Ss The Mansion ch4 updtd pg9. the end - Page 8

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Posted: 17 years ago
#71
Hey kamy loved the FF was really good
byebye
Love Perveen
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Posted: 17 years ago
#72
Lovely story Kamy...I love suspense and this one was good. Meenu wasted her life for what...nothing. She outlived Ajay and Vani...to live a tortured life.

I hope you will write something new.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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very interesting engaging story...not one bit i lost concentration...very very good...looking forward to your future writings!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#74
heyyyyyyyyy kamy 👏it was such a wonderful story .so diffrent from ur previous ones...........really your stories are so uniqe...........well waiting for another ff something really so romantic...................kya karein yaar dil hai ki manta nahin
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Posted: 17 years ago
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dat was a rly wonderful story 👏
u maintained the suspense till the very end
loved it!!😃
do write more...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Kamy, a mindblowing culmination to the story. The visisons that Jai and Bani had were portrayed so realistically, it sent shivers down my spine. Especially when Bani sees Meenu and goes into a trance and makes her open up her mouth to reveal all her evil secrets😲 Truely amazing!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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kamy really loved reading this story throughout and i really love the fact that u come out with quite different stories👍🏼 loved it dear and how the truth came out was too good 👏
kya yaar tum haunted house mei nahin gayi😉 chalo koi baat nahin next time do visit something of that sort 😆😆
😆😆😆 hey just joking
do start a new one soon
luv,
swati
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanku guys for the lovely comments. i am glad u liked the ss. my computer is going carzy as much i want to comment on each feed backs this thing doesn't let me. my shoulder is giving away with so much strain the key pad is crazy and tha mouse doesnt move forgive me.... i have waited for the new one 😕 i dont think i'll get it in near future well,, thank u alll who have put in a word or two and all the silent readers thank u to u tooo....
love
kamy
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Kamy.... what a wonderful ending of a wonderful FF...
Very different FF from you... very diff than your style :) !
Please keep them coming... Love your writting..
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Posted: 17 years ago
#80

Kamy,

Soory for the late comments,couldn't log in due to some personal problems...Great ending!......finally they realized their love n united…their reunion was very well penned…….hope you start another one…waiting for the new ff….

Luv,

Ammu.

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