Some scenes that i would like to see in MRD

First scene

This is what I would like to see in MRD in coming episodes

Well I don't know when Is the karwachath but have just imagined a small scesne out there

Chaijee : comes to kranti and tells her that tomorrow is the festival of karwachauth and she will be fasting for her husbands lambi umar and good health .chaijee asks kranti wheather she wants to do it as she (that is chaijee doest want kranti to force kranti to fast for Raj) she tell her that BBR wont be fasting as she is pregnant

Kranti thinks for a while and tells chaijee that she will fast for her husbands good health and lambi umar

Chaijee is very pleased with kranti and tell her that she will get her the SARGI .

While chaijee goes in her room and opens her cupboard and collects the items on which kullu asks .oh ji kya baat hai yeh almari mein kya dhund rahi ahi aap .

Chaijee: bas kranti puttar ke liye uski pehli sargi tayyar kar rahi hoon.

Kullu : oh main to bhul hi gaya .kab hai yeh karvachuth ?

Chaijee: ji kal hai .

As we all know that kullu is very romantic person and loves chaijee very much he has been keeping WRAT for chaijee since their marriage

Kullu : hamesha ki tarah main bhi wart rakhunga .

Chaijee ; ji aap ki tabiyat thik nahi hai jee app wrat mat rakhiye .

Kullu ; dekhiye ji yeh wrat hum hamesha se saat rakhte aye hai aur is saal bhi saat hi rakhenge .nahi to aap bhi humare waste yeh wrat nahi rakhengi .

Chaijee :agrees to kullu and says app say to koi haar hi nahi sakta .

Raj :comes to kullu room for asking about his health

Bauji ab tabiyat kaisi hai aap ki ???

Kullu : oy puttar mai theek hu aur ab to teri chaijee ke wrat se mujhe kuch bhi na hona hai.

Raj :wrat ??? kaisa wrat???

Chaijee : puttar kal karwachauth ka warath hai .

Raj gets lost in him self and thinks that kranti will not keep any wrat for him while chaijee is still talking about the wart .to him he is lost in his own thoughts

When suddenly chaijee says that puttar mujhe krati ke waste SADI kharidni hai SARGI mein den eke liye .

Sha tells raj that she has called the called the sari seller

(I don't know what u call him in hindi is it sadiwalla???/)

Raj suddenly wakes up from his thought when he hears KRANTI and asks chaijee

Raj: kya kranti yeh wrat rakh rahi hai ?

Kullu :oy yeh kya baat hui who tumhari biwi hai to wrat to rahkegi na???aur main to kehta hu ki tu bhi meri tarah apni biwi ki labi umar ke liye wrat rakh le .

Chaijee: abb apne pagalpan mein app mere puttar ko bhi shamil mat kijiye. Puttar yeh mazak kar rahe hai tuje wrat nahi rakhna .yeh sirf auratein rakhti hai

Raj ; blushingly says nahi chaijee main bhi yeh wrat rakhunga .

Jagat kaka enters and tells chaijee that the sari seller is come downstairs

Chaijee ; chal puttar tub hi neeche aakar dekh le aur kranti waste sari passand kar le

Raj ; nahi chaijee aap hi pasand kar li jiye

Chaijee ; thik hai kranti se keh de maine use neeche bulaya hai .

Raj : thik hai chaijee

Raj enters the room and looks at kranti as he was looking whe she sang the aarti .she is busy cleaning her shelf

Suddenly chunk of clothes flow out from the shelf and raj gets out of his LA LA LAND and goes and helps kranti in arranging them

Suddenly he remembers that the chaijee has called her down stairs to look out for a sari

So

Raj : main to bholl hi gaya chaijii ne tumhe niche bulaya hai

Kranti ;kyun ??

Raj; who sargi ke liye sadi chun n eke liye .

Kranti locks the cupboard and goes down stairs raj follows her too

Chaijee to the vendor

CH :ji yeh humari bahu ka pehla larwachauth hai to kuch ache cheez dikhaiye

Vendor; ji maaji

Kranti smilingly looks at the sarees and chaijee and she takes look at them while RAJ is lstaring at her from other side lovingly

She is putting on sarees just to see which one is better

NOW THE FAMOUS DDLJ SCENE

While she is trying those saree she happens to look at raj who is looking at her

She ahs a blue saee in her hand when they happen to make an eye contact

(raj and kranti)

Raj just nods his head to say he does like the sari

Then kranti takes another one dark red and looks at raj

He nods his head again to say no

Now she take a PINK saree and looks at him

He gives a broad smile at her to select the same

But kranti take the previous onoe as says that shel take the dark red one RAJ put s his head down and goes away

After raj leaves she asks the vendor to pack the pink saree which RAJ has selected .

The day of karwachouth

BBR is busy eating delicious packwaan on the table and asks raj to have

Deverji aap to kuch kha hi nahi rahen hai???

Raj says ; ji who aaj court mein ek important case hai and I m getting late .

Chaijeee; puttar sham ko jaldi ghar aajaana

Raj :ji chaijee .

