'Love,Destiny'-a short ff Prat1-pg2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Well i had started an ff long back ...but left it half way due to exams now i hav lost track of it ...i'm writing a short story on prem and heer...which will be over by dis week
Prologue:

He loved her ...


She loved him..

Together they redefined the meaning of love..

But destiny had different plans for them...

Kuch log hamai zindagi mein bahar laate..
kuch khushi laate..
lekin bahut kam log hame dard dete hai
aur unhe hum kabhi bhool nahi paate...

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Please do reply..will post the first part and characters 2nite
Love
Niti
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sounds so good!!!
Can't wait to read the next part!!
Please update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I like it Nitz...please do continue.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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sounds interesting cont soon plz!👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey, sounds very interesting.. do update soon..
~nikki
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey grt 😳and emotional start.plz continue soon.

-sugi😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for the comments ppl..fisrt update will cme up tonite and i will finish the story by tomorow or day after tomorow...will give individual replies tonite..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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--Part 1--
Heer looks at the photo lieing in front of her..This very day last year her life was to take a happy mode.But destiny had other plans for her.Her life changed that day…She lost the person whom she admired,respected and loved the most…She had lost her Prem …

A tear came down her eyes as she remembered him..She was supposed to get married to him that day…He had gone to get their wedding gift to never come back…He did reach the wedding and kept is promise but all covered in blood and he died in her arms taking a promise from her to look after his family…

She was shattered…Even today the pain of loosing him was running through her heart…

"Woh to paani ki boond hai jo aankhon se beh jaye
Ansu to woh hai jo tadap ke aankhon mein hi reh jaye
Wo DARD kya jo lafzon mein byan ho
DARD to woh hai jo aankhon mein nazar aaye..."[from a shayari site]

Today one whole year was over..She knew she had completed all her duties.The family business was running well ..Eventually everyon e had got back to their normal lives..Preet was seriously helping Harman in business..Harman got married to Maya and Preet got married to Meher..But she was incomplete…She was incomplete b'coz Prem completed her..

"chahaat kaa eik nishaan abb bhee baaki hai
Tere binn jeenaa yeh kaam abb bhee baaki hai

muskuraahaton main chuppii dard kee zubaan abb bhee baaki hai
tuu bann kar rah gayii merii jaaan teraa yeh samajhna baaki hai."[from a shayari site]

She knew that like many other days even today he would visit her..today she wud ask sumthing from him..He wud hav to give it to her..She was very firm…Today he couldn't change or put away her secision nor cud he make her take any vows..

Thinking about these her mind reeled back the events how 2 year back he enterd her life and then her life changed completely..

**2 years back**

Heer's parents passes away in a train accident which left her and Meher to fend for themselves..Not a relative came in helping these orphans..They had no more a home to call off as theirs as it taken away by the money lenders

Lalit Juneja had returned from Canada with his wife and 3 sons…He longed to be back to his nation and meet his friend at Balraj Maan at Ambala..his 3 sons Prem, Harman and Preet..

Prem was the calm and composed one who was always with his family and apple of everyone's eyes splly his mother's..Harman was workaholic and money minded ..He was his dad's pet..Preet ,the naughtiest one whose favoutrite hobby was to tease his father..He was thought as worthless by his father which sumwer deep down hurt him..Prem always supported him..Prem is the pillar of Juneja house..

Heer and Meher came to Ludhiana to find a job an complete Meher's studies…The Juneja's had gone to Ambala and found about Balwant's death..Lalit decided to search for Heer and Meher as they had already left to Ludhiana…The Jueja's came to Ludiana to their posh mansion…

Precap:Heer comes to Prem's hotel for job as his assistant
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Love
Niti
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey great first part can w8 to reda more do continue thanx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey, great part.. i cant wait till the next..update soon, and take care..
~nikki😳

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