smits! have i told you b'fore what a pleasure it is to read your story every weekend? no matter how i am before i start reading it, by the end of it, i'm alive again. and this week's set is a perfect example of how stories should be told: super continuity on all the threads that matter; super consistency with all the characters that matter while allowing them all to grow into new people at every step of the way. prem-heer's love story; the juneja parents; meher flashbacks (to show how nice she is); mr. r-ass flashbacks (to show how ... er... how do you say stoooopid without sounding really mean? 😆)
Hey E! 😉 Good to see you and glad u liked how the things are progressing. I almost did not sleep all night thinking just how you will be ripping Atul to shreds this week and guess I was not really disappointed. 😆 Such bitternesss, E!! 😆
thoughts that struck pcp and me:
* meher's flashback was interesting not so much in who she is, but in a feature of atul we honed in on:- he did all the ''expected'' things, no? i mean, it's like meher said 'bout his car -- ''it's soo typical.'' just like the girlfriend he's got. ''so typical'' - with waves of hair falling over her shoulders, and making statements that are mean in an empty sort of way? *btw, never liked the word ''bitchy'' although by now, it's the only one that probably fits here -- why dump so much negative connotation on a poor female dog, no?*
Of course he did all the expected things...because he did not know any better! 😆 And the girlfriend is typical, coz he knows they are no threat to his emotions and that he can walk away any time he wants to.
mr. r-ass' also mr. boring choices in life. and ya, ya, you'll say that is expected of a guy who is age 0.25 in the emotional growth department. and he is deliberately doing it 'cause of not wanting to be hurt. i'm not saying anything here, am i?? *mouthing ''reflexive ass!'' silently*
It is the truth...about him not wanting to get hurt! 😆😆 I mean I agree that he needs to grow up in that area fast...but reflexive ass or not I think everyone deserves to fall in love no?😆
* and oh, in sublime contrast - there's mr. tie-undone-hair-ruffled-like-he's-run-his-fingers-through-it-many-times prem. oh my, oh my, oh my. ya, i know it's actually oh heer's, oh heer's, oh heer's. but he's... such an adorable guy! how much he adores her. how much he will suffer himself for her. of course, since it's heer, it's not like his pains will not be rewarded. but still.... he's ... 😍 i'm soooo glad heer kissed him. for some reason, this (''a few minutes later'' kiss) would definitely make it to the top 5 kisses in destiny... seriously. 😍
Ah, I know..he is adorable. I had a few moments going...😍 Ooh, this one would make it to top 5?? 😉 I thought that kiss was so needed...!
and i like him even though he's a total control freak! and ordinarily that would drive me crazy. how, oh how, do you get me to like a control freak, smits? 😍 but i do hope he doesn't manage to keep heer away from the school and her responsibilities? ooh! maybe the doctor will be the one to take a firm handle on mr. i-want-to-gps-unit-you and tell him that heer without distractions would be more at risk than heer with distractions?
Oh but what a control freak, no?😉 Ooh, I think till they actually go see the doctor, I am afraid this is the way it is going and I don't think Heer is arguing at this point. I mean she got her way one time, so she is letting him have his way now...make sense?
and pcp wants to know how they're gonna keep the secret away from everyone if they shift rooms to a lower level at this stage -- won't everyone want to know why? and take paranoid care of heer anyway, then?
Umm...I think everyone at this point is feeling a little overprotective of Heer and I think they put it down to a first-time-dad syndrome or something...😃
* btw, i liked how you had prem be the one who made sure that the thali gayatri-mom was using didn't topple as she hugged heer... dunno why. but i did... 😆 Dunno why but that felt right...
* and little phoooooh's already making his/her presence felt! mommy focusses on daddy just for a moment, feeling sad 'bout him. and little phooooh flutters to remind her why mommy-daddy have todo what they're doing. oh, i am so in love with little phoooooh, i can't tell you, smits. i love little phoooooh mostest of all in destiny. 🤗 I know right? This phooooh is going to be the cutest...I agree. 😍
* ewwwww! destiny's dirtchachi is as much of a slime as the show's! ewwww...! I know...😡
* damnit, smits! preet's already making forever after promises to ash -- why is she not feeling better??! damnit! 😕 i think ash just moved to #2 phool... 😕 *of course no one would take mr. r-ass' top spot... 🤣* I think Ash has more issues about self esteem that she needs to deal with. I think she will come around!
* er... smits? on that last line. er... if you or mr. r-ass ever need any ... er ... professional assistance in getting him committed, you will call me, won't you??? i suspect i have a lot of ... expertise required in getting mr. r-ass committed. no, really! 😈 *feeling like i need some commitment involving straight-jackets myself to control the perpetual twitching my hands and fingers go through the moment mr. r-ass' name appears on destiny screens these days... 😆*
E...give the poor guy a break!! 😆😆 Everyone is entitled to make one goof up in life...and can't really blame him..there are people like him who are stubborn to see what is staring at them in the face!! OMG! He evokes all these reactions in you...?? 😆😆
w&r, smits. w&r. what a lovely story. 🤗 Thank you for reading E!! Take care!! 😉
Originally posted by: vrinda16
Hai,
Sorry for commenting late but i'm very busy with my college work - they are hell bent on not giving us any leave.Ya, the practicals went off very well.Congrats, ur second thread has almost reached 150 pages.Hi Vrinda! Good to see you and to know that your practicals went well! 😃 Thanks dear!
Abt. the last update - after a very,very long time came the mention of DJ - hasn't changed a bit ,has she?Felt sorry for Ash. Ash is so sweet that it makes me wonder how could she be DJ's daughter. Ash needs to provide for these ungrateful bunch of people in her life.And her comment on Preet-Meher irritated me equally as Ash. Preet fits to the T to be DJ's son-in-law bcos she needs someone as him to set her right - if only Ash gave him the right to - well ,she has no other option also.I know..she has been out of commission for a while. No DJ has not changed even a bit. I think being with Heer and Meher has turned Ash the way she is. 😊
Atul & Balbir talk was cute & there goes our Stubborn man's resolution not to think abt Meher down the drain as his thoughts go back to that christmas preparations with Meher at his house. - but he wouldn't admit it one bit that he misses her though his eyes searched for all those people round the table along with him & his dad as was previously.Abt Neha - I don't want to talk abt her. Balbir is missing Meher - that was so sweet.Yeah, Atul does not want to accept why Meher is having this effect on him! 😉 He is pretty stubborn, no. *sigh* But I think that will be the way for a little longer till he realizes what is wrong with him!!!😉 I know...Balbir is sweet..and yes, he misses Meher too!
Waiting for the next part - most probably in the new thread i suppose.right?Once again sorry for commenting late.No problem. I will see you at the new thread!
Bye.Vrinda
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