* And then they met* - Updt Pg 25 - Page 11

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Posted: 16 years ago
but your sweeter......❤️ just like your FF..
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nice parts Mahi di 👏
I liked them .. 😊
Edited by Cardenia - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 60
Mansi and Rajat are talking abt Poonam.
Mansi: u know why she is like this?
Rajat: some...
Mansi: ya?
Rajat: ya qauz of her brother and her family.... she thinks that her family doesnt support her thatswhy she must does everything herself... which is wrong i think qauz parents wants the best for their childre and i dont think her parents are like this.
Mansi: she doesnt want 2 bbelive it .. i mean i even tried 2 explain her the same thing but she is her own mind queen....
Rajat: she has so changed! she was never like this before.
Mansi: bhayya u dont know! she is just very confusing in her mids she doesnt know what she says and what she does she just does it!
Rajat: ya... i agree with u .. well i hope the best for her =)
other girl is stays behind to them and they doesnt notice that the girl is listing everything. the girl runs 2 Poonam and tells her the story in a very bad way. Poonam is shocked she stopped dancing.
Mansi goes out for refresh herself and Poonam comes behind her.
Poonam: Mansi!!!!! is that true?
Mansi: what?
Poonam: u and Rajat were talking rubbish abt me?
Mansi: what are talking are u mad???? oh hello...
Poonam: tell me right know! i thaught u were my best friend! ur worst the chandni and rohit!!! im telling ya! ill c ya
Mansi: have u gove mad we were just talking that uhv changed urself and there was nothing wrong hey come on Poonam it was nothing harsh abt...
*SLAP* Poonam slaps Mansi and Rajat comes out:
Rajat: Poonam have u gone mad?!?
Poonam tries 2 slap Rajat 2 qauz she thinks that he was also talking with Mansi rubbsh abt her but Rajat hols her hand!!!!
Poonam: leave me!!
Rajat: say sorry 2 her right know!!!!!!
Poonam: why!!!! i.... leave me...
Rajat: dont u dare 2 say anynthing to my sister! say sorry to her...
POonam: NO!!!!!!!
Rajat: say!!!!
Mansi: leave her bhayya... i think i should leave
Rajat leaves Poonam's hand. Gautam and Pooja come out for looking what happening. Poonam was red like tomatoe on her facea nd Mansi was criyng. rajat tells Gautam what happened. POonam and her brother get into a big fight!
Pooja: stop it!!!!!! listen 2 me!!! Mansi dont u care abt her come with me
Mansi: no di i think i should leave
Poonam: get lost
Gautam: shut up!!!! .... Hey mansi come one i know its somethign which u can forget. come let's go in
Mansi: no...
Rajat: oh come yaar ur at gautams birthday
Mansi: no bhayya ihv 2 go...
Gautam: just for me plzzzzzzzz.....
Mansi: no.... im sorry
Pooja: i think u need some rest. Rajat and Gautam u bring her home right now
Gautam: okay...
they both take the girl at home. When they come back home then they talk abt the scene.
Rajat: i feel so sorry for Poonam!
Gautam: she is so... i cant belive this
Rajat: actually we were talking abt Poonam that she has changed herself. qauz maybe thatshwhy i have met after yrs so... it was strange for me but Mansi were telling me the reason!
Gautam: she is crazy....
Rajat: no....
Gautam: YES!!!!!
Rajat: no.... she is just confused in her mind.
Gautam: how can u say that?
Rajat: i feel.... i mean she is cofused abt u abt aunty uncle....
Gautam: hmmm ....
Rajat: for example abt u... she wants 2 protect u but she doesnt know how. she told me on the wedding that aunty always tells Poonam that she is wrong... she is confused that how should she change herself.... and then when she hears something very bad abt her self she gets crazy in her mind and reacts like this? what u say...
Gautam: ya.... ur right but she is sometimes to much! she is just out of control....
Rajat: yup!
Gautam: what 2 do?
Rajat: leave her alone...
Gautam: we do...
Rajat: not really my dear brother....
Gautam: huh?
Rajat: stop make her the feeling that she is wrong! ... i think this would be the best solution
Gautam: but i dont say to her that she should help me bla bla
rajat: but she can c that! she wants 2 do something good for everyone and that shows her wrong! so...
Gautam: okay.... i think i know what 2 want 2 say
Rajat: good....
POonam sits Pooja outside and she talks abt the scene with her.
POoja: what was that?
POonam: i cant stand out if somebody talks 2 Rajat! i hate it!
Pooja: u didnt listen 2 him careflly he said my sister!!!!
Poonam: okay fine but how could they both talk abt like this ihv never done this!!!!
Pooja: they didnt u duffer!
POonam: they did
Pooja: shut up! ill slap if u say it again!!!! first u should calm down! u know Rajat is really hurted by this what u hv done with Mansi today really she is like his sister dont u realize that? and why would he interessted to talk abt u rubbish to other ppl? why? he is ur friend i guess and i dont think it was wrong what he has done 2day! he wanted 2 show u the right way thats it!
POonam: ahhhhhhhh.... im getting crazy!
POoja: know relax...and let's go home
POonam: im very bad!
POoja: no ur not!
Poonam: im ....
Poja: let's go home
They party is over and every are at home know. Poonam comes out of kitchen after drinking water and she acrosses Rajat: Poonam is feeling so much guilty that she could c in his eyes. Rajat aswell cant face her face and says *good night* to her and goes to sleep. Poonam retunrs but Rajat doesnt. he is also very sad abt it. Poonam have tears in her eyes and she looks away but at the same time rajat turns and looks to her back and he has aswell tears in his eyes Poonam left the place and Rajat leaves the place aswell.
2 be continue....
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Posted: 16 years ago
okayy.. that was wierd.. i mean in a moment everybody is dancing the other slaping.. and rajat.. he's an awsome psychologist .. i mean he always know what's the matter.. i just loved it how you discribed the moment... though i feel kinda bad.... about poonam of course
and one more thing i am starting a new ff and i would really apreciete it if you checked it and i'll be one lucky girl if you spread it..

