FF:MadeForEachOther Ch5 Pg7 14/4 Note Pg8

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Hi everyone. This is my first time writing a FF. Hope you like it.
Made For Each Other.
Summary

Bani fell in love with Jay the first time she saw him. However there were many reasons why they couldn't be together. Just to name a few, he was married, he was 18 years her senior and he was her teacher. After being advised by Jay himself that it's just a silly crush, Bani goes to America for further studies.

10 years later, Bani returns to find that Jay has not changed one bit. He was as handsome as ever and a real sweetheart. Will she fall in love with him all over again or was it really a silly crush?

Should I continue?

Nadia😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
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will be waiting to read your FF dear
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the summary sounds good
will be waiting for the FF
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Hey!
My hindi's not very good. There will be bits of hindi in the story.

Chapter 1

"Bunnnny!!! Hurry up; we are going to be late. Well that's nothing new but still jaldi karo," Diya shouted.

Diya and Bani were childhood friends. They grew up together, went to the same schools and coincidently always in the same classes. They shared all their secrets with each other. Diya was from an upper middle class family and being the only child she was spoilt rotten. Bani however was from a middle class family. Also being the only child; however she wasn't spoilt because both her parents were busy working but still wasn't earning that much to buy anything and everything their daughter wanted.

"I'm ready. Come let's go. Oh before I forget, here I made sandwich for you because I know you must have missed breakfast," Bani said while picking up her back pack.

"You are so sweet, you know that?" Diya said while walking out of the house.

"Tell me something I don't know," Bani replied giving a cheeky smile.

Everyday Diya comes to Bani's house and they would go to school together in Diya's car, her 18th birthday present from her parents. They would chat about school and do their last minute homework on the way.

"I hate today's timetable, wish I could change it, "Bani said looking sad.

"Why?"Diya said looking confused. Before Bani could answer she realized it herself.

"Oh silly me, I had to ask?? I know why, because there is no mathematics today and that means no Jay Walia right?"

"Hmm.. Diya, is it weird that I have a crush on my teacher?" Bani asked sadly.

"I don't think so but he is way older than you and he's happily married. My parents are friends with his wife, Meera. Oh I completely forgot to tell you this. Yesterday, my mum and dad were invited to Walia House for dinner. My father had some last minute work, so I accompanied my mum. My God Bani, their house is so huge and grand. Hey did I ever tell you that Jay Walia was born with a silver spoon in his mouth. That's why he lives in a huge house and drives a Mercedes Benz. He teaches because teaching is his passion."

"You told me all this already," Bani replied and turned to look out the window feeling hurt.

They finally reached school and Bani was in a bad mood. When they entered their class, their classmate told them that there has been a change in timetable.

"I wonder what subject it is now, I hope not geography because I didn't complete my homework yet, "Bani said.

Just as she finished her sentence Jay Walia walked in with a dashing smile, looking fresh and of course drop dead gorgeous.

"Good morning class!" Jay Walia said and did a small bow.

"Good morning Mr. Walia, "everyone replied.

Bani's bad mood instantly vanished and she was now grinning like a maniac.

"Well I'm sure that you all have heard about the change in timetable. It was my idea as some of you had requested more math lessons because you can't catch up. So from now onwards first things first on Monday morning you'll be seeing my face and also same for every other day. Now we have math lessons everyday. Isn't that wonderful?" Jay said happily.

After hearing that, Bani's grin only got wider.

"Thank God for small mercies, "Bani whispered to Diya.

"Bani stop grinning, others will think that you have completely lost it,"Diya replied.

"Those of you with the sad expressions, please learn something from Bani, she looks so thrilled with the new timetable," Jay said while smiling at Bani.

Jay's comment made Bani blush crimson. After that lessons went on as per normal. Even though Bani stares at Jay during the whole lesson, she makes it a point to revise her work at home and therefore she understands and math is her best subject. Actually she made it her best subject so that she always scores highest marks during a class test and gets chocolates as a reward from Jay.

"That'll be all for today's lesson. Today I'm conducting extra lessons after school. The weaker students, you know who you are, please make it an effort to come. Thank you class," Jay said and again giving a small bow as a sign of respect. Then he walked out of the class.

"Eh Diya let's attend the extra lesson,"Bani asked Diya excitedly.

"When Mr. Walia addressed the weaker students, I don't think he was thinking of you. You are the top student for math in the class, "Diya replied looking at Bani weirdly.

"So what? Just follow me na, I'll do your homework for you. Please, pretty please,"Bani did her famous puppy face that always works.

"Theek hai, theek hai. Gosh you're so irritating,"Diya said.

"I love you too,"Bani replied knowing that Diya didn't really mean it.

Bani kept waiting for the time to pass quickly so that school can end and she can see Mr. Jay Walia.

Nadia😛

p.s. please do comment. Its my first time writing so would like some feedback.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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A crush on your math teacher. Very nice though the subject is a difficult to digest if the teacher is Jai Walia then why not. A different stroy so really looking forward to it. So are we going to come to the present mode where Bani is back from her studies. and one thing how old is Jai in the story.
Bye Pls do continue
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nadia
so bani and diya are really good freinds yaar
and bani going lattu on her teacher JW
agar teacher jw jaisa ho toh koi bhi lattuu ho jaayega yaar
plz cont soon
Edited by jeenal20 - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey nice ff.....
loved bani's character....
she is cute....
can't wait to read more...
do cont. soon
Edited by koolgal - 17 years ago
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Thank you Heartbreak, jeenal20, kuttu, lizzy_de, koolgal for reading and commenting.

