Lets Discuss, 'Together By Chance'

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Friends,

After I finished my Story, 'Together By Chance', many times there were points on which my friends and I use to discuss. Like discussing which actor can play Asit & Kinnari, Which scene was really weird, lol ya ya.. They said they find not weird but cute? heheh? I felt I should give my readers also an opportunity to discuss as many readers felt something about 'Together By chance' to stand out of the rest of my other stories?.

If any of U have forgotten the story, here is the link to it, to read it, or to recollect things for discussion.

I would enjoy Ur say and points U feel to ask or discuss. I myself will love to share certain aspects of the story, which my readers would like to know? I will come up with it soon... Feel free to ask and discuss?

Take care

Bhoomi

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey bhoomi, it was a fic that stood out indeed in its own way....i think it was the first i read by u...nothing in terms of doubts for that...actually um using this comment section to tell ya that i read ur latest fic only yesterday after getting back from my holiday on the east coast all of is parts, vcant find the thread for now....but have to let u know it was one of ur best so far,,,,with each passing bit i cudnt believe how simply u wr letting the story progress n with such utter grace....it was a fab job hun, i hope u will be writing one very soon again....will await wishfully!!!

cheers,

nj
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: spln

hey bhoomi, it was a fic that stood out indeed in its own way....i think it was the first i read by u...nothing in terms of doubts for that...actually um using this comment section to tell ya that i read ur latest fic only yesterday after getting back from my holiday on the east coast all of is parts, vcant find the thread for now....but have to let u know it was one of ur best so far,,,,with each passing bit i cudnt believe how simply u wr letting the story progress n with such utter grace....it was a fab job hun, i hope u will be writing one very soon again....will await wishfully!!!

cheers,

nj

Hi Naseem,
Ya Even while I write I make an effort that the story shoudl have its own individuality from rest of the other stories... I guess there was more hurmour to it as well.. silly simple though... Ya u read this and had ur comments for the first time for Together By chance..and that too quite regularly.. Actually u had been many times the first to comment as well.. .
Oh Let me Feel the love.. u read the last part.s.. hope u had a great trip indeed.. hey reading stories in the trip.. that giving too much importnace to them.. aww but it sweet...am so glad that u liked it a lot... i tried my best but I always feel icoudl do better... U felt the flow was fine... many have liked Aarav throguhout..and SIndhu not that much.. so I feel there was a little lackign in that terms of the story.. I should have projected Sindhu too in a much way..to make the place where we coudl visualize why Aarav liked her so much and so waited for her.... ya next one will be a short story.. i have concept in mind.. and will start wrritign soon.. my friends wanted a thread to discuss TBC.. so have added this.. after this finsihed I will post the short story..
tc Naseem.. and all ur encouraging words always boost my spirit.. luv u ...
Bhoomi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i just loveeeeeee this ff 😃....... though u gave me many many heartattacks n shocks😲, u nd allllll ur ffs hold a special place to me⭐️.....

nd wot ur frnds said is veryyy true.... they r veryy cute..... i just love the understanding they developed by facing the destiny's wrath......
hmm.. coming to asit's role, i feel sharad of bano my tumhari dulhan fame will fit the role.... (though my personal fav is hrithik😆⭐️😳, i feel sharad will exactly fit in the role.. also hrithik will b kind of old to the role.😉) ..... n for kinnari's role, i think abigail of kyaa dil mein hai fame might suit her role..... bcoz kinnari shd b a college going student and not tooooo beautiful types....... n tanishka!! i can think of only one vamp rite now😉 ...... komolika of kasauti zindagike 😆😆....
if u don't kno who sharad n abigail r i'm sending u few links. u can see.....😃
P.S: sori cudn't comment for let me feel lovd..... i read that one just 2 days b4, but was a little busy as i told u earlier..... will try n comment in that one later.... byee..... f(or together by chance i dunno i how i magane to get all the tym in the world😆.... )
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mad_lovee

my fav storyyyyyy.....yippie

Himani.. its ur fav story... 😃 but what is it which u liked tha most.. Asit, Kinnari.. or the concept?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajeevskitu

i just loveeeeeee this ff 😃....... though u gave me many many heartattacks n shocks😲, u nd allllll ur ffs hold a special place to me⭐️.....

