YuRa scene - Updt Dec 6 (Page 5) - Part 3 - Page 5

Anvi, I think this is superb...magical...mesmerising...beautiful...

You have done an amazing job with this thought of yours. These lines stuck with me:

>>he wanted to be alone with her and feel as if nothing existed in this world, atleast for tonight, besides him, Rani, and their pure love.

>>He wanted Rani, for tonight, to be only his wife, and not a bahu of Shishodya vansh.

>>She was herself surprised at her sudden desire to be close to Yudi, but she could not stop herself today from feeling so, actually she did not want to stop herself.

And that hug. Oh wow. I mean perfect, just absolutely perfect.

Hats off girl. 👏 👏 👏 Take a bow, you deserve it.

excellent anvi it is just mind blowing and dear why thank me? i have not done anything this time every line you wrote was perfect ............it was in sync and mindblowing........

👏 Mindblowing part..i hope Creative should take your idea then we see boat see like that..even much more...

Rakhi, Bobbiedhillon, Jinal, Nisha, Simra, Beena, Payal, thank you all for liking this part.

Your comments are really inspirational. Well for now, I had this scene in mind so wrote it in 3 parts. As soon as I get another scene in mind, I will write it down. I dont know when I will come up with another scene, but whenever I do, I will definitely write it down and share it with you guys. 😊

are yaar it was very very good sorry for the late comment actually i read part 2 and 3 just now only

anvi we will pray that soon you will get another part in your mind so we get treat like this

Hi Anvi, i was waiting for your part two and you posted third part also. Dont know how was it missed. Will post my comments after going through it.

Oh Anvi, you have expressed it in such a sweet manner. There were only yura, nobody else, nothing else, entirely different world; it was enchanting yura magic all around, throughout. So lovely.

[quote=parikhanvi]She finally felt completely comfortable with him and was ready to drown in the ocean of his love. Yudi, wanting to hold Rani as close as possible, and as if understanding how Rani felt, pulled her a little closer to him, and Rani without thinking further, moved forward and both of them, for the first time, embraced each other passionately. Yudi tightened his grip, and so did Rani. It was such a wonderful feeling that both of them were experiencing for the first time. [/quote]

It was such a perfect hug. You can actually feel the heat of it, just marvelous. Exactly how I wanted. This is such a wonderful feeling that I often think, the world should end at this moment. What more a person(like me) can wish.

And about second part, thanks for reminding the wonderful moments and their interleaving. The feeling expressed by Rani, oh how I wish yura sharing their feelings like this.

Now Anvi I want you to write a similar FF in which yudi opens his heart about his feelings while having her dupatta, having a payal, having felt her presence nearby him.