When we first Met …. ( For Mayurians.)

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( yet another poem for Nupur and Mayank )
When we first Met ….

We touched each other without seeing each other. We didn't like each other but we held each other

We shouted at each other but we Completed each other .

When we became a team…..

I wanted to dance but u wanted to study

When we fought …..

I wanted to confess but u refused to listen

I wanted to be a friend but u didn't consider me as a friend.

I wanted u to have me but u chose to remain alone.

I wanted you to trust me but u chose not to

I couldn't understand but u didn't let me understand.

my heart was following u in library

but the connection was not satisfactory

When we challenged….

I accepted the challenge to lead but u didn't let go of the seat

I accepted the challenge to win you but u thought It was to beat you

When we were lost in the forest

We missed the bus and you told me to hush .

" By God all the fuss !!! There was no reason to rush"

When we danced .....

I was drunk but you protected me

I was helpless but you helped me

tum gur say be zida methay ho

aur sab say zida achay ho .

your silence protect me the way my words cannot.

Your strength holds me the way my feet cannot

We are having a time out

Can we be friends again.

If not for keeps Let it be Just for the feel

Mayank, you may focus, concentrate and have a bath

But remember I am the one close to your heart .

( thank u guys for encouraging me to write this new poem . I dedicate this one to all Mayurians ... thanks to My sis also who is my biggest encouragement and my worst critic . thanks Samita for ur input ....)

( InShah Allah I will start a a new thread for my Mayur Poems ... very soon ....)

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Angel-A thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow.. amazing poem.. too good..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: kajjal

wow.. amazing poem.. too good..

😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice poem dear keep it up...as i was reading the poem mayur journey from day one till today was right in front of my eyes.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh my gosh Sana, you are an amazing amazing amazing writer, You leave me spellbound and speechless. Wah wah., i never use wah but i couldn't resist. you are a gifted writer. how i wish that mayur could read this. please please please pm it to be PD, if possible mayur/arti can read it. pd might make them do. i am sure it will touch them. whether you pm or not, its your decision. i loved it, please do write more. excellent!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow amazing poem dear !!! Sana, you are just rocking and your poems too !!! keep it up !!! hope to read more soon !!!

Well done !!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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subhanallah!! kya poem likhi hain!!!! fab job!!! really captured everything about mayank. Really liked the forest part!!! good job and i hope you keep writing such good poems, don't let your talent be wasted!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was an amazing mayur poem!! 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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WOWWW Sana..........Amazzinggg poem....Great job👏👏👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ROCKING!!!!!
too good. keep it up😊

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