rahul muskaan FF~khamoshiyan gungunaney lagi~PG 2!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys....sakina here....
you know i'm a die-hard rahul muskaan fan....and now that mayank is leaving.....we RM fans are devastated.....
but that doesn't mean we will stop writing FFs on them!!!!i want RM to be kept alive here!!!!
so i thought of starting a new FF on them!!!!!
theme:~~this is not set in sanjeevani.rahul and muskaan are complete strangers who meet suddenly in a mall.its love at first sight for muskaan but rahul doesn't reciprocate at all!!!!!our cool dude thinks muskaan to be a freak!!!!!and suddenly out of the blue,he finds out,in his first day at work,that muskaan is his colleague!!!!will he ever reciprocate????will these two stangers,poles apart.....ever fall in love???
i'll update the first part soon....please be with me and support me with this FF as this is very special to me.....its a cute,peppy,feel good romantic comedy and i'm sure you'll like it......please do comment....
you can also check out the other FF on RM which i'm writing-AMOR~~A RAHUL MUSKAAN FF.its about rahul and muskaan in a live-in relationship!!!!
love you...
sakina
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey ...write soon any kind of FF r always welcomed from u.....update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Sakku! Thank god you're doing this. I was thinking of writing anohter one, but i can't even handle one right now. Trying to balance 3 will be difficult. i haven't even continued my a-a ff since june. only my r-m is regular.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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WOW SAKU πŸ˜ƒ realllly very beautiful and LOVEYL THEMEπŸ˜ƒ totally diffrente story

plzzzz coninue sooonn can't wait to read it πŸ˜ƒ
will be witing for it
best of LUCK πŸ‘πŸΌ
Divya
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow totally different theme please post first part soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok part one here guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

PART~~~1

welcome to mumbai....where everything's just perfect!!!!everything.....except muskaan that is.she,honestly,is the most imperfect and incomplete person in this entire world!!!!like,talking of imerfect-she was so damn confused in her life!!!she never knew whatt to do!she kept dropping stuff she was supposed to be holding,or used to fall down herself!!!!!

