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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

Friends .............. as I was searching the web for some verse for Dew's BIrthday ..............

Look what I found ........

Doesn't this kind of mirror the feeling of Raj in MRD ????

And nothing is ever as you want to be

You lose your love for her and then
It is her who is lost,
And then it is both who are lost,
And nothing is ever as perfect as you want it to be.

In a very ordinary world
A most extraordinary pain mingles with the small routines,
The loss seems huge and yet
Nothing can be pinned down or fully explained.

You are afraid.
If you found the perfect love
It would scald your hands,
Rip the skin from your nerves,
Cause havoc with a computered heart.

You lose your love for her and then it is her who is lost.
You tried not to hurt and yet
Everything you touched became a wound.
You tried to mend what cannot be mended,
You tried, neither foolish nor clumsy,
To rescue what cannot be rescued.

You failed,
And now she is elsewhere
And her night and your night
Are both utterly drained.

How easy it would be
If love could be brought home like a lost kitten
Or gathered in like strawberries,
How lovely it would be;
But nothing is ever as perfect as you want it to be.

Brian Patten

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purvi

@coolpurvi

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

wow dawn this poem so beautiful esp the last three stanzas. hope Raj will do this type of introspection after Kranti's ousting

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morningdew

@morningdew

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Absolutely beautiful poem Dawn.. in itself.. and yes, it applies to Raj. But I m very indifferent to both of them these days, hence I appreciate it for its own intrinsic beauty.

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

Alumni

+ 8

Posted: 16 years ago

Dawn this is such a beautiful poem dear👏😳...And I can actually imagine RK in similar situation right now..I hope they both realize their importance for each other before its too late😭

U know I m hving some collection of poems among which there is one poem which I always imagine Kranti to say one day to her husband Rajbir😳..here is that poem

I don't know if you're pushing me away or pulling me closer
I don't know where I stand
I don't know what you want from me
Or if you care at all

Your words lash out and hurt
Then lovingly draw me in
I don't know what you want from me
Do you want this to end

Don't turn tables
Or place this on me
Just come out and tell me
What it is you want

I can't read minds
I don't know where I stand
Are you pushing me away
Or are you going to finally let me in

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Taiyo

@Taiyo

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

Beautiful Poems there Dawn and Jyoti. 😊 Thanks for sharing.

Edited by an12345678 - 16 years ago

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skeptical

@skeptical

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

@ D_I and Joey

Dont go wasting your efforts and your lovely words on those baseless characters. They are not worth anything anymore. My POV. 😔

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Dawn

@Dawn Idol

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

Jo ............... that poem is simply divine ...........

I too hope some day we'll get to see this in MRD ...........

I'm just hoping the creatives will wake up and do something soon ............

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namita25

@namita25

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 16 years ago

......Just felt like sharing this poem poem with you guys........

...you know I imagine rajbir saying it to Kranti when he falls for her.........

I 'm sorry
I'm sorry for the times you cried,
and the loneliness you felt inside.
I'm sorry for the way things were,
and the selfishness that you endured.
I'm sorry for the nights we lost,
and the deep pain it must have cost.
I'm sorry for the love you missed,
losing you helped me realize this.
I'm sorry I wasn't the man you deserved,
this has been the hardest lesson learned.
I'm sorry I wasn't there to show,
the deepest love you'll ever know.
I'm sorry for the empty days,
and the stresses that you still yet pay.
I'm sorry for the way I left,
I've never felt so much regret.
I'm sorry for the heart I broke,
that shattered with the words I spoke.
I'm sorry for the empty space,
that laid beside you in my place.
I'm sorry for the empty arms,
you fell into when times were hard.
I'm sorry for the days that passed,
Our love now will surely last.
I'm sorry it took so long to vow,
to love you forever here and now

BY:W.Philips

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

Alumni

+ 8

Posted: 16 years ago

Namita the poem is beautiful dear👏...I really hope very soon Raj confesses something similar to that poem in front of Kranti😭...Can Santa claus give us this gift soon😕😳..

Skepti I know their characters r butchered completely right now..but like I said lets give few more days to the creatives sinse only now they r getting our feedbacks😳

Dawn I think till the time there is nothing much happening in the show,we all can become grt poets😉😆..Skepti give us some tutions😆😳

Between Skepti can u please continue with your FF...I m waiting to know about Keya and that mysterious guy😳