Originally posted by: abhilashasharma
a simple story... very beautifully written without any extra and unwanted lines....
My favorite part is:
Love is the eternal quest and the eternal answer. The rising ode to everything that is existent. The one bond that gave their life a whole new meaning'
It took birth inside them, nurtured itself within their hearts like tiny dew drops budding into a lake and went to form a world, a world that couldn't be amassed or summarized, a world that was only their own which went beyond words'beyond form'and beyond definition'
The beauty called Love, lied in the churn and siege inside them when they were apart, the longing and yearning, the expression that erupted from inside when together, the reverberating heartbeat they felt within, what followed was a journey'a journey which they both undertook hand in hand putting any doubt aside and trace of pain to sit back and take a rest'they lived the love inside them but soon faced the brutal realities of life which was far away form their own bubble dream world' 'Did you write these lines by yourself... they are so poetic...
Jai looked at her intently, he led her inside'
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She felt him cradle her in his arms'she rested there unaware of anything else'he slowly slid his hand under her, the touch held nothing passionate, moreover it was soft and soothing, his hand traveled downwards, lower to her navel, below it'fingering the stitch marks'the same marks from where her baby was killed, the stitches had long paled away but the pain still remained'
"I am sorry bani'I am so sorry" he cried out'kissing her'the walls of the damn crumbled'she broke down into shreds of salty tears'he stroked her gently'trying to take away her pain and despair'he rocked her body slightly'
"Our baby'" bani let out a small wrenched whisper'he cried along with her'
"Its okay bani'Ssshhh'I left you alone, that's why our baby was angry so it left us, now I have come back, I will never leave you, our baby will come back, I promise'" jai said kissing her head'bani looked into his eyes'they held love and only love' 'she buried her face in his chest crying for the brunt shadows of the past' '
All night long, jai held her close to himself.
Beautiful... 👏 👏 👏
Do you remember the song "September" in Alaipaythey in Tamil and "Sakhi" or Sakthi" in Telugu directed by Maniratnam with Madhavan and Shalini in lead. I dont know the telugu lyrics, but in tamil, there is a line "Pirivondru Neraadha Uravondru Sugamillai Kaadhal Adudhaan" meaning "There is no happy relationship without any separation and that's called love" I simply love that line... 😳
Seher Hone Ko Hai
