New FF Updated Part 12 New Twist Kasturi Kidnapped

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey guys after a lot of thinking I have decided to write an ff I doubt it will be any good. I dedicate this FF to Hummy who has encouraged and bugged me to write it lolz. I can't think of a name for the FF at the moment so if anyone can suggest a good name that will be great.

Character Sketch

Chawla Family

Kasturi Chawla (Shubangi Atre):Kasturi Chawala a Bubbly 23 Years old who has finished University and is waiting for her results to come out and in the meantime she is looking for a job she is pampered and loved by her family and is the oldest granddaughter. She is really close to her Mother and one of her Sisters. Her character reflects a bit like the character in the drama.

Kumkum Chawla(Juhi Parmer): Kumkum Chawala Kasturi younger 21 Years old sister who is currently at university Studying Medicine she is Loud, Bubbly, Chatterbox who livens up the house she loves to keep up with the latest fashion she is really close to her Oldest Sister Kasturi.

Bani Chawla (Prachi Desai): Bani Chawala Kasturi Youngest cute 18 years old sister who is in her last year at collage she is intelligent and is completely opposite her Sister Kumkum where Kumkum is Loud and a Chatterbox Bani is shy and quiet and doesn't interact much with people and loves to keep her to herself.

JP Chawla: Kasturi dad who owns a Transport Business he is middle aged man who loves his family a lot and can do anything for them.

Kaushalia Chawla: Kasturi Mother who is a house wife and a Middle aged woman who loves her kids and family a lot she is really close to her oldest daughter Kasturi.

Alka Chawla: JP Chawlas youngest sister who is not married and she lives with her parents and Brother she is jealous of her Nieces especially Kasturi as she is good looking with her bitter remarks sweet and sour relationship she is named as the family entertainer.

Bauji: Kasturi Grandfather who is a 70 year old man he loves his granddaughters a lot especially Kasturi as she is the oldest. He is more like a friend to his granddaughters an easy going man.

Beeji: Kasturi Grandmother who is a 60 year old woman she is sweet and caring but doesn't like her Granddaughter to work but doesn't say anything for the sake of their happiness.

Sabarwal Family

Robbie Sabarwal (Karan Patel): Robbie Sabarwal 25 Years old Rich Spoilt Brat who is really arrogant and doesn't care about anyone. He is a Rock star by Profession and is really close to His Best Friend Ronak and his mother. His character reflects a bit like the one in the drama.

Sumit Sabarwal (Hussain):Sumit Sabarwal Robbie 22 year's old younger brother he is spoilt as he gets everything he asks for he is at university currently and studying medicine which he is not interested in at all and just goes in for his mums sake and bunks most of his classes of.

Shivani Sabarwal (Moini Roy): Shivani Sabarwal Robbie and Sumit youngest sister she is 21 years old who is bubbly and chirpy and loves to make friends with everyone unlike her brothers she respects other people's feelings and is currently at university and is Bright and Intelligent.

Devika Sabarwal: Robbie, Sumit and Shivani mum she is a middle aged woman and owns the SS Empire along with the Singhanias After her Husband Puru death she spoilt her kids so they don't feel their fathers absent but is regretting it now.

Singhania Family

Dushant Singhania: Puru Best friend and they live in the SS Mansion and he is shattered after his best friend's death.

Nandani Singhania: Dushant wife she is middle aged sweet caring woman who is really close to her husband's best friend's wife Devika they share everything together.

Ronak Singhania (Jatin Sha):Ronak Singhania the only son of Nandani and Dushant and is 25 years old. He is Robbie best friend and the only person who understands him really well he works at the SS Empire and has a crush on Robbie younger Sister Shivani but nobody knows about this.

Other Characters

Alana:Kasturi Best friend she is Loud while Kasturi is quite both are opposite each other.

