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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
congrates jayathi
i like all the stories but the most lovely was the one with jai as professor
and the other one choti se asha

love all the ffs but these stay closer to heart
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: jeenal20

HEY JAYATI

i have a task for u
U have to write and FF on the following storyline for me
Jai is a top Indian Spy, and is currently posted near the borders as an army officer in disguise, to see or lesson the illegal activities goin around the borders of kashmir
so u can use the valleys of kashmir has the bacdrop of the story.
and there he meets our heroin bani, and gets attacted to her on first sight
bani is a daughter of a hindu family, but her parents have died long back, so now she is being looked after by their neibhours who are very good people and treat her as their own dauther, and bani helps er father in his shepherd work.
jai asks the villagers to help him if they see and illegal activity going near by and inform him, and thus a journey starts between jai and bani
as bani keeps on sending him various mesaages, hidden in between corn or in the kheer bowl etc and informs jai about the activities
and jai knows that bani is attracted to him, but he stays aways as he knows that he is a spy, and he lives a life full of danger
jai even payes for banis higher studeis, as bansi father could not afford it
so for thanking bani has made a muflur for him, with his name written on it
from then on their love blossoms, and bani is send on a mission fully trained by jai in disguise as a role of servant to some near by village, as there is gonna be some big operation to be held, and jai wanted the info on it, so bani agrees to go there
but banis father is not ready to send her, saying if something happens to her or her izzat then who will marry her,
that time jai says that he will marry her
this is the intro
now u have to develop the story ahead tin
i wanted to write on it
but was not getting anything, just got the story
but how to progress it, i was all blank at that time
so what better way then u to write the story form me
i know dear
u will do a gr88 job, as usaal you do it with ur other ffs
Regards
jeenal



jeenal darling, doesnt it sems like the story of the movie "Hero - Love Story of a spy" starring sunny deol and preity zinta... i think so...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23
abhi it is
but i dont like the complete movie
i only want tin to write the sunny deols and pretty zintas part
and that too the before interval
abnd that too making it an adaptation
not to take the complete same to same sences
but to give it a new flavour
actually i wanted to write on that
but was not able to come up with anything
as whenever i used to sit and write something, i used to go blank
Edited by jeenal20 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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dii going blank se yaad aaya ki meine bhi ek ss likha jo atak gaaya ahi..actually monsoon collection ke liye likha tha..lol..
ab monsoon se winter ho gaaya hai phir bhi story is stuck wahi ka wahi
so any1 redy to help me..pweezs contac!!😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: teenzs

dii going blank se yaad aaya ki meine bhi ek ss likha jo atak gaaya ahi..actually monsoon collection ke liye likha tha..lol..

ab monsoon se winter ho gaaya hai phir bhi story is stuck wahi ka wahi
so any1 redy to help me..pweezs contac!!😃

No problem but let me come back from leave next weekend
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: tintiny

No problem but let me come back from leave next weekend

🤗🤗
thankkkuuuuuu😳😳😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Congrats Tin, I do not read fan fics but I sure do understand that people love your stories on the forum...it is a great blessing to be a creative person and I hope you continue to make use of your creative talent...good luck!!


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