YuRa scene - Updt Dec 6 (Page 5) - Part 3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Ok, I shall try to write a YuRa scene, thanks to Beena for inspiring me and giving me this task. And also thanks to Nisha for helping me with the scene.
I shall start off with next day of YuRa's honeymoon, assuming that they reached to their hotel safely in Rajasthan. As soon as they arrived at the hotel, they met those 2 new characters, Neil and Poonam, who turned out to be Yudi's friends from the states. Yudi, happy to meet them, invited them for breakfast next day in the morning. In this scene, I will try to show a different shade of Rani where in she gets a bit possessive about Yudi, and wants to feel that Yudi is all hers.
Yudi and Rani were both ready for breakfast. They were waiting at the hotel lounge for Neil and Poonam to arrive. As they arrived, all four of them headed towards the dining room of the hotel for breakfast. Neil and Yudi were having a conversation and remembering their old times. Where as Poonam and Rani were having a general conversation. Poonam while talking with Rani, picked up the glass of water. By mistake she dropped the glass and the water spilled on her clothes. Yudi, being a gentleman that he is, right away offered a napkin to her. Rani saw this and just smiled, as what Yudi did, any gentleman would do that. But in her mind, she did have a tiny little thought that it was Neil's job to help Poonam, and not Yudi. But anyways, she chose to ignore that thought. After handing over the napkin to Poonam, Yudi looked at Rani. Rani just looked at him and smiled. Yudi, at that moment, got a thought in his mind of playing a prank on Rani, of making her jealous. He thought, in the process of making her jealous, she might try to assert her rights over him, thus making her feel more comfortable with him. In short, masti and romance at the same time.
After having breakfast, all four of them walked out of the dining room. Yudi, for a second looked at Rani, then turned his head towards Neil and Poonam, and invited them for lunch, to which both of them agreed. Yudi knew that Rani would not like this as they should be spending some time together alone, as he also would not have liked it if this was not a part of his game. But he also knew that whatever decision he took, Rani would support him blindly. So keeping this mind, he then looked at Rani again and asked her if she had any problem with this, to which Rani just simply noded indicating that she had no problem with it. But in her mind, Rani innocently thought, "yeh aaj kunwarji ko kya ho gaya hain. Hamesha woh chahte the ki hum akele mein waqt guzare, aur aaj jab mauka mila hain toh woh dusro ko invite kyun kar rahe hain. Lekin koi baat nahin hain. Inke purane dost ko itne saalon ke baad mile, toh zaahir hain ki unko bahut khushi mehsoon hui hogi, aur mujhe bhi unka saath dena chaaiye is khushi mein." After she pacified herself, YuRa went out in the hotel's garden for a walk.
It was lunch time now, and YuRa were getting ready in their room. Yudi got ready first and told Rani that he would meet her downstairs. Rani was surprised at this, as far as she knew Yudi, he had always waited for her to get ready and made sure that they leave the palace or hotel room together. But she ignored this thought and gave the benefit of doubt to Yudi that probably he had some work and thats why he needed to go. Yudi in the mean time did not like leaving Rani alone, but he thought, he had to do this as it was a part of his game. He was so hoping that Neil and Poonam would arrive before Rani. And this is exactly what happened, Neil and Poonam did arrive before Rani. While Yudi, Neil, and Poonam were chatting,Yudi saw Rani coming downstairs, in their direction. He was delighted to see her and wanted to go near her, but instead, he pretended like he was having fun chatting with them, specially Poonam, and put his hand on Poonam's shoulder. Yudi in his mind was not liking it but he thought he had to do this, just once. When Rani saw this, her smile faded away. Poonam just ignored Yudi touching her shoulder, as for her in states, this was very common, so she really did not find anything awkward about it. When all 4 of them were heading towards their table, Poonam tripped and was about to fall when Yudi saved her. Looking at this Rani got a bit angry. She thought to herself that only she had the rights to be saved by Yudi. Neel was the one who should be saving Poonam, not Yudi. Yudi thought that this was not a part of his plan, but it worked in his favor anyways, so good for him. Poonam straightened up and thanked Yudi for saving her, and scolded Neil for not helping her at all. All of them laughed at this.
All this while, Yudi had been observing Rani's expressions and enjoying it thoroughly, as until now he had never seen this side of Rani, getting jealous and all. But anyways, to make her feel a bit better, he offered his hands to Rani for her to hold until they reach the table. Rani smiled and held Yudi's hands, first lightly, in her usual style, but then she tightened her grip. Yudi feeling her grip, looked at Rani in amazement. So far, everytime he held Rani's hands, she never held it back tightly. He was surprised, but was feeling happy that Rani took an initiative...after all this is what he wanted. Rani was also surprised at her behavior but looking at the way Yudi was behaving with Poonam, she felt a bit scared. She wanted to feel that Yudi was all hers and only she had all rights over him. Therefore, she overcame her shyness and griped his hand tightly.

