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HI Tin,
Okay okay,I know I am really late now.I saw this link since the past two weeks but always saved it wiht the thought: Aaram se parhenge because I know wiht your FF's I need to be at ease otherwise when I will get distubered by someone then I will get very angry. I have just finished the story and I think it is brilliant. Every aspect of Bani's life is so beautifully written and explained, but also very realistic that she has drawn the strength to fight from the incidents in her life. There are a lot of girls trapped in a marriage like Bani and Mahesh's marriage. The only difference is that they dont get out of it but resign to their fate and live in a mentally abusive relationship. Bani's will to do something and prove herself after the death of her baby is very beautiful. She has paid a very heavy price to realize that she was in a bad relationship. Mahesh was a typical MCP without a backbone. SUch men are common in todays society. I know one in perticular myself. They show that they are okay with a working/studing wife, promise to help her before marriage, but after marriage want a 'traditional' dal-chawal pakaane waali, will wait till they return from work, wife.Jai in this story is funny, but real. MCP on the outside, maybe a bit on the inside too but stands by what he thinks is right. His dialoges and overall character portrayal is very rustic (Hats of to you for this!!) adn adds another dimension to his character.
The subject you chose is a very delicate one. It's not easy to handle because you have to be realistic. Not everything changes in one go, but you have done this gradually and nicely. You made people realize in the village that something should change but also showed that even Bani and Jai, our hero and heroine, have their own limitations!!!
Also curruption isnt just a asian or Indian phenomenon. In the west it happens to albeit a bit more covered up and hushed up. Greed is common everywhere.
Also curruption isnt just a asian or Indian phenomenon. In the west it happens to albeit a bit more covered up and hushed up. Greed is common everywhere.
Tin, I completely loved this story and applaud you for it👏
thank you for writing such a lovely ff.
p.s. I do think that the true her, or heroine in this case, is Basanti. she brought the lovely couple together!!!😉
I hope I havent rambled to much
p.s. I do think that the true her, or heroine in this case, is Basanti. she brought the lovely couple together!!!😉
I hope I havent rambled to much
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