~~TWILIGHT~~ mini (AR) fic update pg 2 ... - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hehe nice concept! armaan is funny, so dramatic! hmmm so ridz is his new neighbor! cool! looking forward to more! and please dont leave us hanging with this one! do continue it!
and if u get a chance, update the others too :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
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INTRODUCTION..... PART 1 HOPEFULLY WILL EB LONG AND UP BY TOMORROW NIGHT .. N IF U R LUCKY TONITE...:) 😆

okay .... hmm...nice !!! not bad at all....but one slight hitch y she like glaring at me??? staring i wld have understood .. i get all the time n trust me t feels like r in heaven but this girl is glaring like i just snatched away her favorite barbie!! dats wat girls except muski normally like rite?? i wld not know much . cz watever gifts n all i have to buy fr my gf's etc.. the credit goes to muskaan. though how she manages to get the perfect gift amuses me to the core coz she herself likes motorbikes .. infact way more than i do!!
okay so back to the point... she like angry with me ever since mom left me with her n her sister bout 5mins ago... which reminds me the other girl..hmm.. ht-check,smile nice!! teeth white! and hmm very nice body n she like wait smiling?!?! excellent... so i get it the other one's just abnormal.. though i must say she looks innocent n has beautiful green eyes...but dude cummon gotta focus on the other 1 fr now...

"hey m armaan ... n u r ..?" okay i was pointing the question directly at the normal one so the oder sis noes that i seriously m gettin mighty pissed!!!!
"hi am anjali .. and dats my sister riddhima.. we just shifted from phoenix to forks ..n th eweatehr sure is differnt ..."
"yea m sure bout dat .. u dnt get a lot of sun in this part .. n hi .. riddima did u say?

haha i purposely got her name wrong.. frgt the h in it.. now she ll know hw bad can dis get!!! . but i still dnt gt it! y r v fightin neway ???? n i like anjali.. wnder if she;ll mind me callin her angie!!

"no its riddHima ... with an h ... u r indian.. u atleast shld get my name rite unlike the oder ppl in the town.. n i also herad u did stay in india for a while b4 u shifted .."

nice voice definitely . but comment on my indianness .. ouch that hurt!! girl u r on!! i dnt knw wats her prob but if she wants to fite soo bad then so be it!! n woa... she smells hmm... like green apple.. i always told muski to it as her shampoo .. always liked it.. but muski liked strawberry bettr!!

"k.. m sorry did not no some 1 was sooo touchy about the h !!!! riddHHHimaa"


hmmph!! score- 1 all.... now let the actual game begin!!
Edited by lightening - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
Hey it's a very nice part but to short i hope next time it will be longer, the story is going well.

Kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14
jst started reading ur ff....quite intrestin...cont ssooon and pm me wen u do so
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Armaan is his self ... and so are Ridz and Angie. Part I kab aayega???
Cheers,
Suvarna
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ouch the 'h' sure did hurt haha...cute one stutz...update soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
fantastic part
i'm eagerly waitin for part 1
Edited by KaSh_4_eva - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hahah this is funny, so why are they fighting!? does she even have a reason to be angry?! lol but it was a funny part, continue soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#19
hey nice ff...nice...do pm when u update...
❤️MONA
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Posted: 16 years ago
#20
woooooooooooooowwwww! i luved tha ontro! cont soon n plz do PM me!
❤️twinkle!

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