Originally posted by: lghosh
So Smita,
This was the surprise? Sanjana asking for help from Harman to get their relationship going! ****Looking with narrowed eyes & raised eyebrows at Smita**** R u sure u didn't change the storyline after reading my response day b4 y'day? U r too 'ishmart' in changing ur track just to be unpredictable & refrain from using scenarios from our speculations. So just thought of asking. 😃 Btw am complimenting u here.Hey Lana! If you think that I can run off and change a whole chapter after reading ur speculation, then you must have more confidence in my abilites that I do!! 😆 I am 'ishmart' not to have a predictable storyline in the first place...*smugly looking at Lana* 😆
But good plot nevertheless in getting these 2 duffers close & hopefully realise about each other's feelings. These 2 will need all the help possible in realising & then confessing their love for each other. I know Harman is sensitive of all the 3 brothers but he is the most dense one as well. Imagine not a single quality of Prem is present in him! No prowess of observation, not having the qualities of 3C's (being cool, casual, confident), no charm to wobble ur knees......ok maybe not for us but definitely can for Sanjana & that is fine with me if he can make her happy then why should I crib! 😕 My good luck to them! But their scene was sure very cute. How he looked at her, was happy to see her, she liked him in glasses, his jumping to help her, being elated in hearing she is serious about staying back, his love reflecting in his eyes.....all very very nice. You know, give the poor kids a break ok? not everyone is like ur Prem...*pffft* They are just coming along just fine...He has observation skills, just not using it, that's all. It happens with extremely intelligent people. I don't see u complain about Meher!! 😛 Ah, their scene has now been upgraded to cute!! Progress, my sweet, progress....😉 Oh, Sanajana is going to get more than wobbly knees...
Lalit Juneja as usual on the wrong end of a scenario! Why am I not surprised? Thank god Prem & Preet didn't inherit his qualities & instead got their mom's wit, humor, power of observation & intelligence. Or else we would have had 3 Harmans as Lalit Juneja's progeny. 😲
I was so mad at these Kapoors, such shameless people I tell ya, even after knowing that Prem's already booked for marriage went on about how much wealth his niece can bring with her, really sick! I guess u tell people like this 'chullu bhar pani mein doob maro'! And yes we have plenty like these back home even today! 😡 Ah ha...yep, that's Lalit Juneja for you!! 😆 I know..people like these exist and I did not want u to think that they could stay away from my story. I so needed this...u will find out next week..😃
I was laughing so loudly imagining Heer's plight at that awkward situation with Lalit. She thought she was caught with not even the faintest idea that Lalit can't even in his dreams can imagine that 'westernised' girl is her. She was just about to divulge everything when Lalit misunderstood her & left blaming our poor Prem. Hehehe imagine Heer covering up for Prem, I would rather think her covering Prem.......well will let it go for now! 😉😆 Very very interesting Smita! Hats off to u! Wonderful plot of misunderstandings where all of them r aiming at the same goal & yet has no idea that its what they want is staring at their face directly & they have no clue about it. 😆 Now it has to be seen will Heer have time to confide all of this to Prem over the phone? If not imagine Prem's situation once he comes back? With a grave face Lalit will go to talk to him in his study & Prem in 2 minds whether he wants to tell him everything or not. But knowing ur Prem.......hmmm....will not make any speculation. Will wait to see u play it out. But definitely a funny situation! Lalit for once, only if he knew everything he would be dreaming about playing with his grandkids by now! 😆 Heer really thought the cat was out of the bag...but what do u know?? 😆 LOL...I can't believe u said that! Heer covering Prem....damnit Lana!! Now u have given me more ideas....damnit!😈 I am glad u cannot guess everything my Prem will do...😆😆 I am not going to tell you anything...u'll find out...tomorrow! 😃 Right...if only Lalit knew how close he had come to being a grandfather before they had even gotten married...LOL! i can't believe I wrote that *making notes to quit hanging out with Lana*
No surprises at all that I will wait eagerly for Friday's update now.
Now for some clarification, Fatima, just think twice b4 u write anything (though loved that idea about making out over the phone, damn, why didn't I think of it 😆) because this Madam writer is all bent on tainting my pure as driven snow reputation to dirt! 😲 ****With an extreme innocent face****How could u Smita (in a high pitched voice) think of writing this? Go rinse urself in antibacterial soap water, sterilise urself before even thinking about me in such a way! Me a picture of perfect chaste, purity & innocense, learning about intimacy from ur story for the 1st time in my life & trying to grasp all of this! 😳 And u write about me like this! Noooooooo! No rolling ur eyes like Heer now, 😆, I saw that! U r just jealous for I have the crown now, if u want it back, u know what u have to do! 😉 So till then its mine! 😆 The simple fact that you even know what making out over the phone tells me that u need to wash that brain of urs in water...cold water...😉 and then rinse with disinfectants...pure as driven snow reputation! *pffft*...Ah, a day will come when you will place that crown on my head and say that it will always be mine...till then, u can play with it...😉
Now about the show, well I feel horrible watching the show now, need good perking up! Will go do some shoe shopping now! As if DJ & Veera is not enough now we have Heer acting like them too & then shedding 'Ganga & Yamuna' so vigorously, am scared she will kill India with her flood of tears now. Will the glycerine company be able to keep up with the supply? The saving grace was Preet & Meher's scene, just adore that Preet now & he was in black today as well! Haila! And HC seems to have decided to appear not more than 2 minutes everyday & today we didn't even see his face! Excellent, if this is the result of Ipsita Deb & Santram Verma together then I want Vikas Goopta back! Atleast because of him we got 6/19 & 9/11. I heard something like that..I will send a detail comment after I see the show this weekend. And will especially watch out for the Meet scene...!
Thank god we have ur Destiny to keep us in the sane world letting us escape to dream & fantasize about our duo. It was not bland today but just simple! A break from all ur rich 'Khayali cooking'. 😃
See ya on Friday,
Lana.
Thank god I have Destiny to keep me sane!! 😆 Thanks...I will serve some nice pulav tomorrow, with basmati rice...😉 c u then!!
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