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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome huni, that was cooool! hehe mwah proud of u girlie! mwah
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: CutieA

awesome huni, that was cooool! hehe mwah proud of u girlie! mwah

thanks Amsie 🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Archu .. Muuuuaahhh to you.. 😛 for portraying Shera like this..
I always wanted Shera to be strong and one of a kind.. I just loved your scene.. 👏👏
Vaise toh mai Veer ko maar khate hue nahi dekh sakati.. 😊 but still I love your scene because Veer is just like Veer in your story also..
"Veer looked up slowly and raised his eyebrows with a slight smile on his face wich gave him an air of carefree and confidence."
This is Veer.. 😛 maar khane ke baad bhi aisa attitude maarega nahi toh fir voh Veer kaisa.. 😆 I can imagine Rajat doing this scene.. 😊.. specially with raised eyebrow and slight mocking smile for Shera. 😆
Waiting for the next part.. Archu post it soon.. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Lovely fic yaar.It's too good.Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Silver_Lining

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Archu .. Muuuuaahhh to you.. 😛 for portraying Shera like this..
I always wanted Shera to be strong and one of a kind.. I just loved your scene.. 👏👏
thanksss... 😳 yup, i also wanted a shera like this.. well, i was expecting a shera like this from the 1st day of DV.. 😛 and writting this, its like a dream of mine fulfilled.. 😃 coz u know i delay really much to come up wid any project. 😆
Vaise toh mai Veer ko maar khate hue nahi dekh sakati.. 😊 but still I love your scene because Veer is just like Veer in your story also..
uhm... same here, i dont like veer in that state, coz RT wud have portrayed it too realistic.. but, shes supposed to be a cruel dakoo , and we have seen scenes like this in DV.. or similar.. 🤔 if im not wrong
"Veer looked up slowly and raised his eyebrows with a slight smile on his face wich gave him an air of carefree and confidence."
This is Veer.. 😛 maar khane ke baad bhi aisa attitude maarega nahi toh fir voh Veer kaisa.. 😆 I can imagine Rajat doing this scene.. 😊.. specially with raised eyebrow and slight mocking smile for Shera. 😆
thanks for noticing this one di..! 😛 i just wrote in the last moment actually... 😆 wasnt sure if it wud suit... bcoz hes actually in a rare situation to act like that.. but ur right, thats simply Veer.
Waiting for the next part.. Archu post it soon.. 😊

no di, no next part here..
i have noticed that the concept wich i wanted to show is not clear.. thats why ppl are asking for the next part...
well anyways...
thanks for commenting! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: subha2601

Lovely fic yaar.It's too good.Plz continue soon.

thanks for reading it Subha, im glad u liked the scene... but nop... it wont continue.. 😊

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