in terms of incomplete,she was all of 24,but she had never had a boyfriend!!!!!!
well,neither did srividya(sri-her best friend),but hello?????it didn't matter!!!!!sri was beautiful,she had elegance,she had substance,and she was perfect...so calm,composed,so nice and sweet......who wouldn't fall for her???but was there anyone in this whole wide world for muskaan???????
muskaan and srividya used to live as paying guests on the top floor of this lady,mrs.kapoor's house.
it was their first day of work the next day.....
the previous night......
sri:will you please stop saying the same thing over and over again muskaan????
muskaan:easy for you to say....you're perfect!!!!
sri:muskaan....forget it...go to sleep...we've got office tomorrow...and you're all worried about not having a boyfriend???
sri:sri......what will everyone in office think?????i don't have a boyfriend!!!!!!
sri:do i?
muskaan:no one will bother!you have so many other qualities.....
sri:muskaan.....i'm going to sleep now.
muskaan:sri!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
sri:yes muskaan....i know you love me.....now go to sleep.
muskaan:i wish i was perfect!!!!i wish i had a boyfriend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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next morning..................
sri:oh god you're impossible muskaan!!!!!!
muskaan was paying no heed...
muskaan:hello?hello?can you hear me????hello???is this ORCHIDS GARMENTS SHOP?????hello????
manager:yes,ma'am,you have called into ORCHIDS...
muskaan:well....my name is muskaan chaddha,and well,i had ordered for five formal suits from your shop.you said i'll have them today morning.....please tell me they're ready!!!!
manager:yes ma'am....they are ready....you can come now to get them.....
muskaan entered the ORCHIDS GARMENTS SHOP.it was like a semi-mall with 3 separate storeys-informal wear,designer wear and formal wear.she took the lift as she was basically the laziest person in the world.she reached the topmost floor.
muskaan:manager....my suits!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
manager:here they are....but i suppose you want to try them on first?
muskaan:oh yes...you are right..
she quickly went into one of the changing rooms..
she tried on the one she would be wearing that day-black.
oh!it fitted her perfectly!she was really looking good.she decided she would go out in the formal suit instead of going home and then changing.
she opened the door in a little too much of vigorous excitement.
"OUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
oh shit!!!man!!!!she had just knoked a guy(you guessed rite-rahul) over while opening the darn door!!!
rahul(laying flat on his back):WHAT THE HELL!!!!!!!!!CAN'T YOU SEE????????!!!!!!!!!!!
muskaan:i'm VERY VERY sor-
she was compelled to stop.
oh no.....it was THAT felling.....that moment,when miniature cupids swivel around your head..and you feel like flying?that feeling of childish,unearthly joy....and that infernal feeling of not sharing your joy with anyone???that feeling that makes your spine just chill....and that radiance in your face to brighten up even more...?
well....that was what muskaan felt when she saw the guy who had just been a victim of her clumsiness...
rahul:WHAT???YOU'RE DREAMING NOW?????HOW UNCOUTH CAN YOU BE?????
muskaan:oh!!!!i'm so very sorry!!!!!!!
she held out her hand and helped him sit up.he had been carrying loads of office document papers and two formal suits which had fallen to the ground.she picked up the two suits and stated folding them,while rahul started piccking up his document papers.
they were both squatting down.muskaan was finding it very hard to stop staring at him.....what eyes....what a voice.....
rahul:what?first you drop me,and now you stare shamelessly.
muskaan:i'm really orry.
they got up and she handed him the suits.
he took them quickly and walked into the changing room muskaan had just vacated.
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muskaan stuck around for some shopping and bought herself the sexiest pencil heel shoes ever and was wearing them in no time.
then she went to the cash counter.
muskaan:you do accept credit cards?
counter-guy:yes ma'am we do.Rs.3000.
muskaan opened the chain of her handbag.
WHERE IN THE WORLD WAS HER CREDIT CARD??????????????/
sweat trickled down her forehead.
oh...phew,it was there.
she pulled it out excitedly and in this noble act,she nudged someone real hard,and trust me whn i say REAL HARD.
"WHAT THE-"
muskaan turned around and wished she had died that instant.it was her prince charming she had nudged so hard!!!!!!!!!!
muskaan:i'm extremely sorry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
rahul:its you again?what's your problem?are you always so clumsy???
muskaan:well........not always..maybe......most of the times.........
rahul:i can see that.now if you can quickly pay the bill.....there are others in the line as well,you know...
muskaan:oh yes!!!!
she quickly paid the bill.
muskaan:i'm rally sorry.
rahul:just go!!
muskaan rushed away.
her cellphone beeped.it was a message from sri.
"got the suits?jaldi ghar aaja...we can't be late on the first day...ciao"
muskaan smiled and replied to her with a message saying-"coming!!!!!"
she saw the time.OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!only 1 hour left for office to start!!!!!!
she really needed to hurry.
she ran to the exit and while doing this-
"OUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
oh no!!!!she had stamped someone really badly with her five-inch,pointed stilletos.
mskaan:PLEASE FORGIVE ME-
and she turned around.
it was her prince charming.
muskaan felt an extremes urge to consume acid that very moment.
rahul:HAVE YOU GOT SOME PERSONAL GRUDGE AGAINST ME OR ARE YOU PLAIN MENTAL?????????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!OUCH MAN!!!!!!!!!
muskaan:i'm-
rahul:extremely sorry-i know that.you were extremely sorry the last two times as well.man!!!!!!i'll have to limp my way to office-on the first day itself!!!!!
muskaan:hey!!!!its MY first day of office too!!!!!
rahul:very good!!!!how does that bother me?
muskaan:no no...it does not bother you....at the most we can be in the same office...
rahul:DON'T EVEN THINK OF IT!!!!!!!!!!!!
PRECAP:~~first day of office....muskaan and rahul meet again...
srividya-mayank first meeting.....
hope you enjoyed guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!please please comment!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
yous...
saku....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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LOLZ...Thta was HILARIOUS !! The way she kept banging into him !!!Keep up the good work...update soon !

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Posted: 16 years ago
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🀣🀣🀣 HAHAHAHAHA! That was too damn good Saku! I seriously burst out laughing and that's not normal at 4:56 a.m. Holy crap man! It was damn good! I loved Rahul! And Muskaan... oh god, sounds like me. Well, I'm not THAT clumsy but oh god, she's sooooo cute! LOL. ROLF. LMAO!!!!!!!!! Continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Haha lol suku that was awesome!!!Lol daim poor Rahul,she is so dam it clumsy!!!Haha reminds me of myself,lol ahh do continue soon,hehe can't wait to see Rahul's reaction when he meets miss clumsy aka MuskaanπŸ˜†Fab writing!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hahahaha... πŸ˜† πŸ˜† Thats the funniest thing I have read in a while!! truly awesome!! πŸ˜†

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