YuRa scene - Updt Dec 6 (Page 5) - Part 3

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farhana

@Rakhie_08

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Now if only the damn creatives would visit this forum more often, all our problems would be sorted!

Nice one Anvi!

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Simra

@sakuraa

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

That was soooooooooooooooooooooooooo AMAZING!!!! I could actually see it happening as I was reading it! I hope you decide to write more!!!!

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Nidhi

@yurafan

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

Waao Anvi U too!

Great Job

well give me sometime I'll read it carefully and then post my commnets but so nice to see your other side of talent!

Keep it up!|

Nidhi

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monu_tan

@monu_tan

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Wow Anvi I never had a doubt that u cant do this, but was always wondering why dint you start it earlier.. Better late than never.. I absolutely loved this idea of Rani getting jealous of Yudi...You have written it very beautifully...Loved it to the core..I just wish this is picked as is by creatives.. It has a lot of potential..So do I see Anvi opening a new FF or magic moments thread for herself.. Trust me we would all love that..😊

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Jinal

@Jinal27

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

hey Anvi, that was brilliant! Please write some more soon! Waiting anxiously for it!

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Anvi2009

@Anvi2009

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Thank you everyone for such wonderful comments. I am glad you'll liked my first part.

Monu, I dont think so that I am that creative enough to write a whole FF. I just had 1 scene in my mind, which I have divided in 2 parts. So first part I already posted and second part I will post it as soon as I get my thoughts for it together and write it down. 😊

Kirti, I cant end YuRa honeymoon scene without a hug, so definitely you will be seeing a hug in my next part. Its just that they wont be hugging in their room, thats too common. Yudi has to do something more special for Rani. Lets see what I can come up with.

Nisha, you are right. How could I show Yudi having lunch and pretending as if nothing happened until they reached their room, specially when Rani was feeling so hurt and almost crying. Seeing a drop of tear in Rani's eyes, and that to due to his actions, was obviously unbearable for him. He had to do something, though small, right away to please Rani and make her feel better.

Edited by parikhanvi - 16 years ago

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Nidhi

@yurafan

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#17

waaaaaaaaaaaaao Anvi, kya baat hai touvhing very touching Hmmmmmmm Me exactly want creatives to do like this GOSH I liked the part when YUDI said in eyes to Rani not to cry MY GOD ...Anvi, you made me total dewaana of yours Now i want more more more no matter what strike ends or not I don;t care I want more of your PART thats it! Please and make it thoda bada..getiing me na?😉

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pop77

@pop77

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+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Nice Anvi..Rani getting Jealous..please rani ko Honeymoon pe mat rulana..

ANvi you should start writing FF..also i agree with Rakhie..that creative should take your idea,,,

waiting for next part..

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anu

@belissima

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

OH Anvi....I just loved it.

It is beautiful.... just what Rani would do. Anvi you have read Rani character beautifully. I could log in today after two days and this treat from you was waiting for me...oh wow.

so when is the next part??? Hurry up Anvi... i might have to run away again very soon for a couple of more days