Rahul and Muskaan,An Ekta Parody Upd pg4 - Page 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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lmao. this is the best ever. this is the height of ridicule for ekta kapoor soaps!
its awesome please update soon n pm me.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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LOL. BRAVO!! 👏
amaziinnngggg ideaa!
do continuee soonnn!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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🤣..............i haven't finished reading it but i startdand it is fab......😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanx for liking it guys!!!!!!!we will try to update soon!!!!
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hey do pm me when you update if possible. 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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PART 3

Nikita and Atul went inside to find Muskaan and Riddhima crying. Riddhima Gupta was Muskaan's child-hood friend. Atul saddened seeing them. Nikita gave an irritated look. Muskaan gave and hugged Atul. Atul wiped her tears away and blessed her himself crying. Muskaan went to Nikita and she had an immediate transformation in to a close behna. She took out fake tears and hugged Muskaan with loads of love.

"Sab theek ho jayega Muskaan..chup ho jao.."
This played at the back..as BG score.
Ishq da galla kargaya Challa
Jisnu lag jave hojaye
Jag diya rasma ishq nehi janta
Dil betab hai tujhko hai mangta
Ishq ishq rab hai ishq ishq rab hai
Ishq ka rudba sabse ubcha
khoon se apne pyar ko sichaa
Ishq ishq rab hai ishq ishq rab hai
Kis Desh Mein Hai Mera Dil haye
Kis Desh Mein hai Mere dil
....................Kis Desh Mein hai....Mera Dil...................
Nikita took Muskaan down to the ceremony..leaving Atul and Riddhima alone in the room.
"Atul tumhe aaj mujhe batana hoga..tum mujhse pyaar karte ho ya nahin? Main itne saalon se tumhare pyaar main khoye rahi..kisi ka taraf aankh utha kar bhi nahin dekha..tum mujhe dhoka nahin de sakte..main mar jaunge.." Riddhima cried and cried and kept pulling Atul's collar.
"Riddhima chodo mujhe.." He tried to pull her away.."Chodo..main tumse kabhi pyaar nahin karta tha..tum jaise ladki iss ghar ki bahu kabhi nahin ban sakte..behtar yahi hoga ke tum mujhe bhul jao." He went away.
Riddhima's tears were going to start a new river. She was on her knees crying. "Ab kaun karega mujhse shaadi..main barbad ho gaye.." There was a babaji potrait nxt to her. She went and sat in front of it wiping her tears and fighting with god. "Kyun bhagwan..batiye apne aisa kyun kiya..kya dushmani thi apki mujhse..Main bilkul akeli pad gaye hun..Main kya karun..bataiye aap mujhe.." And her tears river again started flowing.
Armaan was passing by flipping a key-chain in his hand humming a song when he saw Riddhima crying. He didn't know who she was. Maybe Muskaan's relative because she was in her room.
"Hello who are you?" She had her back to him.
Hearing somebody's voice , she quickly brushed off her tears and sat up and saw a guy staring at her.
Armaan was in some ther world..Staring at the most beautiful girl he had ever seen.the camera zoomed on her eyes..then his eyes.
Na Hai Yeh Pana
Na Khona Hi Hai
Tera Na Hona Jane
Kyun Hona Hi Hai

Tum Se Hi Din Hota Hai
Surmaiye Shaam Aati
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi

