Chand ke Paar Challo (FAN-FIC)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi I want to start a new Fan-Fic hope you guys gonna like it..
This story is about an simple girl named Anisa, she is very joyfull .. loves talking .. she likes dancing, singing and is very down to earth.. loves her family. She is 18 years old - her family is middleclass, but she isnt ashamed of what she's got. She is what she is - She is a big charmer in a good way. Doesnt date any guys, or have any boyfriends. She is veeerrryyy scared of these kind of things.. she is very naiv - but still knows what right and wrong, and has her limits which wouldnt cross.
in her family there is
Her Mothers name is Suriya .. she is a loving caring mother.. loves her daughters, and does everything for them.
Her fathers name : Jalal .. he is also a loving, caring father ..
Her sister : Sana .. Anisa's Big sister .. loves her sister .. serious girl, doesnt get how anisa can be happy all the time.
The Other family
Rahul .: He is the most charming, guy.. everybody in the city is in love with him. HE is a big PLAYER , loves kidding around . Got his dreams which he wanna fullfill.
Arjun: Very serious guy, but sometimes he can be sweet and loving.
Others info i will tell later.. GTG
Comment Thankss
Love Zara !

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Posted: 16 years ago
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really good=)
I am gona read for Arjun & Anisa..........❤️
Update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey thanks for the comments!
Its a very shiny day and we see a girl sleeping in her room.. And then one lady comes waking her up
Suriya: Betaa uthoo .. the breakfast is ready
Girl: 5 mins
Suriya: Noo get up u've been saying 5 min in 30 min, now wake up !
Girl: Mamaa pleaseee it is sunday
Suriya: What will happend when you gonna get married? They wouldnt lissten to your 5 min then
Girl: ufffooo mamaa maine shaadi nahin kerni - ghar jamayi rakh lein ghe (Teasfully) we still doesnt sees the girl
Suriya: GharJamayi ki bachi, chal uth warna main tumhare papa ko bulao ghi
We sees the girl now.. she is very beautifull simple .. and its ANISA
Anisa: mamaa acha challo uth gayi hoon, where is sana??
Suriya: She is making breakfast - deekho tumhari bari behan kitni sulji hain, our tum
Anisa: Yeaaaaah allright.. iam gonna come in a min
Mama: Aghar eik min mein nahin aayi tu phir tumhari khair nahin
and leaves from there
Anisa: OKAY BOSS (SMILING)
She now takes Red salwaar kameez on , and comes down stairs .. the first thing she does is hugging her mom from the back
Suriya: Ufffooo Anisa.. mujhe tu darra hi diya
Anisa: (Laughing) I LOVE YOU SOOOO MUCH - you know that right?
Suriya: Yeaah - apni behan ki maddat kero
Anisa: OKAY BOSS!!!
Anisa now goes into the kicthen where she sees Sana making pancakes..
Anisa: Uhmmm .. kitni achi khusboo hain .. yummy - Tu kitna acha khana banati hain.. waah ji waah
Sana: Haan haan, ofcourse - ab kya chahiye tujhe??
Anisa: how mean why do you think i want something?
Sana: Kyunkeh tu tabh hi tareef kerti hain jab tujhe kuch chaiye hota hain
Anisa blushes
Anisa: You know me very well dont ya.. (smiling) Its just that...
Sana interups: that what??
Anisa: Koi friends ke saath meine film dekhne jana hain, tu mama our papa se ijazat manghao naa...
Sana: Tuje patah hain na keh abbu kabhi nahin ijazat dein ghe..
Anisa: plzzz sirf tu hi unko manna sakti hain plzzzzz and makes a cute face which sana cant say no to.
Sana : acha i will see what i can do
Anisa: YEAAAH YOU ARE THE BEST SISTER EEVEERRR!!! and hugs her sister from back.
When the breakfast is made, they come to the table and start eating, Anisa makes the face to sana to say something abt the movie, and kicks her into her foot.
Her father sees whats going on between Sana and Anisa, so he says
Father: Kya baat hain beta, yeh kussar pussar kya ho rahi hain?
Anisa: Nahin kuch nahin, bas waise hi..
Sana: haan .. Abujii maine aap se kuch poochna tha..
Father: haan beta poocho, Kya baat han?
Sana: WOh bat yeh hain keh, Anisa keh koi friends hain tu movie deekhne jaa rahe hai, our uska bi dil chah raha tha. Woh eik daffa deekhne jaa nahi sakti??
Suriya: Hmm - Sana yeh tumhe Anisa ne kaha hoga hena?
Anisa: nahiiin nahiin, maine tu nahin kaha .. seriously!!
Father: hmmmmm.. kitne bajhe movie laghe gi?
Anisa: jii 5pm?
Father : Allright lekin jaldi wapis aajana!
Anisa jumps in joy.. and kisses her father on cheek and says thanks
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow nice part cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thank you guys.. i will write soon.. but now gtg.. byeez :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 2

