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Posted: 17 years ago
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A/N: Urh, waiting for someone to tell me to shut up and stop writing. Until then, another one-shot. Was in an angst-y mood and came up with something for Gehna. Makes sense to me……but then again I have a weird thought process.
P.S. Veer makes an appearance here as well. No idea who he is but I like the name :P
Hope.
Sunshine, laughter, the breeze in her hair.
Gehna rushed up towards the terrace, feet cool against the stone steps as she hurried to take down the washing before the rain drenched everything completely.
The company of her friends and the pani puri outside school.
She could hear Dadisa grumbling downstairs.
"Arre Beendhni, khana kaun pakayegha?"
Veer with his motorbike, standing at the gates. Watching her as she opened his letter and blushed at the endearments.

"Meri Pyari Gehna…"

Basant glared at her, his fingers tightening on the newspaper as she faltered at the steps. Adjusting her chunri so it fell across her forehead and lowering her eyes she hurried to the kitchen.
It had been a week now since she had entered his bedroom.
Orange, Blue, Purple and Yellow. The colours of holi, back when everything had seemed beautiful.
She caught sight of her distorted image in the pan. Tired eyes, hollow cheeks, and the red sindoor like a gash across her head.
Her parents, her sister, her happiness.
Anandi came rushing in to the kitchen, delighted at the sound of her choodiyan tinkling against each other.
"Chothi taiji! Dekho Jagdish mere liya kya lekar aya."
Gehna smiled, Anandi's infectious good nature sweeping away the darkness and throwing light in her life. Had she ever looked so young and fervent?
Hope.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Oooooh.....I loved it 😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

It was great how Gehna's present gloominess was interspersed with her flashbacks ...👏

Loads o' love ,Shreya
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Posted: 17 years ago
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no nimbu!!!!
no no noooooo!!!!!!!! No for no😆 because no one would ever want you stop turning up with suchhh😳 sooo beautifullyyyy written😳loving this one as well!😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks Guys!🤗

But I feel the odd one out because no-one else writes anything on the forum😕....Depressing because we ahd an FF competition and I know that we have wonderful writers here....soo; Someone write an FF!!

That is all.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nibbles

Thanks Guys!🤗

But I feel the odd one out because no-one else writes anything on the forum😕....Depressing because we ahd an FF competition and I know that we have wonderful writers here....soo; Someone write an FF!!
That is all.



Aapki tamanna poori karne ki koshish karoongi 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice one nibbles...and shreya wait 4 u r ff...........😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow damn kewl nibbles..luvd readin it..dint unnersan mch tho..!!
Hope u write more lykk dis..!!
yeah i noe v had a FF comp..bt den i suckd @ it..soo nt tryn dis tym..!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanks Niharika🤗 - also waiting for Shreyu's FF.....maybe I should flood her inbox with annoying PMs to get her writing?🤔😆


Aish - you had an FF? Omg; where's the link?😲 And yes the FF doesn't make a lot of sense😆.....I wrote it after watching Heroes [the movie, not the show even they're both awesome!😎] and was feeling really angsty and this is what came out of it.😛

P.S. You both have beautiful names - Niharika and Aishwariya *Sigh*
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: nibbles

Thanks Niharika🤗 - also waiting for Shreyu's FF.....maybe I should flood her inbox with annoying PMs to get her writing?🤔😆

Aish - you had an FF? Omg; where's the link?😲 And yes the FF doesn't make a lot of sense😆.....I wrote it after watching Heroes [the movie, not the show even they're both awesome!😎] and was feeling really angsty and this is what came out of it.😛
P.S. You both have beautiful names - Niharika and Aishwariya *Sigh*



Maybe you wudnt want me to start writing ...I'm awesome at leaving readers in the lurch....😈...had an FF for another show which I havent updated for , lemme see , about 2 months now , even tho' the leads havent even met yet !!!😆

Jokes apart , I was thinking that I wouldnt start an FF right now...maybe two-three SSs [ woooo...alliteration] , 'cause I'll be going inactive for a lengthyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy period starting Dec so starting an FF now wont be a gud idea 😃

Edited by Shubh_Aastha - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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^You're leaving me?😭

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