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Posted: 17 years ago
Next time it will be a longer update. 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice two part..yudi listen all conv.rani & BR? tum yudi ko devdas mat banana..rani ko wapas gauv bhej do..
waiting for next big anf long part..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Sorry for the delay. 😊 But this long update will surely make for it. I hope u all like it. Part--24

Saksham goes to find out if anyone else had seen KY anywhere………………leaving behind a terribly worried Rani…………………….

All bad thoughts come to Rani's mind relating to KY's safety…………..just then the phone rings………………….

Rani is startled…………………..and in a vague hope that it might be KY she quickly picks up the receiver and to her utter dismay it was RB who asked as to who was on line. To this Rani says that it was her. Then RB blurts out in her usual rude manner asking—Sab theek hai naa?......................Kisi ne tumhe pehchaana toh nahiin?

Rani says—Jii nahiin RBjii. And she also tells her that Raja saab and all others were going to returnday after tomorrow, at which RB is elated and asks Rani to continue with her drama………………while in her heart………….she was happy at the thought of two more days of freedom……………………………😊Yet unaware that soon this Drama would become…………………….a reality……………….of their lives…………………Rani, KY and RB…………………………. 😳


Rani says a yes and after a few more instructions from RB…………..to which Rani was no longer all ears………………..She keeps the receiver down as her prime concern was finding KY only………………………..😳

Not very far from the palace…………………somewhere along the sea side the lonely man…………………😭KY……………..walked…………..drunk……………..and walking or rather staggering with the coat on his shoulder and a bottle in his hand……………….. 😭

He is sad…………………….He has tears in his eyes………………..But Why?..................... 😭😕

He wasn't sure……………whether they were tears of…………………the pain of being deceived…………………..by someone whom he had loved more than anyone else in his world………………………….or were they tears of the pain……………..😭of his trust being shattered by his love……………………his anger……………………….his frustration…………….😭his loneliness……………………Or what?...........................

KY fell on his knees unable to find answers to the so many questions boggling his mind since last night……………………………… 😭

He shouts----Kyun!?..................... Kyun kiya aapne aisa?!.................Kyun!?😕

And it begins to rain heavily……………..as if even the skies wanted to share………….share his grief……………… 😕

The song Beetey Lamhey plays from the movie The Train—
Dard mein bhi yeh lab,
Muskura jaate hain ,
Beetey lamhe humein jab bhi yaad aatey hain,
Chand Lamhaat ke waste hi sahi,
Muskura ka mili thi mujhe zindagi,
Teri aagosh mein din the mere kate,
Teri bahon mein thi meri raatein kati,…………………………😭


And through the song KY remembers the first time he had met Rani (in the golden sari)😳……………….then when he had gone to ask her if she approved of their wedding………………And then when he had carried her in his arms to the doc when she was hurt😳………………and then yesterday…………..yes yesterday😳…………….when he had bid her good—night and then he………………….he had gone to BR's room to check on her as the lights of her room were still switched on………………………………. 😕

He had entered the room and was surprised to find out that his mother was still wide awake…………………lost in deep thought. He had gone to her, touched her feet and sat next to her……………………But to KY's surprise his mother seemed to be so lost somewhere that she didn't even notice him.😕


KY says-- Maa? She looks up at him, taken aback at first but then she simply smiles like always. 😊😊

KY asked her--Kya baat hai maa? Aap kuch pareshaan lag rahi hain? 😕

BR just smiles moving her head in a no that she was fine. KY then says-- Abb app araam kijiye……………..kaafi raat ho gayi hai……………. With that he smiles and is going to pick the blanket……………….and BR had stopped him and had given him Rani's letter. 😕

Kaisa laga?
😊
Jaldi batao. 😊


Edited by leothebest9 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
leo KY ka dil kyun itni jaldi tod diya..lekin accha hua..
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey
just read this and enjoyed a lto! but whats happened 2 it? please continue!! xx
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Posted: 16 years ago
Just read this FF. Really enjoyed it...... Yudi kab se peene laga......😉
Want to find out what he will do next...... Please post soon......😍
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey leo! nice one, i've jus started reading ur FF n its pretty good... keep going.....😉
Edited by tes_v1 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
why did u stop there plz continue plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
i beg you

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