And raj take the leave

Raj comes back home at the lunch and BBR is again eating on the dining table

BBR: Deverji aa gaye aap ? devrani ji ne paneer ke parathe baneye hai jaldi haath muh dhokar aajaiyee??

Kranti looks at raj (normal look)

Raj ; ji main khakar aya hoon.

Chaijee; gives a cofusing look to raj and follows him to his room

Raj puttar tune to kaha tha kit u wrat rakhega to phir?

Raj ;Ji chaijee woh bas main ne yuh hi kehdiya main nahi chata?.ki kraaaaa

Kranti enters the room

Chaijee :looks at raj and keeps her hand on his and smiles

Chaijee leaves the room

Kranti : kya hua aaj suhe se pareshan lag rahe ho?

Raj : kuch nahi main thik hun.

Kranti; who maine gajar ka halwa banaya that tumhare liye le aaoo???

Raj : nahi man nahi hain

Kranti .gives confusing look at him and leaves the room

Its 9 pm and raj gets ready with a nice golden kurta and hands folded (I love him this way)

Kranti tell him to go out as she also has to get ready.

Raj goes downstairs where lullu is ready and waiting for his chand to come.

Kullu starts telling raj the stories of his pehla karwachuth with chaijee.

By the time kranti gets ready FIRST TIME IN A SARI (I really wish to see her in a sari)

And raj is busy enjoying and laughin with hi fathers stories while just turns his head towards the steps and turns backs and gets captivated looking at kranti in the sari (pink his favorite colour) and just keeps looking at her on and on non nono on kranti on the other hand find rajvirs stare very uncomfortable but he is not ready to stop looking at her

BBR says that Chand nikal aya hai jaldi se chat par aajaye

Raj stands besides kranti and wispers into her ears sach mein chaand nikal aya hai

Kranti just looks back into his eye and both stare at each other .

Buaji tells kranti to perform the puja

Kranti looks at raj through the thing which is used I hope ul get it (chalnii)

(my hindi vocabulary is really bad as I m from goa )

She performs the puja and she touches rajs feet and raj just holds her on her sholders and feels a bit embarresed .

Kullu and chaijee also perform the puja simultaneously

Kullu : oh main kya meri soniye mujhe bhi pani pilakar mere wrat pura kijiye

Chaijee : app bhi na

Kranti ; aab jaldi se pani pilado mujhe .bhook ke mare meri to jaan nikal rahi hai (remember when they forgot to take the dabba while going to the circuit house she was very hungry same here )

Chaijee : puttar jaldi se is pani pilakar wrat pura karo.

Kullu ; kranti puttar ab tub hi ise pani pillakar iska wrat pura kar de

Kranti (surprised ) ji???????

Chijee : haan puttar isne bhi tere waste yeh wrat rakha hai aur subhe se kuch nahi khaaya

Kranti looks at raj with a question in her eyes

Raj slowly looks at her poking eyes and drinks the water to complete his wrat .

Both eat their dinner and raj goes into their room

Kranti comes into the room raj is standing besides the window she comes and

Kranti : tumne karwachoth ka wrath kyun rakha tha??

Raj looks at her lovingly and asks her

Tumne yeh wrat kyun rakha tha???

She says who to mujhe chaijee ne pucha to mein unhe mana nahi kar payi

Raj : mera bhi yahi haal tha bauji ne jab mujhse kaha toh main unhe manna nahi kar paya.

Kranti gives a angry looks and goes and puts her bister (bed)

Raj ; tumhien toh dusri sadi pasand ayi thin na???to phir ??????

Kranti .does not have any answer she says that woh jo mojhe passand ayi thi who kafi mehgi thi is liye maine yeh wali passand karli .

Raj : achha 200 rupye 300 rupye se jyada kab se ho gaye ???????/

Us dukandar ko paise maine hi diye the.

Kranti: veryy embarrassingly .just gives and weird look and says mujhe bahout neend aa rahi hai.

Raj : just smiles and goes to sleep

That's it for today

I am aware that our forum has very talented writers like ranjana

This is a small attempt that I have made to jot down the feelings I have for MRD JODI and how I would like them to bring closer hope ul like it.

Your comments both positive and negative are welcome

Hope I m not very filmy and boring writer

Any hindi mistakes then pls excuse me for the same

With lots of love

RIYA

sweet work keep it up

WOW its really amazing👍🏼

Oh woww Riya u hv written the whole Karwachauth sequence so beautifully👏👏..I m really amazed😳...why can't these creatives show such beautiful scenes😡...I was wishing that the creatives this week will show the Lohri festival in MRD but that never happened😡...at least if they can show these festivals then it will b easier for thm only to take the RK-Love story ahead😳..

Riya its toooooo good yaar 👏👏👏. Everyone writes so well in the forum, maine to soch liya hai jab kuch bura lagega tabhi comments karenge. naye naye positive comments kaha se layenge roj roj.

thanks every body for taking time to read my work .well im so engrossed in this serial that the whole day i can only think about raj and kranti .