Anisa is really happy that she got permission to see the movie with her friends, so she wents up into her room. And starts finding suitable clothes for the ocation. She want to wear something beatifull and elegant, but not to much OVER. As shes never been in a cinema to see a movie.
Anisa : Sanaaaaaaaaaa .. where is my black and white salwar kameez? nobody answeres so she starts yelling over and over again.
Sana comes rushing : what happend ??
Anisa smiling : Errmmm .. do you know where my black and white salwaar kameez is ?
Sana : Anisa tu bi na , main samjhi keh tujhe kuch ho gaya tha..
Anisa: Sorry .. but where is it..?
Sana: hmm.. wait main deekhti hoon .. then she starts looking and then she finds it .. Anisa tumhare paas parha hoya hain, our tujhe nazar hi nahin aarahii??
Anisa Blushes and says .. ohhh yaha tu maine deekha hi nahin, soo what do you think .. should i wear this with white bangels?
Sana: tu cinema jaa rahi hain ya shaadi mein?
Anisa: Uffffoooo then you tell me what i should wear?
Sana: Just wear something simple, and not to over.
Anisa: Okay okay i will find something..
So she starts finding the clothes again, she takes a white churi daar pajama, and a small kurta, with white dupatta. Looking very georgeus..
She now waits outside her door to her friends to come, and some girl comes out . It is (P & G From CKPC, in this P's name is Payal and G's name is Gori, they are also simple girls)
Payal: i cant belive it , we got the permission
Gori: Yeah mean either ..
Anisa: Lets go fast the movie starts in about 30 mins ..
Payal> Lets find a rikhsa ..
Anisa : their is a rikhsa come..
They all runs after the rikhsa..
In the Cinema
Gori : comeee we got the ticket , now lets go in there
They run and then when anisa runs she falls over her dupatta and falls over a guy, she closes her eyes and when she opens them there is this guy holding her and there faces meets. Its RAHUL !!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow gr8 part cont soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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She stares at rahul and he stares at her - but then she looks at the side at everyone were staring at them both, so she whisperes
Anisa: Mujhe chori
rahul: What? he couldnt hear her
Anisa: mujhe choro naa!
Rahul: Mujhe kaha shouq hain tumhe pakarne ka.
so he let her go, and anisa fells on the ground, now she stand up and says
Anisa: Tumhe sharam nahi ati, you could have sat me down (scolding)
Payal: rehne de na
Anisa: Nahin in ameer ladkoun ko tu tameez hi nahin sikayi gayi, a bunch of loosers.
Rahul: EXUSE ME!! what is your problem..
Anisa: My problem is YOU!
Rahul: Then you have a big problem - and comes really close to Anisa, she now takes a step back
Anisa: In lougon keh moon nahin laghna chahiye, chal movie deekhte hain, and is about to go when Rahul takes Anisa's arm so she looks backward, but then rahuls friends says to stop it . So he stops, and leaves from there.Anisa goes with her friends into see the movie, but in the whole movie she starts thinking about Rahul, and what idiot he was. When the movie ends, they start going out . But Anisa is still in her thougts.
Gori: Kya hua anisa? what you thinking about?
Payal: Haan throug out the whole movie you were so quite
Anisa: yaar kuch nahi - lets enjoy the daaaay and starts laughing
Gori: tu bilkul pagal hai..
Anisa: thats why we are friends and blinks at her ..
Payal: Its kindda late now lets go
When they walks payal and Gori's house was another direction then Anisa's so she says that she could walk alone. They all hug eachothers and says goodbye. After she starts walking - she starts feeling someone is behind her , soo she looks behind her - and is some guys drunk walking after her.
1 guy: ayee hayeee chammak challo
Anisa stars walking very fast, and it was in a nowhere place , where nobody then her and the guys were. and the guys starts run after her, and then they made a circle out of her.
2 guy: Uff Kya maal hain
Anisa: Please mujhe choro ..
3 guy: Kyuu tujhe kyu chore .. and comes closer to her - but then she pushes him and starts running in panic - and then she sees a car.. soo she starts waving at the car, to stop. And when the car stops a guy comes out and its RAHUL. Anisa runs to him
Anisa: Please mujhe bachao .. these guys are after me,
Now the guys are there aswell and Rahul takes her in behind of him.
Rahul: What are you guys doing yaar, starts playfully
1 guy: what do you mean..
Rahul: You want HER !!! and makes a disgustet face? i thougt you guys also had a standart in choosing girls.
The guys says: Tu choor use phir hum pata te hain ke kistara ki standard hain humari.
Rahul : Okay fine here you got her
and steps aside, When Anisa sees what rahul is upto she gets furrius.
When the guys comes to take her, Rahul punches the guy.. and then they start fighting, Anisa looks terrified. After a while of fighting they guys begans to run.
Rahul looks at behind where Anisa is
Anisa: What did you mean by YOU WANT HER??
Rahul lookes confused
Anisa: How could you say that, and why the hell did you mean by take her?? I mean
Rahul interups: hey hey hey .. i helped you out of these guys and you start scolding at me??!!
Anisa: BUT WHAT THE HELL DID YOU MEAN BY SAYING THAT??
Rahul: Okay fine.. should i call them back, so they could do whatever they want to ..
Anisa is to stuburn to say thanks or sorry so she says: Okay FINE!
Rahul: aaj keh zamane main tu bhalai ki koi ehmiyat hi nahin hain
Anisa looks embaressed but still doesnt want to say thanks ..
Rahul sits in the car and says: You want a lif?
Anisa: NO .. maine khudi challi jayo ghi
Rahul: FINE!! And drives very slow , and beside her.
Anisa looks at him .. then she opens the door and sits innit.
I have to go now.. but do comment please :)
Thanks..
Zara
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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG amazing part update ASAP

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow cool part cont asap

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