Jay is 36 and Bani is 18 years old.

Chapter 2

Only a handful of students turned up for the extra lesson, so the students joined tables and sat close together. Much to Bani's delight Jay was sitting directly opposite her. Whenever he would explain the equations, she would stare at him without even blinking. When he would look in her direction she would just give him a nod indicating that she understood but in reality nothing was going into her mind at all.

After school, Bani and Diya were walking back to the car when Bani said,

"Diya I think I have fallen in love with Mr. Walia. I just thought it was a crush but whenever I see him all I do is stare, when he smiles I forget to breathe. He's like a perfect gentleman and a real sweetheart. He never gets angry. Even if we do something wrong, he explains to us so lovingly instead of scolding or punishing us. I think I'm going pagal."

"Bani that's nothing new, you were in love with him the first time you saw him, you just realized it now. Aur rahi pagal ki baath, to tu pehle se hi pagal thi,"

"I don't know what to do and instead of helping me out, you are making fun of me, great just great, just what I need."

"Bani look, in a month's time we are going to do our final year examinations. After that you can decide if you want to tell him how you feel or just forget it and continue your studies or whatever you decide to do after college."

"I think you're right. I shall concentrate on my studies first then decide what to do next. Thanks Diya."

"Anytime dost, now lets go and eat I'm very hungry."

*****

Bani did her best to stop thinking about Jay and studied very hard for the final year exams. After the exams were over, she decided to visit Jay in his house.

*****

The house or rather the mansion was huge. There was a waterfall in the middle and a few cars parked at the side. The butler opened the door and she asked for Mr.Walia. He ushered her in to the hall and told her to wait there. Bani was getting goosebumps all over. She can't believe that she is actually standing in Mr. Walia's house waiting for him to come so that she can tell him her feelings. To a married man who is her teacher and not to mention very much older then her. She decided that it wasn't a good idea. She got up, turned around and was about to make it to the door when she heard,

"Bani! What a surprise and coincidence, I was actually thinking about you just now," Mr.Walia said walking down the grand staircase.

He was dressed so casually in a pair of faded jeans and a polo t-shirt. Bani has always seen him in shirts and suits but never this. She suddenly couldn't breathe.

"Please come, have a seat. What would like to have? A soft drink or tea or coffee? Would you like to eat anything?"

Bani walked back to the sofa and sat down looking like she might pass out any moment.

"Umm, just water would do thanks."

"Are you sure?"

"Yes Mr.Walia thank you."

Jay turned and told his butler something then turned back to Bani giving her his dashing smile.

"So Bani, how was the exams? I think I've asked everyone except you? How do you think you'll do?"

"Umm…I… I think I'll do quite well. Whatever I studied, came out."

"That's good. So you wanted to ask me anything?"

"I… I actually wanted tell you something," Bani replied while looking down.

"Oh ok go ahead."

"Well I-

Just then the butler came holding a tray with a glass of water and a few tidbits.

"Thank you." Bani said and she took a sip of water and looking Jay who was literally staring at her. How ironic she thought.

"You were saying.."

"Main…Main…Main," Bnai knew she was totally nervous because that's when she starts talking hindi.

"I've got it so far," Jay said leaning forward prompting her to go on.

"Main," Bani just couldn't get out of her mouth.

"Tum bakhri ki tarah main main kya keh rahe ho, age bolo na," Jay said jokingly.

Bani closed her eyes and took a deep breath. Then she exhaled and opened her eyes. Okay I can do this, I can do this. She told herself.

"Okay. Main aap se yeh kehna chahti hoon ki, main aap se py-

Just then Bani heard someone say, "Jay darling, I'm going. I'll be back late. Don't wait for me."

Bani looked uo to see a beautiful lady wearing a grand designer sari with matching diamond jewelry holding a matching clutch bag in her hand walking towards them. Jay and Bani stood up. She approached Jay and gave him a quick kiss on the lips, turned to look and Bani, and gave her a small smile and then she left.

Bani heard Jay say, " Enjoy your kitty party and think of me if possible."

Then he turned to her and said, "My wife Meera, she just loves attending dinners and parties."

Reality struck Bani like lighting. She looked at her own dressing, jeans and a crumpled old t-shirt. Hair so short and untidy that she could be easily mistaken for a boy. Face full of pimples. Arms full of pen marks by her friends. Where was Mrs Jay Walia and where was she?

"Bani, are you okay? I've been saying your name three times now" Jay asked her.

He was standing right next to her. Bani knew that she had to get out as she can feel her tears building up. The last thing she needs is to break down in front of Jay Walia in his house. So quickly she made up something in her head.

"I just wanted to thank you for all that you have done for me and my class. You are one of the best teachers because you are always there when we need a helping hand. You never fail to encourage us when we feel down. So thank you, thanks for everything," Bani said and she turned and ran out of the house.

But that didn't stop Jay from seeing the tears that fell from her eyes. Somehow Jay knew that that was not what she came here to say to him, it was something else, but what could it be?

Thanks for reading.

Nadia

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey gr8 part
i read both parts
and really loved it
can't wait to read more
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OK meera ...is a gold digger???

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