Upon reaching at the table, four of them sat down for lunch. As the waiter arrived, Yudi first requested Poonam to give the order. Seeing this, Rani felt very sad. Until now, Yudi had always given her all the importance. Today he was behaving a bit differently. Why was he giving Poonam so much importance. She knew Yudi loved alot, but still she was feeling a bit unsecured looking at all this. She wanted to feel Yudi, wanted him to take her name in that loving way, wanted him to look at her, wanted him to hold her, wanted him to give her the assurance that he was hers. Thinking about this, she caught Yudi's hands tightly, which was on the table. Yudi looked at this, and smiled to himself, thinking mission accomplished. He thought in his mind, while smiling, that he did all this to make Rani feel comfortable with him. She had never taken any initiative as she was a very shy, simple, and naive girl. He wanted her to feel that he was hers and she had all the rights over him, just like he had over her. Just as he finished thinking this, he looked at Rani, and his face, which was full of smile changed into a worrisome one. He saw Rani's eyes getting watery and a drop of tear fell from her eyes. At this, he cursed himself, for making the person, he loved the most on this planet, cry. He knew Rani was controlling herself from bursting out, but he could not control himself. He so wanted to take Rani in his arms and make her feel better by telling her that he loved only her and that he was hating himself for hurting her. But how could he hug Rani in front of everyone, not that he cared about the world, but he did not want to embarrass Rani. Seeing Rani hold his hands tightly, he reciprocated by holding her hands even more tightly. Rani feeling his grip, looked at him. Yudi, just nodded his head, indicating not to cry and that he was with her. He looked at Poonam and Neil who were busy giving their order to the waitor. So he took this opportunity, and pulled his chair close to Rani's chair, brought his mouth close to her ear, and very softly whispered, "Rani, hum aapse bahut pyaar karte hain."
Hearing this, Rani looked down shyly and gave a broad smile. She felt that the waves of fear and uneasiness arousing in her mind had subsided, and once again her mind had calmed down. As if her kunwarji had read her mind, since she finally got the assurance she was longing for few minutes ago, though it seemed ages for her. Yudi looking at Rani's face felt much better, as he knew that this is all he needed to do at this moment to cheer her up and make her feel good. Still holding Rani's hand, he moved his chair a little further from her so that everything was back to normal. But in his mind, he was not satisfied. He thought he had to do something special today for Rani, to compensate for that 1 drop of tear that fell from her eyes, to compensate for hurting her, to compensate for the sadness he had brought on Rani's face due to his stupid plan. So he excused himself, and went out. He called the hotel manager, had some mute conversation with him, and came back to the table. Rani looked at him with confusion, as if she was asking him where did he go. Yudi smiled at Rani and said, he had gone to the bathroom. Rani just smiled back at him and both of them looked at each other ever so lovingly.
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I hope you guys liked this part. As this was my first time in writing a detailed YuRa scene, please forgive me for all the mistakes I have made.
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bsingapury thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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anvi you did excellent job ...........i can visiualised this scene infront of me dear i loved the way you have portrait it . yudi trying to see rani's otherside and i know thought women know their man love them truely but they cannot bare their man give little bit of attention to other woman especially on honeymoon no way............
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She had never taken any initiative as she was a very shy, simple, and naive girl. He wanted her to feel that he was hers and she had all the rights over him, just like he had over her. Just as he finished thinking this, he looked at Rani, and his face, which was full of smile changed into a worrisome one. He saw Rani's eyes getting watery and a drop of tear fell from her eyes. At this, he cursed himself, for making the person, he loved the most on this planet, cry. He knew Rani was controlling herself from bursting out, but he could not control himself. He so wanted to take Rani in his arms and make her feel that he loved only her and that he was hating himself for hurting her.[/quote]
lovely lines here the way you hve written i can feel yura's pain from different angel
so now waiting for next part that is what yudi had plan surprise for rani.........excellent work anvi i am really happy........
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Oh Anvi..what a thing to wake up to...perfect. Like Beena said, I could picture this scene happening. And yes, on honeymoon, any bit of attention to someone else? No way!!