Har Ghadi Saans Aati Hai
Zindagi Kehlati Hai
Tumse Hi Tumse Hi

Na Hai Yeh Pana
Na Khona Hi Hai
Tera Na Hona Jane
Kyun Hona Hi Hai
Then her lips..then his..Then there was a close-up of her face and then his..Armaan was lost in a dream world..
"Excuse me..kaun hai aap?" Riddhima clicked her fingers in front of him.
His dream ended. "Ji main..Armaan Malik..Main Rahul ka dost hun..jo dulha hai.."
"Oh..okay..Main Riddhima..Muskaan ke bachpan ki dost."
"Nice to meet you."
"Nice to meet you too. Bye." She half-smiled and went down.
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The marriage was almost on. Rahul and Muskaan sat on the mandap repeating the mantras..
swastri nagendro..swasti nu aha..
swasti na bhusha vishwa viha aha
swasti nu kar rehshu arenshe devi
swasti naukar swasti vibhahu...
Muskaan was in full force but Rahul was feeling sleepy. He was flirting with Nikita who was sitting next to him.
"Your my sweet cochie-coo." She said tugging his hand in between them.
'Love you baby." Rahul said.
"Aww..my chweet baby..love you too." But then she made a sad face.
"Dont worry..isse main bahut jald peecha chudva lunga."
"Promise me..ke hum hamesha saath rahenge?"
He smiled. "Promise."
She tried to give her mar-daala pose , but was unable to coz of the space. So she just made her vampish expressions glaring them at Muskaan thinking in her mind. "Ruk jao Muskaan. Tumne meri zindagi barbad kar di..ab meri baare hai..tadpa aungi tumhe main."
Muskaan was sitting like a petite dulhan. She was blushing every now and then. Was also sad that she would have to leave her beautiful home. But she was looking forward to her new saree's make-up and jewellery which she just bought yesterday. Esp. the red - gold saree and matching earrings..which she would wear to wake-up Rahul.
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Atul stood on the mandap talking to Anjali who was Rahul's sister. They were getting to know each other. Atul was smiling like never before and they were holding hands on a few occassions. Anjali was a good flirt and kept flirting with Atul seeing his charms.
Mean-while Riddhima seeing this was very upset. Atul had betrayed her. She controlled her tears and ran to a nearby room and started crying again. Armaan saw all this and followed her.
"Riddhima tumhe kya hua? Kya tum theek ho?"
"Armaan..kuch bhi to nahin..chale jao yahan se please..mujhe thodi der akela rehna hai."
"Jab tak tum mujhe sach nahin batogi..main nahin jaunga."
"Tum apne aap ko samajhte kya ho? Main tumhe jaanti bhi nahin?" With this she ran away like in a running race.
Armaan stood there wondering the reason.
Mean-while it was Muskaan's bidaii..She was crying like Riddhima. [Both best-friends had the same quality] She hugged everybody..Rahul almost waited for 45 mintues to stop her crying. When finally it was done..Her relatives started another song.
Babul Jo Tumne Sikhaaya
Jo Tum Se Paaya
Sajan Ghar Le Chali
Sajan Ghar Le Chali
Sajan Ghar Main Chali
Yaadon Ke Lekar Saaye
Chali Ghar Paraaye
Tumhari Laadli..!
Kaise Bhool Paaongi Main Baba
Suni Jo Tumse Kahaaniyan
Chhod Chali Aangan Mein Maiya
Bachpan Ki Nishaaniyan
Sun Meri Pyari Behna
Sajaye Rehna
Yeh Babul Ki Gali..!
Ban Gaya Pardes Ghar Janam Ka
Mili Hai Duniya Mujhe Nayee
Naam Jo Piya Se Maine Joda
Naye Rishton Se Bandh Gayee
Mere Sasur Ji Pita Hain
Pati Devta Hain
Devar Chhavi Krishna Ki
Sajan Ghar Main Chali
Sajan Ghar Main Chali...
Rahul got very angry..his ears bursted with all these songs..Why wudnt they stop???
Cheers..Mansi, Sakina , Radhika.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#27
Lmao Mansi .. yuw must ahve watchd Ekta serials or still watch them. It's totall her style. Lmao. Great Part. Thank You for the pm.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Thanks for the PM.

It was Great part!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#29
Mansi!! You posted it!!
Love the style!! Totally look forward to more!!

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Posted: 16 years ago
#30
🤣

hahahahahhahahahahahha...hilarious part!!! thank u for the pm

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