Chand ke Paar Challo (FAN-FIC)

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Zara

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Hey everybody, sorry for being late in writing the fan-fic , just busy with Exams. But here the fan-fic comes.. Btw thanks for the comments 😊

Rahul drives off from there - Anisa lookes at the window and wants to ignore him

Rahul: Where do you live ?

Anisa: 5 min ride from here, i can walk if you want me to leave..??

Rahul: Listen i said i will drive you and now i am doing it, so can you please just shut up and let me drive

Anisa looks angry : Donnot talk like this to ME!

Rahul: Are you miss univers?

Anisa: How funny you are, i forgot laughing, and gave an angry look

Rahul: whats ur name btw?

Anisa: Tumse matlab?

Rahul: Allright na batao tumhara kya naam hain, i will nick name you.. hmmm.. how does Miss Karela sound?

Anisa : Arghhhh, can you please stop talking to me

Rahul: I could, but i wont .. cuz you are in MY CAR, MY PROPERTY

Anisa just lookes away

Rahul: so here we are miss Karela .

Anisa: Ermm.. Okay

Takes her bag and starts leaving. But then she feels bad cuz he helped her out with the gundays, and she did not even thank him.. so she went back

Rahul: Did you forget something?

Anisa: Ermm .. thank you ..

Rahul: Kyaaaaa? what did you say i didnt hear it ? In a teasing way

Anisa: i said thanks (in a very silent way)

Rahul: Plz be loud, cuz i cant hear you

Anisa: ARghh THANKS!!! Acha.. i said i was THANKING you..

Rahul burst out with laughter

Anisa: Mujhe patah tha, this is why i didnt say thanks.. i am going BYE!

Rahul: Nooo hey stay.. comes out of his car, and runs after anisa

Rahul: You Are MOOOOST Welcome , with a smile

Anisa looks him in a very irritated way and walks from there..

gtg , i hope you guys likes it

PLZ COMMENT! :) THNKS

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Zara

@Miss 911

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

I know this one is short, but promise next time it will be longer

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@shania@yahoo.co

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

😊 THIS SERIAL IS REALLY NICE IT'S DIFFERENT FROM SAAS BAHU SERIALS SO IT MUST NEVER END IT'S FOOLISH TO END IT.WHY ENDING ONLY THIS SERIAL THERE ARE SO MANY BORING SERIALS BIDAAI BANOO MAIN TERI DULHANN KASAM SE KAYAMATH RUNNING FOR YEARS AND YEARS WHY NOT ANYBODY THINKS OF ENDING THEM.WHY THE CHANNEL WANTS TO END THIS SERIAL ONLY WHEN ON OTHER CHANNELS OLD SERIALS ARE RUNNING FOR SUCH A LONG TIME.THIS IS REALLY STUPID DECISION,WHY NOT CHANGING THE TIME OF THIS SERIAL WHEN YOU CAN CHANGE THE PLOT OF JASUBEN JAYANTILAL THEN WHY NOT CKPC,WHAT'S WRONG IN THAT.AND IF THEY WANTS SHOW SEETA AUR GEETA THEN WHY NOT CHANGING IT'S PLOT AND PUT CKPC ON SOME OTHER PLOT LIKE -FOR EXAMPLE-8.00 PM SEETA AUR GEETA 9.30 CKPC WHATS SAY THEN AUDIENCES WILL BE ABLE TO SEE TWO SERIALS AND YOU DON'T HAVE TO END IT ALSO.