nd wot ur frnds said is veryyy true.... they r veryy cute..... i just love the understanding they developed by facing the destiny's wrath......
hmm.. coming to asit's role, i feel sharad of bano my tumhari dulhan fame will fit the role.... (though my personal fav is hrithik😆⭐️😳, i feel sharad will exactly fit in the role.. also hrithik will b kind of old to the role.😉) ..... n for kinnari's role, i think abigail of kyaa dil mein hai fame might suit her role..... bcoz kinnari shd b a college going student and not tooooo beautiful types....... n tanishka!! i can think of only one vamp rite now😉 ...... komolika of kasauti zindagike 😆😆....
if u don't kno who sharad n abigail r i'm sending u few links. u can see.....😃
P.S: sori cudn't comment for let me feel lovd..... i read that one just 2 days b4, but was a little busy as i told u earlier..... will try n comment in that one later.... byee..... f(or together by chance i dunno i how i magane to get all the tym in the world😆.... )

I Kittu dear.. Am so happy to see u back here.... in the discussion...
Hey u have a great choice i must say, I know the two actors u mentioned so I didnt have to go and chek th elink.. Shard and Abigail.. I like sharad as an actor.. but is he that tall.. i mean Asit is tall u see... I know abigail in looks is very much clsoe to Kinnari.. i think if she can act well she will fit the choce for sure... btu yup u worked nicely opn the casting.. i guess u do have a great castign mind.... dear.... kamolika.. ahhaha ya nice idea... waise abgail is an aekta find and she is just 16 years now may be 17 yers... adn can she potray the fact that here Kinnari HATES K tpyical saas bahu serials..??😆😉
Hey so u like the wayunderstnading develped in both the charcters... what u felt missing in the story..soemthign that u wanted to add in it...but it could add to the beauty of the story.. ?
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Posted: 16 years ago
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How the concept came up?

The most interesting part of the story was the whole concept where a Television actor gets married to an ordinary middle class girl. She isn't his girlfriend but they By chance r found together & they decide to get married and how things turn afterwards.

I was writing, posting my story 'Zindagi- Ek Safar?.', while I was posting one episode I felt readers may feel emotional and some may feel like crying reading it? I felt Bhoomi next one write something lighter? Rulaneka nahi.. Thoda Hasaneka? and I stopped writing and thought hasaneka.. kaise?. I am not writing a typical soap, which is the funniest to watch? So I told myself... So what, I can take the Hero from such a serial? and read his mind? then I said to myself... Pagal hai kya? No one will love him if he is the lead... when I can't have feelings for a spineless character why will my readers? So I thought over? What if the actor playing the character is nice but he doesn't want to risk his career? what if he marries a girl who doesn't like his work? laughs off like we do? then the thought came? why will such a girl marry him?. Later I thought... oh just By chance.. If... So I thought about the chance? shooting here and she too is there... Our media plays the perfect match makers to get anyone linked. In no time the concept was up almost I sketched the whole story. U wont believe but even what they will discuss first night, lol,

After I finished 'Zindagi Ek Safar', immediately I started writing Together By Chance, As the title too was in my mind, I posted after I finished a large chunk of the story.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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One interesting incident:
I had planned the whole skecth of the major part of the story with scene in mind that I will include. As I always knew there will be the segment of a ring whcih from start was in the pocket of Asit... whcih he kept closer ot hsi heart.. so what shape it will be and what will be the storyline behind whcih woudl reflect abotu the kind of guy he is was also decided right from the start before posting the story....
As I posted almost few parts of the story ... the part where ring is revelaed i hadnt yet..and I had gone out to buy a gift in a jewllery shop.. The shopkeeper showed me rings and anklets as he knew i liked to have look at the new designs... I wasnt interested but just looked throguh them if anythign interstign was there.. nd I was plesantly surprised to see a belt shaped ring there... i was so happy ..feelign some imagination and such aweird rings r actually made and it came in front of me.. I bought it and crazily infromed my friends... that i will tell u something as i post the part... .. after postign I informed them..and I feel it ws one of the sweetest co -incindece happened.... JUST as in TOGETHER BY CHANCE.... so this story reminds me of this .. and is close to my heart for that reason as well...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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kuch na achcha lagne wala tha hi nahi..i liked everything abt it..its concept , its characters and the writer of the wonderful story dat is u:-)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mad_lovee

kuch na achcha lagne wala tha hi nahi..i liked everything abt it..its concept , its characters and the writer of the wonderful story dat is u:-)

Hi Himani dear,
Hmm So u liked everything... U liked the writer ..😳😳😳... woh to lagna hi tha.. the writer is ur friend na....😆.... waise U have surely helped and enccouraged her so much.. achaa kaise nahi likhti...😉.. Meri dost hai hi itneey khaas key unkey pyaar ka kuch aur hi rang chadhta hai.... and I write better than what i expect from myself.. waise bhi thsi story had some parts where I ould use my old writeup style.. the ones of question answer round n all..that is soemthign as if I am back to my writeups funny and bringign a smile...
luv u so much dear..
Bhoomi

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