FF - Destiny (Ch-51, Pg-178: Jan 7th)

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Lamia Tasnim Liana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#441

Smita dear after reading ur FF i can say a very good monday to u dear🤗🤗🤗i justt love the this part as well as the others&cant wait for the next part now Prem is in action it ll b fun to read😳

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sonia

@cute_bear

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Posted: 16 years ago

#442

hi inyc update do cont now prem is going to be missin his heer and heer is going to be thinkin about prem i thought the track would be heer getting jealous but i think this is better bcoz u make everything turn into exciting thngs

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ashpush

@ashpush

Voyager

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Posted: 16 years ago

#443

smithsie dear...gr8 part as usual...aww gayathri mom is sooo sweet...giving as the idol of ganesha and all...so sanjana meher became friends?seems like sanjana is a good character after all...loved it that prem was concerned where heer was...so now he is gonna do somethng?wonder wat?waiting 4 wednesdy's update

Take care

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Sunayna

@x.sunayna.x

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#444

Hey!

Awesome update!

and now Prem is in a foul mood cos Heer isn't there!!!

Can't wait till the next update!

xXx

Sunayna

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

Sparkler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#445

Hi Smita,

Thanks for the lovely update! Have to thank u first for making the weekend so bearable, it really seemed short this time instead of 2 long boring days.

Now back to the story, I officially declare Gayatri to be the sweetest person on the face of this earth. All her daughter-in-laws will be lucky to have a mother-in-law like her.

Loved Heer's concern for Ash, a true elder sister's feelings portrayed through her. But inspite of all this she never fails to think about her Mr. Charming! That even before falling asleep, which means sweet dreams r in store.

So Sanjana & Meher r getting close. Maybe this way Sanjana will get to know Meher & how she is totally oblivious to Harman as her Mr. Right. In the process hope Atul gets attracted to Meher & something blossoms up betweeh them. U can guess what a romantic fool I am, all because of devouring those M&B to no ends.

Now to the main part, loved the way u created a distance between these 2. It will be good for them & this will take them to a new level when they meet after this gap of absense. So Mr. Foul Mood, u thought everybody will be at ur beck & call smitten by ur charm & attractive appearance? Sorry for the disappointment, go work ur way out to be in the top of her good book. Why do I get the feeling that he will land himself in Ash's apartment? Or am I being too hasty in my thoughts? Somehow knowing this impatient carefree Prem I just feel he won't be able to wait for 2 days but will go himself to see Heer.

Hmmmmm, how I wish tomorrow to be Wednesday.

Anyway, great update, wonderful description, u r able to hold our interest right from the beginning of this story & have not given us a chance to waiver our intrigue & devotion from then. Makes me read the story all over again every weekend right from the beginning. Don't even feel that u r going to let us down ever! Superb achievement!

Lana.

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mithalio

@mithalio

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Posted: 16 years ago

#446

Hi Smita,

Very nice, I am not into telly a lot and i am not a fiction fan also, But your's and parth's updates are so touching that i just like to read all over again and again. And I know you won't dissappoint us from any of your part, because it is too good like watching the serial. Waiting for wednesday is like too long.

Mithiya

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poonam

@P.Kamaljit.Sean

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 16 years ago

#447

hey
awesum as always
heer felt guilty abt not telling prem
can't wait....

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JCluvs srk

@JCluvs srk

Dazzler

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Posted: 16 years ago

#448

hey hey hey...sorry i didnt reply sooner...but tat doesnt mean i havnt been reading...lol....al always...ur fic takes my breath away....i wonder wat heer is gonna do now tat she thinks prem *might* love sanjana.....i'm loving this jealous side of her....cant wait for mor action...lol....

so heer is staying with ash for a few days....poor prem....how is he gonna live without her?....lol....cant wait to see wat he's gonna do bout this....😉....

keep up the fantastic work.....

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Shagufta

@JanuaryEmbers

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#449

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!!👏

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sshekar

@sshekar

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#450

Originally posted by: amanaranjan
*reserved*
hi ill just read and comment

edited

yay im the first one to comment
yay!! i am glad too...😃

amazing upadate

im soo jealous how can all ur updates be equally good.it makes it difficult to decide which part i like best!!!
awww...u r sweet...

so to pacify myself i just read the whole thing all over again

so heer felt guilty about not telling prem huh??

well heer like it or not u just cant stop thinking about it

and she has GOT to stop running away....... girl hes just gonna come close

yeah...that's what heer's got to understand..😉 as for feeling guilty, she just wanted to see prem before she left..can't blame her, can u?
and whats with sajana and her longing

anyways canyt wait to read heer and prems 'talk'

cant wait for wednesday
sanjana has some issues...(obviously)...😉 and u'll have to wait some time for the prem-heer talk...😃

amana

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