Your the One FF (AR) Prt13 pg9 updt.

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INDEX
Parts pages
1 1
2 1
3 1
4 2
5 3
6 4
7 5
8 5
9 6
10 7
11 8
12 9
13 9
14
15
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CHARACTERS:

RIDHIMMA SHARMA (PROTAGINIST)

ANJALI SHARMA (SISTER OF RIDHIMMA)

PADMA SHARMA (MOTHER OF RIDHIMMA)

SHASHANK SHARMA (FATHER OF RIDHIMMA)

JULIE SHARMA (RIDHIMMA'S COUSIN)

JASON MEHRA (RIDHIMMA'S BESTFRIEND)

MUSKAAN CHADDA (BEST FRIEND)

SHAHID KAPOOR (HER FUTURE BROTHER IN LAW aka ANJALI"S BOY FRIEND)

ARMAAN MALIK (PROTAGONIST)
RAHUL GRAVEL (ARMAAN"S BEST FRIEND)
TASNIA KHANNA ( ARMAAN'S GIRL FRIEND' SOON X GF)

*THERE WILL BE OTHER PEOPLE BUT LATER ON

Part 1-

Once upon a time there was a girl name Rihdimma, she lived in New York City. She was a simple middle class girl. She had a perfect family, parents with decent jobs, and an older sister that goes to college to study pharmacy. One day she felt lonely, and had nothing to due. She hated to watch television because her parents canceled the cable and bought dish for their advantage. But this time she was really bored, so she turned the television on and started clicking through channels. Her eyes went to this Indian channel, called star plus. She saw a commercial with these doctors and she loved shows that had to do with doctors. She saw that the show would be aired at nine in the night. Therefore, she waited, but the show never aired. Therefore, she went online and started to do research on this show. She found out the name, and why she couldn't see it on star plus, because it airs on another channel called star one. She also found out that she could watch all the episodes on YouTube. Man she got so excited. So, she started right away. At first she did not get it because she did not start it form the beginning. So she began to watch it from the beginning, man she loved this show. Slowly, slowly she noticed the main actor. It was this guy, and he was dam hot. She could not keep him out of her mind. She thought about him 24/7. She realized that she feel in love with him. Now she had one goal in life, to meet this person. He was 16 and she was 15. Perfect she thought.

One day she was watching this show, and she was surprised, hugely. There was this commercial about how a lucky person can win a date with her lover. She was so excited that she screamed so loud. Her parents thought she went crazy, but you know what she was crazy, crazy in love.

Promo: Ridhimma joins the contest...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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So guyz do u think i should continue this one.....
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Part 2-

Now after finding out that she can win a date with Armaan, she knew that she had to go. She had a feeling that her life would change forever. So, she had to come up with a plan, so that she can go. She told her sister the plan, and she was cool with it. Okay now this is her plan…

R –Mom guess wat!!

Mom- Wat!!

R- Christmas vacation is coming up In like 2day, so I was thinking…

Mom- ohh god here we go again.. thinkng about wat..

R- welll my friendz are all going to Florida for like one and a half week, just to relax…nd so iwas thinking if I can also go..

Mom- u noe how I feel about u going to other places with out parentz..

R- I noe bah this is probably the last year to enjoy Christmas vacation. Cause like da SATz are comingup.. nd people will be busy studying. So can I go pleasezzz..( making a cute face)

Mom- I dun know.. u should ask ur dad..

R- no,, come on u noe hez gonna say no.. plzzzz.. I'll luv u!!!!!!

Mom- Okay fine.. bah u have to call everyday atleast 4 timezz..nd u have to take care of yourself..

R- mom dun worry about me..i'll be fine..

Mom- Okay.. so wen r u leaving

R- today.. in fact right now..

Mom- WAT!! Nd now u tell me!

R- Well atleat I told u.

Mom- So u mean u were going to leave wid out telling me..

R- Mom u noe I didn't meanthat..

Mom- Well wat did u mean then..

R- Well I meant that, but still I would call u.. OMG.. im gonna miss my flight

Mom- u already bout a ticket..

R- ofcourse.. sorry mom I cant talk now. . I got 2 go now…

R- Bi now I luv u.. talk 2 in the phone later…

Mom- Come soon.. and take care of yourself..

R- KKK.. tell dad not 2 kill me..

Mom- Your dad doesn't have to kill u your sister will..

R- Ohh dun worry about her..she already noe..

And Ridhima gets in her friend's car and drives away.

She gets to the airport but is a bit nervous. This is the first time that she has ever flown in a plane without her parents. But the thought of meeting Armaan keeps on bringing a smile to her face. So she says her bi's to her friendz and get in the plane.

In the plane, Ridhima made new friendz that are going to stay in the same hotel as her. Their names are Priya, and Nishi. They too were going to enter the contest. So all three girls had many things in common, and they were enjoying themselves. They finally reached to their destination. The contest was after 2 days. They reached to the hotel and panned to share room with each other. They had fun, sleep over's, and going partying at night.