>>She wanted to feel that Yudi was all hers and only she had all rights over him

>>He wanted her to feel that he was hers and she had all the rights over him, just like he had over her
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She wanted to feel it, he wanted her to feel it...and now, finally, she felt it! Brilliant Anvi. Waiting to see what the next part brings.

And you said you were not creative!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Anvi, it was so silky-smooth a ride, so sweet, just marvelous. Yudi teasing Rani…oh Gosh…and rani in tears…so sweet…but he is very soft-hearted…he should have waited till the time they go back to their room…but this stupid rani, started crying and yudi's heart melted…poor yudi…..I wish as soon as they enter their room, rani takes the initiative and hugs him and cries and refuses to release him when he tries to separate her for some conversation…, and yudi all happy, smiling…hugs her tight…

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Just reading your little part there Kirti makes me 😃 Rani refusing to let go, Yudi holding on tight...

Yes, Yudi should have waited to get back to the room before giving up the charade. But can you see either of them being able to sit through dinner once that tear dropped on Rani's cheek? The thought of the tear would have been enough to melt Yudi. Actually seeing it...no chance he was going to sit through dinner...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Are yaar kya 'mombatti aur dhaga' hain dono. Here thread stars burning there candle started melting...😆😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow kirti you gave perfact UPMA ( now gals it is not food dish upmaamind it hahhhahah)
wow kirti nice thoughts.......or how about yudi should still keep giving more attention to poonam and at same time holding rani's hand very tight......rani confuse but still frustrated,,,..and th emoment they stand up fomr lunch...slowly yudi whisper......when rani is looking in other direction and unaware...........that time whisper slowly...i love you.........or ask some musician to play some special song for her
i amliking this song for them
"dhage tod lao chandni se noor ke
ghungat bhi banaalo roshni ke noor se
sharmaa gayi to aahosh main lo
saanso se ulji rahe meri saanse
bol na halke halke
hoth se halke halke"
wow so romantic
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: bsingapury

.......or how about yudi should still keep giving more attention to poonam and at same time holding rani's hand very tight......rani confuse but still frustrated,,,......

Enough of flirting. Rani can not take it anymore. Zara see baat karne par...'nal' khul gaya...tap tap tap 😭😭😭...what will happen if yudi goes to that extent...are yaar shower khul jaayega 'dhuwandhaar' ...bath tub bhar degi yudi ke nahane ke liye.......😆😆
By the way, song selection is superb. Very apt for the situation.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awww i agree about song!!!(btw thanks to everyone whose been watching vm....2000 views!!!! thats over 150 views a day!😲)
omg hun that scene was BEAUTIFUL... i love yudis character even more since he has joked around a bit more(for example when he grabbed rani in gaaon an dfed her.. when he put grease on her face...when he pulled her into water)...
ive been longing for rani to become a bit more comfortable with him and come out of her shell
would LOVE to see suc a scene!!!!
xxxxx
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: jibi

Enough of flirting. Rani can not take it anymore. Zara see baat karne par...'nal' khul gaya...tap tap tap 😭😭😭...what will happen if yudi goes to that extent...are yaar shower khul jaayega 'dhuwandhaar' ...bath tub bhar degi yudi ke nahane ke liye.......😆😆
By the way, song selection is superb. Very apt for the situation.

😆
kirti hum sab nahaa lenge...saath main😉😉😉
baat sahi hain..........lekin mazaa aaayegaa yaar....aise bhi ek baar bahaar se nahalaa chuki hain ees baar ....oose haq hain😉

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