FF- -Love Actually- - -Pg14- -rereUpdated

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hello everyone!😊

I'm starting a new FF titled😊—Love Actually, which will begin from the holi sequence in the show where Kunwar Yudhisthir that is KY sees Rani that is Rajkumari Bhumi, RB dance.😳😳

I hope u like it.😊

Here's the first part-----------------😃

KY is standing alone in a corner away from the people playing holi. He remembers how he was seeing RB dancing everywhere on the stage.😛

He thinks---------Yeh kya ho raha hai hummmein? Har jagah………….har taraf………………sirf RB nazar aa rahin hai.😳

And he he holds his head and shakes it slowly, not sure what's going on him………………..its bhang kaa nasha aur his deep love for her😆………………………………..(I'll go with the second option! Right naa? After all its that wht is the magic of love😉)

There Rani is wondering what KY might be thinking of her after see her dance.😕 The thought makes her terribly worried……………………..and she starts looking here and there, her eyes searching for KY everywhere………………………..

She soon spots him standing in a corner holding his head and having a worried expression on his face, seeing which her heart misses a beat………………………………..She gets even more apprehensive and thinks------------Lagta hai Kunwar jii ko humaari sachaai maloom pad gayi hai…………………..abb………………..abb hum kya karein?😕

The next moment she has already made her mind up and she says---------------Kisi naa kisi tarah ………………himmat karke hummein Kunwar jii ko sab sach kehna hii hoga………………….ki jo kuch hua woh itefaaq tha……………………….aur hum………………….humaarairaada unkaa dil dukhana nahin tha……………….hum……………….hum toh unhein dukh dene ka soch bhi nahin sakte………………………… 😳

With that she walks towards him………………………….Determined to tell him the truth………………the whole truth………………………..😕

Kaisa laga?😊

If u guys like it then I'll post the next part, alright?😊

Edited by leothebest9 - 17 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice yaar👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼. Please continue.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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leo...its a great start!!!! 👏 👏 Please do continue!!! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx a lot! 😊 😊 Rani walks towards KY and as she raches him she says softly----------Kunwar jii ?

Here's the next part. Hope u like this one too! 😊 😊
KY looks around to find Rani stand there and is taken aback having u know that expression on his face………………Yeh kya ho raha hai……………….😕He looks confused but then his Love for her overcomes the doubt in his mind and he says lovingly-------------RB aap? 😳

Seeing the faint smile on his face she realizes that KY does not yet know the whole truth and before she is about to say anything he picks up some Pink colour from the tray kept nearby and putting it on her face with full care he says-----------------Holi mubaarak ho RB. 😳😳

Rani doesn't know what to do or what to say. A heartbeat later she says----------Aapko bhi. 😳😳

KY puts forward the tray of colours in front of her and looks expectantly. 😛😛

Rani picks up some pink colour too…………………….and still feeling his hand on her face just an instant ago……………..she puts it on his face………………..with her nazrein jhukii huin………………. 😳😳

KY smiles and thinks to himself--------------Aap kitni achchi hain RB………………..kitni sharmili…………….aapkii issi nazaakat ………………………Issi saadgi…………………….. ke toh Deewanein ho gaye hain……………………….

Rani looks up and says------------Kuch kaha aapne Kunwar jii?

He simply shakes his head in a No, disarmed by her beauty.

Rani says-------------Hum yehi dua karte hain, kii aapki dil kii har muraad poori ho………………aur aapko………………..Duniyaan kii who saari khushiyaan milein Knwar jii jinkii aapne kabh tamanna kii hai………………………….

KY replies back looking at her-------------RB phir toh aapkii dua kubool ho chuki hai………………….kyunkii aapse milke……………….aapko jaanke……………………..aap jaisa jeevan saathi paa ke…………………………Hummein duniya kii har khushi mill gayi hain……………………Aura bb humaari saari khushiyaan aapke hone se ii judi hain…………………………

And they look at each other…………………their eyes filled with subtle yet deep love for each other………………………and in the background plays the song---------Tum se hii from JWM.

Kaisa laga?

Edited by leothebest9 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Nice part 😊😊. Please post long parts.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Luvd it.
Yh of course carry on a wonder whats going to happen in the nxt part now 😆 😆 😆

Continue soon.
& Gr8 part, but yh post longer parts 😆 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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leo its very nice....keep going..... 👏 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice part..good starting
can you write bigger part..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx a ton for appreceating my efforts and here's a little longer part 😊 for all of u. Hope u like this one too. 😊


The song ends. Rani breaks the beautiful silence saying----------Hum abhi aate hain. 😊

KY says realizing something-------Arre haan hum toh bhool hii gaye…………………aapko……………….aapko toh Pitajii ne humaare liye jo pooja rakhvaai hai usske liye taiyaar hona Hoga naa? 😊

Rani is shell shocked………………..Pooja? She thinks and her heart sinks at the thought…………………and she continues to think as she walks away quietly………………….Abb hum kya karein?.............Kunwar jii toh pooja mein humaare saath baiintah-aa chahte hain 😳 ………….par……………….par yeh haq toh RB kaa hai, humaara nhaiin!..............Yeh kya ho raha hai? Hum to hiss jhoot mein phanst hii jaa rahe hain…………………….hum kyaa karein?

Just then she hears Sukhiya call out her name. She realizes that walking in deep thought she had reached the palace. She turns around and sees Sukhiya walking towards her and he comes and says--------Chotti Rani sahiba ne tumhe yaad kiya hai. 😕

Rani is scared. She fears that CR might have seen her talk to KY. So she walks towards the room terribly fearful of what was coming up. 😕

There CR tells her that she has to become RB for a few hours and sit in the Puja with KY. When she sees Rani looking reluctant she orders her to do the same and asks Sukhiya to get a dress for her. 😊 👏

CR rturns and after a while KY himself volunteers to get R for the Pooja. This shocks CR and she is worried…………………….. 😊

There Rani enters RB's room and helps Sukhiyaa hide a drunk RB after which Sukhiyaa leaves Rani in the room to let her get ready. 😕

However Rani is still uncertain. She sees an unconscious RB and thinks to herself----------Pata nahiin humaari kismet humaare saath kyaa khel, khel rahi hai……………….Har baar aapki jagah hummein leni padti hai………………Yeh……………..Yeh Kunwar jii ke saath Pooja mein baithne ka haq aur saubhagya toh aap kaa hi …………………Kyunkii Kunwar jii bhi toh kuch hii dino mein aapke hone waale hain……………………Pata nahiin yeh Vidhi ka kaisa Vidhaan hai? 😕

And she gets ready and sees herself in front of the mirror. There KY is walking towards RB's room and CR too goes after him. 😕

Rani is still looking at herself in the mirror 😳 She is looking absolutely awsome 😛 ……………………when there is a knock at the door.

She gets completely scared…………………and when she doesnot reply, she hears the door creak open……………………..

The next instant she hears CR call out-------------KY!....................ho sakta hai………………….RB so rahi hon? 😕

KY replies-----Lekin Choti maa yeh bhi toh ho sakta hai kii RB kii tabiyat zyada kharaab ho? 😳

And with that he walks in. 😕

There CR too is about to enter but Rudr and her daughter call out to her………………………And she gets busy talking to them……………………………….. 😊
(Alright, any guesses why I did so in the last part 😊 …………………..No prizes for guessing! 😉 Wait and u will know it in my next post yaar! 😉 )

Kaisa laga………………….Please tell!
😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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So many views and nooooooooooooooooooo Replies? Why yaar? Don't u want me to continue? 😭

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