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1151276
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Posted: 16 years ago
Ooohh ..how a big conversation between all
fight ,slap,shout,...
And in the last scene,when Rajat & Poonam went 2 sleep makes me feel tender ..very good in describing that ..
Like this part ..Thnx Mahi :)
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: 090909as

okayy.. that was wierd.. i mean in a moment everybody is dancing the other slaping.. and rajat.. he's an awsome psychologist .. i mean he always know what's the matter.. i just loved it how you discribed the moment... though i feel kinda bad.... about poonam of course
and one more thing i am starting a new ff and i would really apreciete it if you checked it and i'll be one lucky girl if you spread it..

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1151276

its just a FF story! i know that part in kinda bad but yaer i want 2 add some reality on my FF which is very important not like other FF's very unnatural and filmi type
thnx for liking
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Cardenia

Ooohh ..how a big conversation between all

fight ,slap,shout,...
And in the last scene,when Rajat & Poonam went 2 sleep makes me feel tender ..very good in describing that ..
Like this part ..Thnx Mahi :)

hahahaha thnx for liking!
reality my dear relity
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: dv_freak

its just a FF story! i know that part in kinda bad but yaer i want 2 add some reality on my FF which is very important not like other FF's very unnatural and filmi type

thnx for liking


your right.. some FFs are o filmy for me.. but all of ur parts were mostly nice so i was kinda shocked😲 but still i loved how discribed them.. good work,,
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Posted: 16 years ago
^^ oh come on itna bhi weird nahin hai dimag lara lara ke ek to mein part likhti hoon weird hojata hai!
hato yaar ....
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Posted: 16 years ago
Part 61
Poonam: no.... nooo.... NOOOOO!!!!!!
she wakes up!!! Pooja runs 2 her and asking her what happened
POonam: Di di .... i .... oh god! i....
POoja: it was a nightmare?
POonam: ya... maybe ... but very scary....
Pooja: come one get up its 10'o clock in the morning just go and fresh up come on
Poonam stands up and goes for fresh up. when she comes down for breakfast in the kitchen she sees Manu and Rajat were drinking their drinks. Her mom is washing the plates and She sits to the table in the opposite to Rajat but she doesnt puts her face up. she just closes her eyes and thinks abt last night. Rajat sees her and gets a little worried abt her. he thinks that maybe he will talk 2 her.
Mansu: hey rajjy u know what? i was on that day very excited it was a balsting day for me
Rajat: yeah?
Manu: ya... and Pooja hahahahahah she was hahaha i cant explain
Pooja: shut up manu!!! Rajat dont llisten to him it was even not that worst!
Rajat: ya?
Mansu: hahahahahahha lier! Pooja let's ask mom abt it what u say?
POoja: huh? mom? no thnx
Manu: c ?
Rajat: ya..... *looks 2 poonam who still looking very bad in her face* : Poonam?
Poonam: hm?
Rajat: good morning"
Poonam: morning...
Rajat: hw r u?
POonam: oh... fine...
Rajat: deoen' t seem to like
POonam: no its okay!
