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Posted: 16 years ago
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Guys I don't even know why I'm posting this! It just sort of popped into my head. Guess it's based on my life a little. I'm going back to my childhood home soon and this is sort of how I feel about what it's going to be like. Please leave comments guys, tell me it's horrible if you need to!

Not the Same

You move a step away
You lean over the threshold
You're pulled back
It's all as you left it
Yet still not the same

You step into the garden
Edge towards the gate
Again you return
Nothing's changed
But it's not the same

You open the gate
A foot steps out
Someone calls you from behind
You answer
But their voice is not the same

You're on the street
You lose your courage
You run back
Nothing looks different
But it doesn't feel the same

You leave the country
Your roots call you; you return
Everything is the same
You are not the same
And you never will be

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Posted: 16 years ago
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it's very nice...I like the feelings its so true..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: putturani


Everything is the same
You are not the same
And you never will be



Now this is what I call good poetry! It's really touching yaar and I feel that I can relate to the whole experience throughout.

Btw you used to post a fan fiction in the HP section-ages ago-right? I can remember your username😛.

-EraN
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