BA SS : { JaB Dil MiLe } pg16,pg18 (30/1)

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Posted: 16 years ago
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INDEX😛

part 1 pg1

part1b pg4

part2 pg6


part 3 pg 10

part 3b pg12


part 4a pg 16

part 4 b pg 18



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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good Day everyone.. Welcome BA and SD members.. I was so excited after joining BA fan club and this idea kept on popping my head even when I was sleeping..
Here the story goes ..
Bharat Singh : a 1st class MBA graduate from London. He came back to India as instructed by his father. He respects his family very much and had to obey his father's say. His goal is to become a successful business man by his own effort..
Aditti Sharma: the youngest and pampered one in the Sharma family. She lives in a village. Her family is the richest and helps the poor'
Her brother is rogue (good to good ones, and bad to bad ones) and he gives in to whatever she does except when it comes to marriage..
1st part
The setting takes place in Banaras
It's Monday morning and the most beautiful Mansion in Banaras looks lively as ever. We can see Aditti's grandpa with a cup of coffee and newspaper sitting at the house compound watching they way the workers are doing their work. He doesn't look like a person in his 70's as he still has the youthful look on him. He actively does gardening and spend quality time with his wife and great grandchildren.
Aditti's parents past away when she was barely a kid. Since then, her brother took care everything and pampered her so much compared to the her other 2 elder brothers. He gave her everything she wants and didn't want her to have the feeling of losing their parents at such a young age.. Aditti finished her studies and waiting for her result. She really wants to get a first class degree in IT and be a career woman.
Aditi was playing hide and seek with her nieces and nephews. She couldn't go out of the house as her brother's at home so she decided to have fun with the kids. The kids are Samaira, Juhi , Anjali, Rahul, Rohan , Kishen.
Samaira : So I'll begin my counting now and all of u go and hide'
1'.2'3'
Juhi and Anjali manage to hide at the study room.. Rahul and Rohan at the kitchen ..
4, 5, 6
Aditti was still finding for a good spot.. Their house is big but she knows Samaira knows very well about the common place that she used to hide..
7,8
Aditti asked Kishen to get on top of the cupboard..
9'
Aditti still didn't get her spot
9 '''..
Aditti got into her brother's room as she knows Samaira wouldn't dare to come there first..
10''''.. Samaira quickly runs to catch them..
Samaira spotted Rahul and Rohan as that was the easiest spot.. She pinched their ears and they jerked up as they didn't' realise the presence of Samaira..
Samaira manage to find everyone except for Aditti
Aditti was still hiding at her brother's closet and she heard her brother who was in a phone conversation'..
Aditti thinks to herself , " Kya??, Shaadi!!!!"
+::+:: tQ so much GG for being supportive and encouraging me to post this..++::++::

my AtB gang.. I hope u people will support me here too😛

to all BA fans.. U people are so sweet for welcoming me to ur team...

n to everyone out there... hope u like the 1st part....

I need ur feedbacks.. 😃

ps: I need ur suggestions for the title..
Edited by shobbybee - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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gr8 start yaar, you should really continue, looking forward to more updates from you 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: hotchocolate08

gr8 start yaar, you should really continue, looking forward to more updates from you 😊

tq so much😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Shobby di - you already know my thoughts - it is terrific and will be fabulous with each and every update! No Doubt! 👍🏼
You are soooooo gonna ROCK the BA party bus!
🥳 🥳
Gots to love a convert! heheheee 😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awwww thanks gg.. thanks to u..
u made me love BA so much till I am all over them now... =)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Kya? Shaadi!
<==== I kinda like this for a title. But don't go by me - it took me for-evah to come up with the title for my BA SS. 🤔
Posted: 16 years ago
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JODI MADE IN HEAVEN!!

that's what I feel about the title
but I think gg sis's title is better!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Another one Shobb"s,great,i like the update.continue soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hun thats was simply great!! i loved reading your fanfic!!! Your gonna give GG a run for her money!! loool!!! Great job!! continue soon!!!

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