Chime, Wine and Pine...

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Despite all the little hitches along the way and the vents of irritation by the fans, they remain as ardent fans of show and its characters as ever...it's for y'all this goes out to...

I penned this sometime back in August / Sep , but never got down to posting it ,but nevertheless posted it...

Cheers.


Watch them snigger,
Watch them snitch,
Watch them change...
...their sexy pitch
Watch them bicker,
Watch them whine,
Watch them shake a leg,
And drown many a peg,
Watch them romance , missing no chance,
Meeting clandestine, and sipping wine,
As the distant clocks chime nine,
And the stars in the purple sky,
Simmer and shine...
While the viewers hold their heart and
Swoon over the doctor dude's smile benign
And his love for his damsel, intoxicating as wine...
Wishing secretly , "Could'nt the story be mine?"
Express this craze of theirs , do they
With a tacky line...
"Oh, our love for the show , shall not lose its shine...
And we shall continue , for the show, as ever, to pine...
... while the clocks continue as ever...to chime..."

- Sareeta

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Apologies - I realize, I may have posted this already afterall and didn't realize, until I scanned through some older posts of mine.

Sorry about.

Moderators, sorry abt this, but you may please close this topic.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oh wow yaar Sareeta di

yu are amazing
its just awsome...
my my we do have some very good poets here in our forum...
Take Care sweetie!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey sareeta its so gud c u after ages

i really what u've writen

nice one....

chandni

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks guys ! But I realize I may have posted this already! Oops! I changed just the last few lines this time... didnt realize... I had already posted... its been ages since I've got on this forum... really.. ..!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sareeta

Despite all the little hitches along the way and the vents of irritation by the fans, they remain as ardent fans of show and its characters as ever...it's for y'all this goes out to...

I penned this sometime back in August / Sep , but never got down to posting it ,but nevertheless posted it...

Cheers.


Watch them snigger,
Watch them snitch,
Watch them change...
...their sexy pitch
Watch them bicker,
Watch them whine,
Watch them shake a leg,
And drown many a peg,
Watch them romance , missing no chance,
Meeting clandestine, and sipping wine,
As the distant clocks chime nine,
And the stars in the purple sky,
Simmer and shine...
While the viewers hold their heart and
Swoon over the doctor dude's smile benign
And his love for his damsel, intoxicating as wine...
Wishing secretly , "Could'nt the story be mine?"
Express this craze of theirs , do they
With a tacky line...
"Oh, our love for the show , shall not lose its shine...
And we shall continue , for the show, as ever, to pine...
... while the clocks continue as ever...to chime..."

- Sareeta

Beautifully written👏
Love my DMG and AR😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *mansibhatia*

Hey Sareeta!! Long time!!



Yeah, a very long time indeed!! :-) DMG mania still on eh? Havent been watching regularly... jus random episodes on and off!

@SukritiFan - Thanks! Glad you enjoyed the post!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sareeta

Swoon over the doctor dude's smile benign
And his love for his damsel, intoxicating as wine...
Wishing secretly , "Could'nt the story be mine?"
Express this craze of theirs , do they
With a tacky line...
"Oh, our love for the show , shall not lose its shine...
And we shall continue , for the show, as ever, to pine...
... while the clocks continue as ever...to chime..."

- Sareeta

Sareeta... awesome write.. beautiful poem!👏👏
The last few lines are meri dil ka hal..... how true!! LOL...
For me ..being the true hardcore DMGian!!! I will continue for the show⭐️.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awsum awsum n awsum iz all i hav to say really hun itz like our dil ka haal no matter the story isnt very gud but still will continue watching it no matter wat hardcore dmgian for life
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Posted: 17 years ago
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awesome....like the clock ticks nine and all that................i loved readin that..!!1

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