These were the Character sketches I hope you lot liked it I doubt it's any good I will continue if I get any replies. I wrote this on Word and i dont know how to upload the pictures if anyone knows and can help me i will be greatfull thanks for everyones time.😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I love the concept and the characters.... omg SuKk are in your FF!!!
Can't wait to read more.... update soon!!!
love Simmie x x x x
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh ur too in ff writer line
welcume dear in this world

character sketch is great

may i know ur name

hey update st part very soon
cant wait na
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Another RoKa FF!
You are such a sweetheart for thinking of starting a new ff.
Absolutely love roka FF!!!!!!!!!
Yayyyyyyyyyyyy!!!
PLZ PLZ PLZ update sooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnn!!!!
hummy, ell donr for making funkychick write a FF, u r amazing.
The character sketch was great!!!!!!!But u havn't got anyone opposite bani. or is it raunak??
Waiting for ur next part!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow another ROKA ff........i'm a big fan....😃.........liked the character sketch........looking forward to the story to start......😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey everyone thank you so much for ur replies i am really glad that u liked the Concept i will post the first part today as i am half way through it and my name is mariam but u can call me maz as dats wht all my friends call me 😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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I love all the characters
especially robbie and kasturi
i cant wait to read your ff
I hope you start soon
GOOD LUCK
!!👍🏼
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Ok Guys here is the First Part I hope u all like it bear with me as it is my first attempt

Part1

In the City of Delhi where it's Busy and Competitive we see two girls sitting on the Train Chattering away the first girl was doing most of the talking though and the other one wasn't paying much attention to her words.
First Girl: Kasturi, Kasturi are you paying any attention to what I have been saying all along.

Kasturi: Sorry Tanu yaar I am just nervous thinking about our results that are going to come out today I hope I have passed all this thinking has made me get stomach Cramps.

Tanu: Kasturi you just get nervous for no reason I am sure you must have passed with flying Colours I am the one who should get nervous I didn't even revise properly.

Kasturi: Thanks Tanu you are sweet don't say like that I am sure you must have done great.

Tanu; I hope so

Then they here an announcement we are now arriving at Piccadilly Station Passengers who wish to board the train over here make sure you take all your personal belongings with you thank you for travelling with first Transpene express.

Kasturi: Come on Tanu we have to get of here as we have to change for the next train

Tanu: Come on let's go.

They headed towards the door as the train arrived at platform 14 and stopped. Tanu and Kasturi waited till the button was illuminated and then they pressed the open button and headed out of the train.

They read the timings on the display board and there next train was due at 11:15 and at the moment it was 11:00 they still had 15 minutes remaining as the weather was freezing cold outside Kasturi had on a Light Silk Baby Pink Shalwar and Black Kameez and a Black cardigan on top she was shivering really badly and her teeth's were clattering then her phone rang

Kasturi: Hello Alana how r u yaar where r u

Alana: I am already at university where r u guys

Kasturi: I am just waiting for the next train it is coming in 5 mins

Alana: Hurry up yaar

Kasturi: Ok bye see you in few mins

As Kasturi put the phone down she heard an announcement and her train arrived on the platform her and Tanu boarded the train.

The train was packed full and there was no place to sit they had to stand near the door and it was crowded all around people were pushing and shoving and Kasturi could hardly breathe there stop was the second stop. They reached the station after 10 mins Kasturi felt like it was years she was glad to step out of the train into the fresh air and they headed towards Newton Building as they entered inside the building Alana was waiting for them inside the lobby she came running towards Kasturi Shouting out her name And hugged her tightly they haven't met each other for 2 months now.

Alana: How r u Yaar I missed you so much

Kasturi: I am f9 how r u how was your holidays

Alana: They were f9 Yaar Yours

Kasturi: Mine were alright I was looking for a job but no luck

Alana: Never mind after u get your results today maybe u can have better luck.

Kasturi: Maybe come on let's go up all this suspense is killing me.

They headed towards the computer suite and had to log on to the computer and access the blackboard where there results were posted as Kasturi was logging on to the Computer her Heart was beating really fast as a cheetah and you could hear it thumping really loudly as she looked for her name on the list and seen the results next to it. All of a sudden everything went still for her and tears were streaming down her eyes.

This was the first part I hope you guys like it read and leave your comments its the Beginning after 2 _3 more Parts Roka will meet.😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey, you already updated, great!!!!!!
BTW, excellent intro, it was good!!
Keep updating and make the next part big!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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pinguunique
hey, you already updated, great!!!!!!
Thanks I didnt want to loose my readers write at the beginning of the FF
BTW, excellent intro, it was good!!
Thanks I am glad u enjoyed it keep reading
Keep updating and make the next part big!!!!!!!!!!
I will update the next part tomorrow and i will make it longer it was the first part so thats why it was short
Keep reading i am glad u liked it 😛
BTW if u dont mind me asking wht is ur name
Love Mariam xx

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