she takes the cornflakes packet in her hand and puts it in the bowl but the packet is empty! ... she puts the packet back and stands up and go out for baketball playing! Rajat comes out she dipps just the ball and no ball.... how sad Poonam was really like dead soul she was so bad 2 mansi that even she couldn't se herself in mirror again. The dips the ball and dipping and dipping dipping when she picks the ball up to make a basket she let again on dipping. Rajat holds the baket in his hand. Poonam looks up she has tears in her eyes and they follow her chicks down. Rajat cleans her tears. and makes a basket for Poonam
Poonam: oh...
Rajat: u wanna try?
Poonam: ihv already lost Rajat
Rajat: no u didnt
Poonam i hv.... *cries*
Rajat gives her the ball and says: if u lost something then try many times that u win it! right?
Ponam takes the ball in her hands and makes a basket. and she wins. she smiles!
Rajat: thnk godu hv smiled,,, hey u didnt have breakfast come on let's go eat something
Rajat turns to take her with her but Poonam holds his hand. he turns in a very lovely way, He looks to her smiles to her.
Poonam: im sorry...
Rajat: for what?
Poonam: for last night
Rajat: no its okay .... but im happy that uhv realized ur mistake and btw dont say sorry to me say it to Mansi.
Poonam: will she forgive me?
Raat: why not?
Poonam: i dont know....
Rajat: try....
Poonam: .....
Raja: look let me tell u something, friends are there for happiness and sadness and they keep yourself with u in any porblem in any situtaion. that's what friends are for. and i know Mansi is a very friend of yours!
Poonam: ya but i was very mean to her
Rajat: hm... ya... u were but the most importtant thing that uvh relaizesd ur mistake and u want her back right?
Poonam: ya ofcourse.... its not the first time i was like this to her
Rajat: well...
POonam: c?
Rajat: come with me...
POonam: where?
rajat takes her to the telephone he picks the fon up and gives it to Poonam's hand. he smiles and winks. Poonam smiles him back and dials the number.
POonam: hello?.... Mansi?... oh hi aunty.... where is Mansi? ya.... thnx... hi Mansi... its Poonam here
Mansi: hi...
Poonam are u angry with me?
Mansi: ehmmm no....
Poonam: i know ur!
Mansi: not im not...
POonam plz.... im sorry..... i know i was very bad 2 u last night i dont what is happenging to me last days im just like a dead body
Mansi: shut up! dont u say this again i love u
POonam cries and says: i love u to
Mansi: im comeing to you wait
Poonam: noo ill come to u and then we'll go for shopping we'll have Icre cream and make awsome for the whole life
Mansi: lol okay im wating for ya.. what should i wear?
Poonam: the same top with black jeans which i gave on ur birthday last time
Mansi: good bye c ya
Poonam: bbbyee
She turns but Rajat is not there. she drops the fon down and runs to her room. Fater 1 hr she comes out and she looks for Rajat in the whole house. Rajat is staying in the garden and feels the sun on his face. Poonam runs to him and hugs him from the back. when he turns and then she gives him a BIG hug. And Rajat gives her the hug back.
POonam: thank u so much!!!!
Rajat: i told u c
Poonam: u made my day!!!!! thnx once again *tears*
Rajat: dont start 2 cry pushpa ... ehmm sorry Poonam i hate tears * in rajesh kahnna style*
Poonam lolz: same here .... hahaha okay i hv 2 leave bye
Rjat: bye have fun and have a good day
Poonam: thnx... ehmmm should i bring for u something?
Rajat: i want the happiness on Poonam's face back
Poonam smiles and runs out. Rajat staying there and thinks abt hug she has given to him. he smiles... and turns.... he dreams with open eyes that Poonam is very happy. and he feels very happy aswell.
2 be continue...

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