dedication to GUNJAN's state right now!

Originally posted by: prem-sam-mayu

Hey guys so I am back with another short poem😊. This time its from Gunjan's perspective since the last epi was totally about gunjan's newly discovered "haal". Plz comment on how you like it. Any constructive criticism is welcomed. Luv Ya All!

So here it goes~~

aaj itni muddat baad yeh ehsaas hua hai,
jo khoya tha, woh ek pyara dost mila hai,
sochti hoon kaise yeh bhool hui mujhse,
diya dard tumko reh kar naaraz tujhse,
mann hi mann chahati main dosti teri,
samajhlo shayad yeh zid thi meri,
teri kadar ab main jaan chuki hoon,
tumhe acchi tara pehchaan chuki hoon,
khayalon mein tere doobi rehti hoon,
tere aane ka main intzaar karti hoon,
aaj inti muddat baad yeh ehsaas hua hai,
dil kehta hai yeh kuch khaas hua hai.

excellent poem👍🏼 its perfect for Gunjan. Esp liked the lines in black.
keep writing more poems

hey yaar.......really a chweet poem
suits da circumstances sooo well
xactly lyk wat guns wud have written or thot or watever
gud workkk 👍🏼

tHanks Guys for liking it...I will try to keep writin more of these if you all want me to.😊

yeah sure...........will enjoy reading more of ur work

Originally posted by: prem-sam-mayu

Hey guys so I am back with another short poem😊. This time its from Gunjan's perspective since the last epi was totally about gunjan's newly discovered "haal". Plz comment on how you like it. Any constructive criticism is welcomed. Luv Ya All!

So here it goes~~

aaj itni muddat baad yeh ehsaas hua hai,
jo khoya tha, woh ek pyara dost mila hai,
sochti hoon kaise yeh bhool hui mujhse,
diya dard tumko reh kar naaraz tujhse,
mann hi mann chahati main dosti teri,
samajhlo shayad yeh zid thi meri,
teri kadar ab main jaan chuki hoon,
tumhe acchi tara pehchaan chuki hoon,
khayalon mein tere doobi rehti hoon,
tere aane ka main intzaar karti hoon,
aaj inti muddat baad yeh ehsaas hua hai,
dil kehta hai yeh kuch khaas hua hai.

OMG! THAT WAS SO LOVELY AND THE PERFECT CHOICE IN THE CURRENT STATE OF OUR DEAR CHASMISH!👏👏👏that was a flawless effort made and a jhakas one too!hats off man...keep making lots more! will be waiting to read thm! make one on sam's POV too!😉

Originally posted by: rosette80

OMG! THAT WAS SO LOVELY AND THE PERFECT CHOICE IN THE CURRENT STATE OF OUR DEAR CHASMISH!👏👏👏that was a flawless effort made and a jhakas one too!hats off man...keep making lots more! will be waiting to read thm! make one on sam's POV too!😉

I did write from Sammy's POV...
If u check under "this is what sammy should say to gunji"
I think i wrote that couple of days ago!

its just an amazin poem............

THanks guys! UR kind words are very encouraging...Plz keep reading as I will try to keep writing more!

any one has a suggestion to what should I name my this particular post type from now on? Would love if any of you come up with sometihng januable!😊

luv
pals