2 DAYS LATER_

R- Ohh my god!!! Guyzz wake up..

P- Watt Ridzz we slept like at 3 in the night at least let us sleep now.

N- Yeah, and anyways it doesn't matter what time we get up.. there is nothing to do..

R- Guyz did u people forget that today was the contest, and it start in about 2 hours.

P & N- Wat.. u have 2 be kidding me…

R- nope its 2 p.m, and the contest begins at 4.

Both- shit.. lets gooo.

They reach to the stadium where the show is hosted and get a huge surprise.

There are over 100 girls there. Some of which are older then Armaan.

( See guyz this story is based on young love, So they basically fall in love at a young age. Ridhima is 15 and Armaan is 16.) There were many young people, and people that were perfect for his age.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey ur story is vry cute😊........continue soon will be waiting.....and do pm me wen u update.
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Originally posted by: crazy_4_karan

hey ur story is vry cute😊........continue soon will be waiting.....and do pm me wen u update.

Hey thnxx 4 ur comment and i will surely cint. soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sweetie
its an amazign story line
but u might wanan start this FF in the Fac fiction section cause all the FF's been moved there and it would be better if u start there
and yeah i'll be waitin for the next part
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Originally posted by: swansea

hey sweetie

its an amazign story line
but u might wanan start this FF in the Fac fiction section cause all the FF's been moved there and it would be better if u start there
and yeah i'll be waitin for the next part
swanzzy

Hey thnzz 4 ur comment nd i will surely start it in da FF sec...
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Part 3:
The Contest had begun:

Anchor- Ladies and gentlemen, I know you all are very excite to meet Armaan, but before meeting him you must make it to the final 5. So our first round starts of with a random drawing. From this barrel I will pick out 65 names, and those peoples names that I will pick, will go to the next round.

1st name- Isha…2nd Nishi.. 3rd ….etc…..22nd Ridhima…65th… Priya..

All three girls were happy cause they all were choosen.

Anchor- Round two is on dancing, fron this round another 35 will be eliminated, which means 30 of you will continue on.

Ridhima's turn- She does her dance on the song Mauja Hi Mauja.

Anchor- Okay here are the results… 1st…Nishi, 2nd ….17th ….Priya… 22nd place is Ridhima…30th… some 1 else (lol)

Anchor- Congratulation to all of you people who made it.. the next round is very interesting because it has to do with make over. The person who gives themselves the best make over goes to the next round. Now in this round 15 people will be eliminated.

Now all the girls go and get a make over. The judges examine their faces, and is very impressed by Ridhima's face.

Anchor- 1st is Ridhima, 2nd Nishi, 3rd Priya.. ect….10th..

Well congratulation to you all, you all have worked hard and I think you guys deserve it. Well the next round is a very surprising round. You all have to sing but unfortunately, 5 will be eliminated.

1st up is Ridhima – Zara Zara touch me touch me touchmeAh Zara zara kiss me kiss me kiss meAh zara zara hold me hold me hold meAhh zara zara ooooo ooooooooo…. **** Just then ARMAAN comes and surprises them… Ridhima was about to go and scream but controlled herself .All the other girls were screaming. Just then, a blow of wind came and her hair starts to blow… and Armaan stares at her, and she also stares at him, just then the crowd went crazy and they came back to reality. Armaan- Well I thought of surprising all of you guys. At first I wanted you guys to sing solo, but then I thought I rather like a duet, as in me sing with each and one of you. What say guys. Everyone- Yeahhhhhhhhhhh!!!11 screaming Armaan- So….Ridhima- RidhimaArmaan- Ridhima are you ready..R- Yesss!A- Sajde Mein Yuhin Jhukta Hoon…. Tum Pe Aake Hi Rukhta HoonKya Yeh Sabko Hota HaiR- Humko Kya Lena Hai Sab SeTum Se Hi Sab Baathe Ab Se Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua..A- Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Fidaa HoonKhuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya..Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda.. And the song ends. He also sings with the rest of the people. Anchor- Okay guys our 5 finalists are Priya, Nishi, 2 other girls, and RIDHIMA….All finalists- YESSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!.... now all are getting ready for the next round….

Anchor- Okay ladies, This is the final round, I would like to congratulate all of you for making it this far. So the theme of this final round is Brides. So this is what you all have to do, you have to dress up as brides and pick a song you would like to sing, and guess wat, Armaan will sing and dance along with you guyz.

All girlz- Ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!! Screaming really loudly.

Anchor- So go to your makeup room and get ready, but remember you have to get yourself ready.

Promo- The winner is.....Guess Who..

And guyz plzzz leave commentz... whetehr itz bad or gud.. i'll try to improve if u want me mee😊

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I really like you FF....Its damn cute!
So pls PM when u upd8...Im hooked onto ur FF...Do upd8 soon hun! =D
PS: i liked the ending...would love to see how Ridzie dresses herself!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey just started reading ur ff its great do continue😊

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