gives her a tight hug and get tears in her eyes. Then Rajat hugs her tighlty 2! they both promise 2 Pooja abt what she said to them. After hrs Pooja finally goes down and her mother stand in the kitchen for making coffee for the family. She goes to her mom and hugs her.... her mother kisses her chicks. but this time Pooja doesn't cry. she is relaxed.
After Dinner:
Rajat and Poonam are chatting... lol
Poonam: ya ya ya ya ya ya ya...
Rajat: what? ur scared?
Poonam: scared and Poonam? never ever!
Rajat: lol!!
Poonam: what? lol ...
Rajat: what's gautam doing!
Poonam: dreaming abt her ex!
Rajat: poor guy...
Poonam: wrong... stupid!
Rajat: POONAM! hey what if u would be in the situation like this?
Poonam: i dont need 2 be qauz i will say the person who i do love soon as possible i can...
Rajat: then do it...
oopppssssss ...
Poonam: what?
Rajat: i ... mean that if u love someone then do it =D
Poonam: hahah very funny...
Rajat: huh?
Poonam: well anyway how is Pooja di?
Rajat: much better!
Poonam: i was so scared when i heared her voice... yaar i hate Manav like hell ... i mean how can be someone. so... uffffffff
Rajat: yeah i hate him 2!
Poonam: Rajat may i ask u something? be honst ya?
Rajat: ya sure...
Poona,: how did u like it at our home?
Rajat: it was nice i like it very much i mean ihv met my friends after alooooooonnnnnnnnnnnggggg time and it feels awsome when u spent time with ur most closing friends of ur life no?
Poonam: thx for coming rajkumar i realy liked it
Rajat: no thx no sorry in friendship! lol
Poonam: ya right... hey dear i hv 2 go ... im sorry... oppps
Rajat: lol its okay Poonam im sitting also very long here... =) say 2 everyone my namaste
Poonam: ya sure take care maybe ill call ya tomorrow... bye
Rajat: bbye
Poonam closes her PC and think abt the talk of Rajat and her... she agin falls in love wth him. At the same time Rajat also thinks abt Poonam?
is that love?.....
2 be continue...

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