Rahul and Muskaan,An Ekta Parody Upd pg4

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys!!!!!!!!
i know everyone's really sad about mayank's departure from the show and the current track of muski....so,sakina(justluvmayank) and radhika(luv_dmg_armaan) thought of doing something that will surely lighten the mood............
any guesses?
well....we've come up with a rahul muskaan story....in pure balaji serial style!!!!!!!!just like ekta kapoor's dramatic serials!!!!!!!!well....we're sure you'll like it so keep reading!!!!!so here's the first part!!!!!
Rahul and Muskaan,An Ekta Parody

Disclaimer:We are deeply sorry if we have hurt anyone in the process of writing this fan fiction.If we have, please forgive us, this is just a fanfiction that is for pure enjoyment and is a parody of the art of the melodrama in daily soaps.

Thank you Sakina and Radhika
credits~~mansi....thanx for ur suggstions!you can join us here anytime and write!!!
Character Web

Muskaan's brother=Atul,loves rahul's sis anjali

Rahul's sister=Anjali

Armaan-Rahul's best friend

Ridhimma-Muskaan's best friend.

Abhimanyu-Playboy currently Anjali

Nikita-OOO the vamp!Rahul and her are having an affair,nikita is muskaan's foster sister...

Rahul Muskaan-The ultimate K-ekta jodi.

Muskaan sat down looking at her reflection in the mirror.Her eyes slowly faced her reflection in the mirror.she looked simply stunning in a beautiful red shaadi ka lehnga.She was about to get married to a complete stranger,but was it better than living a life as a foster care child?She was still indecisive about that.Just then her brother strode in.Her real brother not foster.

Atul-muskaan....dekh....aaj tu mujhe chodke chali jaa rahi hai!!!!!ab koi tujhe tang nahi karega....koi tere saath sharaarat nahi karega.....lekin meri pyaari behna(very mournful music) mujhse zyaada tujhe koi pyaar nahi kar sakta!!!!!main tere bina kya karoonga????

Muskaan-Atul bhaiyya...(faces the other way in a very dramatic gesture,very dramatic music)Main kya karu??Beti ko aapna babul ka ghar chodna hi padta hai....main bhi aapko bohot miss karungi!!lekin bhaiyya...ab mere pati hi mere sab kuch hai....mere bhagwaan hai....mera din unse hi shuru hoga...aur unse hi khatam....main unke charno mein jagah paake hi khush hoon!!!!!
atul' eyes filled with tears.
muskaan-mujhe aashirwaad do bhaiyya!!!!!!!!
she fell to his feet,crying.
atul-khush raho meri pyaari!!!!!!!!!
he blessed her...(background music-phoolon ka taaron ka...sabka kehna hai....ek hazaaron mein...meri behna hai....)
muskaan-waise nikita di kahaan hain?.(referring to her foster sister nikita..)
MEANWHILE............
rahul put on his shaadi ka sherwani in anger....his mom was forcing him to get married to a middle class girl...and be stuck with her for the rest of her life...him...rahul grewal...the ultimate K-serial hero,loverboy....to get married to a seedhi saadhi middle class girl!!!!!!!
he felt like puking already....
and what about nikita...his dear girlfriend???
nikita was sitting on rahul's bed
niki-rahul darling!!!!!!!ab kya hoga?????/
rahul-(turns to face her dramatically)..tum fikar mat karo niki darling!!!!!!!!!main humesha tumhaara hi rahoonga!!!!!!!
niki-(doing a MAAR DAALA pose)..darling...tumhaari shaadi ho rahi hai....meri behen ki saath!!!!!!!tum kaise mere saath rahoge??
rahul-niki darling!!!!!!!mere shaadi jisse bhi ho....main tumhe kabhi nahi chodunga...tum sirf meri ho...aur main tumhaara......
song starts.....
rahul-jaaneja....is dil mein tum..tumhi sammayein ho...dil mein samaayein ho.........
he spread open his arms melodramatically....
rahul-TUM MERE HOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!.BAS MERE HO!!!!!!!!!!!!.MERE HI HO!!!!!!!!!!!!
DIL NA DUKHAYOGE....AB DOOR JAOGE NA..........
niki came running dramatically to his arms and hugged him tight,crying...
niki-tumhe kasamm ki hai kasam.............
rahul-niki darling i love you!!!!!!!!
niki-i love you too rahul darling!!!!!!!!!
meanwhile.....
atul-muskaan jaldi tayyar ho ja!!!!!!!!
muskaan-main ready hoon bhaiyya!!!!!!!!!!!!
she turned around dramatically and in the process,her long,beautiful hair whipped against the mirror and the mirror cracked.
muskaan-NAHI!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!sheesha toot gaya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!yeh toh apshagun hota hai!!!!!!!!!!!!maine ekta kapoor ke serial main dekha hai ki yeh apshagun hai!!!!!!!!!!ab kya hoga!!!!!!!!!!!kahin meri zindagi mein koi unhoni toh nahi hone wali hai??????????
well...thats the first part!!!!!!!!!!!!hope you liked it!
please leave your comments!!!!!!!!!!its a lot of effort...coming up with all this....so,after you finish reading,do leave a comment....it doesn't take long to post a comment!!!!!!
love,
saku,rads and mansi!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hehe congo rads saku n mansi ...

u hav done a gr8 job...

i am laughing like this after ages...i am rofl..... 🤣🤣🤣 atul muski scenes rofl

nikki with rahul part way typical ekta types n i can imagine muski n dat mirror cracking by just her strand of her hair is really hilarious......
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I read this again and I am on the floor again laughing.... 🤪 nahiiiiiiiiiiii..... yeh toh upshagun hain.... 😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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🤣..haha haha..cant stop laughing..
just 2 awesome😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hehe!! 😆 You guys are so silly but this is making us all laugh!!
Love you guys so much!! 🤗

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Posted: 16 years ago
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🤣 Oh my god I love you guys! 3 stooges indeed! Man, I hate K-serials more than anything so I got more of a kick out of this than the actual crap! Awesome job done guys! too damn good. The dramatic NAHIIIII and the ghastly music. The only thing ur missing is the "whoosh whoosh" sounds and the extreme zoom ins to the shocked faces with double nahi triple takes of them turning their heads saying "KYA" as if they didn't hear it the first 20 times. the expressions are to die for! over-acting ke badshahs! Way to go guys!
komz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: AshiYuvi4life

🤣 Oh my god I love you guys! 3 stooges indeed! Man, I hate K-serials more than anything so I got more of a kick out of this than the actual crap! Awesome job done guys! too damn good. The dramatic NAHIIIII and the ghastly music. The only thing ur missing is the "whoosh whoosh" sounds and the extreme zoom ins to the shocked faces with double nahi triple takes of them turning their heads saying "KYA" as if they didn't hear it the first 20 times. the expressions are to die for! over-acting ke badshahs! Way to go guys!

komz

thanx for the suggestion komz!!!!!!!!will surely keep them in mind!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hahahahahahahaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!🤣

Gosh,radhika,mansi and sakina............too good,dear........i cant stop laughing.........pure ekta style.......awesome........the rahul-nikki scene was typical ekta type........hahahahaaa......do continue it!!

-surbhi😊

Edited by arvanu - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks guys...Glad you liking it.🤗
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Posted: 16 years ago
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saku i hope u remember u r PROMISE NAH nOOOOOO Romantic sences wth nikki 😡😡 muj se bardahst nahi hoti 😆😆
Edited by divyashaz - 16 years ago

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