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Rashi

@Rash2cool

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#11

lovely FF archi....🤗

my veer anu 😍
thanks for lovely FF....🤗🤗🤗

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Archana

@Girl_2007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Rash2cool
lovely FF archi....🤗

my veer anu 😍
thanks for lovely FF....🤗🤗🤗

omg... no Rashi... its not a FF, ok, call it as u want... 😃, but it wont continue more.

anyways, thanks for ur comment and hugs. 🤗

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Rashi

@Rash2cool

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

omg... no Rashi... its not a FF, ok, call it as u want... 😃, but it wont continue more.

anyways, thanks for ur comment and hugs. 🤗

why it won't continue 😕😭😭

i mean why won't u continue 😭

Edited by Rash2cool - 16 years ago

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Shona

@shona.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

WOW

archana u realli hav a skill in writing...its easily identifiable that u've written this...

as for the scene...i realli wish the sagars had included a scene like this....its so good...not romantic but full of emotions....very realistic

i loved it

shona

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Archana

@Girl_2007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Rash2cool
why it won't continue 😕😭😭

my my... Rashi.... i cant keep one fic and ur telling me to start another?...

it wont continue because its a thing of one scene 😊, it written in the title di..

well, to clarify, Shera is a dangerous daku, she has got no feelings for anyone, right now, shes sitted in the desert, while waiting for the prisoners, she thinks of why her attacks on veer always fail, and she thinks that its because she keeps her face uncovered, becomes ananya, and automatically looses her boldness, there coincidentaly, veer comes among the prisones wich have to be killed, shera decides that she can kill him now, as she will leave her face under the black cloth, but nope... she is not able to kill him, coz, unpurposely, her feelings get softened seeing him... why?... double personality.

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Rashi... im sorry... but i cant continue, thanks for ur appreciation dear 🤗

Edited by Girl_2007 - 16 years ago

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Archana

@Girl_2007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: **Shona**
WOW
archana u realli hav a skill in writing...its easily identifiable that u've written this...

as for the scene...i realli wish the sagars had included a scene like this....its so good...not romantic but full of emotions....very realistic

i loved it

shona

thank you Shona... 😳 🤗

well, the scene, its just what i expected since i came to know that there will be a daku-prince jodi... 😛

i know that theres no romance here... but, lol, the romance between these two, would be too much passionated... i dont think it wud suit in a fraternal show 😊 i wish i cud write all my dreams down..

im really glad that u liked it 😃

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esha

@bunny007

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

i jus loveed loved it archu.....god shera puching veer was very dangerous she is a go girl....anywayz brill...

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Archana

@Girl_2007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: hiri
i jus loveed loved it archu.....god shera puching veer was very dangerous she is a go girl....anywayz brill...

😛 thanks a lot! yes, shera is dangerous, just as she has to be, being a daku.... nice to know that i portrayed her well.. i dont have practise in fighting scenes or anything...

thanks for commenting Esha 😃

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Madhu

@cute_madhu

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#19

***reserved***

btw..mah archu rilli is an awesum writer..

U actually wrote wht I thought..n yes archu u correct..

Romance b/w a Dakoo rani..tht's our Shera n our Prince Charming i.e Veer will be rillllllllllllliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii PASSIONATED...vry vry passionate.....

will give kinda full edits..

btw loved it yet again.....

Thanx for the PM darling.....

Love ya loads shonu.....t.ccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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Archana

@Girl_2007

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: cute_madhu
***reserved***
btw..mah archu rilli is an awesum writer.. thanksss... 😳

U actually wrote wht I thought..n yes archu u correct.. glad to know it.. 😃

Romance b/w a Dakoo rani..tht's our Shera n our Prince Charming i.e Veer will be rillllllllllllliiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii PASSIONATED...vry vry passionate..... ya i know. 😛

will give kinda full edits.. wow... really! waiting for them. 😃

btw loved it yet again..... thanks again.. 😃

Thanx for the PM darling..... thanks to u for reading Madhu 😊

Love ya loads shonu.....t.ccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

Love you 😃

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