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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Peepo

yeah even I want to start a new FF but I need ur help . I can write the stories but cannot post pictures of the characters as u all post. If someone can help me with that I will happily write a story. Just want someone to post the characters pictures for me in the begining.
dun worry di i will post u just start tell me about pix n all in PM i will postt 😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
sure polly.................thtz nt a prob at all
start it yaar
it'll b really gud den both of uz will b bzy wid KP as well as our FFz nd dont wry bout da pix.....pm da thingy 2 me...nd ur wrk'z dun!!!1
luv
reeno!
bt dont frget KP if u start dat!!!!!itz a humble request!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thank u soo much dear. I will def pm the details of my story. I will start my story next week ..... this week little busy so fully concentrating on Kuch Pal ,,,, also Reeno, don't worry I will never never leave Kuch Pal.
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Posted: 16 years ago
thnk u dear...................😃
luv u fr dis!!!!!!!!!!!😛❤️
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Posted: 16 years ago

Well lets continue the story .....

Scene 1

K House. Dining Table. Everyone coming for food. Milind comes and sits on Samar's place.

Shiv : Milind Bhaiya yahan se uteye, yeh jagah Samar bhaiya ki hain.
Mahen : Esse kya farak padta hain Shiv, Samar wahan bait jaaega.
Diya : Lekin es ghar main humseha hum apne jagah par hi baite hain,
Shreya :kissi ke liyee apne jagah nahi chodte hain.
Riya : yes humare Samar bhaiya hee yahan baitenge.
Sumit : bilkul theek , Milind Bhaiya aap zaara waha bait jaae. If u don't mind.
Milind ( smiles ) Not at all. Aao Samar , tum yahah bait jaao.

( Sabhi Samar bhaiya , Samar bhaiya . Ek din enhi loongon ne use paraya nahi kar diya to mera naam bhi Milind nahi )

He sees Nikhila seeing him so changes from his GRIN ... to a feeling BAD expression.

Nikhila : Kya hua beta.
Milind: Kuch nahi maa.
Nikhila: BEta woh Samar bachpan se en sab ke saath tha esliyee.
Milind : Main Samajta hoon ma, kuch waqt lagega.
Milind thinks ( abh mujhe en bhai, behno se es Samar ko alag karna hoga )

Next Day in K Office. Mahen ,Milind, Samar and Shiv are there.

Mahen: Lagta hain Milind humare liyee bahut lucky hain. Humey ek aur project mila hain.
Samar: thats Gr8 dad.
Mahen : Samar tum esey dekh lena, waise bhi Milind woh project dekh raha hain.
Milind : lekin papa, Shiv ko bhi chance milna chaheyee. Warna
Samar : Haan papa mujhe bhi aisa lagta hain ki Shiv ko hi essey karna chaheyee.
Mahen : Well agar aap dono yehi chahte hain to yehi sahi. Shiv theek se karna, bahut important project hain.
Shiv : Well main poori mehnant karoonga papa lekin mujhe aap sab ki madat chaheyee.
Milind: Well i am all urs. Main tumhare maddat karoonga.
Samar ; Main to humesha se hee tumhare saath tha.
Milind thinks ( es baar tum Shiv ke maddat nahi kar paaoge Samar, sorry Shiv lekin abh tumhey mere taraf karne ka ek raasta mil gaya hain mujhe )

Next Scene

Ronit-Ria's office.

Ria : Ronit , mujhe tumse yeh umeed nahi thee.
Ronit : Kyun kya kiya hain maine.
Ria : Us Music piece ko maine raat raat bhar jagkar taiyaar kiya tha aur tumne saara credit lee liya.
Ronit: Woh mera hi tha, kuch client ne taaref kyaa kar de tum to bas.
Ria : Shut Up ronit.
Ronit : U shut up. Abh yeh jo naye client aayee hain, dekhte hain enhi kiska presentation pasand aata hain.
Ria : Ur challenging me.
Ronit: Yessshhh. Agar unhe tumhara presentation pasand aaya to woh tumhare carrer ki liyee bahut achaa hoga.
Ria : I accept ur challenge Ronit Malhotra. Lets see who wins the game.
Ronit : All the Best.

Next Scene.

Ria is working very hard at night. Trisha enters her room.

Trisha: Ria , ab tak soi nahi.
Ria : bhabhi mujhe yeh kaam jaldi karna hain.
Trisha: Yeh kyaa hain, mere aur us Ronit le beech main yeh competiton hain.
Suddenly she realises that Trisha is Ronit's sister.
Ria: Bhabhi , agar mere aur Ronit ke beech agar competition ho to aap kiske jeetey hue dekhna chahte hain.
Trisha : Jo kabil ho wohi jeetega. Mere liye to tum dono hi ek jaise ho.

Milind is standing out listening everything.

Next Scene.

Milind meets Ronit in some Resturant.

Milind: Hi ronit , Main.
Ronit : Jaanta hoon , aap Milind hai na.
Milind: Haan, kya main yahan bait sakta hoon.
Ronit : Plzzz.
Milind and Ronit start drinking.

Milind: Main samajh sakta hoon tumhay kaise lag raha hain, woh company tumsne start kiyaa, etna mehnat kiyaa aur Ria nee...
Ronit looks at Milind with a confused look.
Milind : Haan woh mere behen hain, lekin main yeh samkhta hoon ki tumhey hi jeetna chaheyee. Tumhara haqq hain.
Ronit : Tum sach keh rahe ho, lekin kaise.
Milind : Woh tum mujhe par chod do.

Next Scene. Next morning.

Milind comes to Samar's room.

Milind: Samar.
Trisha: Milind, Samar to office ki liyee nikal gayee.
Milind : acha
Trisha : Kuch kaam thaa,
Milind : Nahi nahi woh main Ronit ke help kar raha tha. To es file main maine Ronit ke liye us project ki bare main kuch research karke .... Main chahta tha ki Samar use de de, pata nahi woh mujh se help lega yaa nahi.
Trisha : Aapne yeh bahut achaa kiya.
Milind : Kyun , woh paivaar bhi mera apna hain. Aap yeh file use de dena Trisha.
Trisha : Theek hain main de doonge.


Next Scene:

Ria is starting for office. Milind comes.
Milind : Aao Ria, Main tumhey chod deta hoon.
Ria : Nahi bhaiya main chalee jaogi. Aap busy hongee.
Milind : Apne behen ki liyee main humeshaa free hu.

Ria and Milind go togethere. Suddenly the car stops. And doesn't start.

Ria : Kyaa hua bhaiya ?
Milind : Pata nahi, lagta hain car kharab ho gayee.
Ria : Oh no.
Milind : Fikar mat karo. Yehi par garage hain. Theek kara denge. hum wahan Resturant main coffee pe lete hain.

He takes her to the Resturant. Same place Trisha meets Ronit and gives the file to him. Ria sees.

Ria : Arey Trisha bhabhi, yaha
Milind ( acts surprised ) Trisha yahan kyaa kar rahe hain.
Ria : Bhabhi Ronit ko kyaa de rahe hain.
Milind : De rahe hogi kuch acha chalo gadi theek ho gayee, Ab humey chalna chaheeyee.

Next Scene.

K Office. Samar's cabin. Milind comes.

Milind : May I come in
Samar : Milind plzz aap ijzzat kyun le rahey ho aaeye na.
Milind : Woh main kuch kehna chahta tha.
Samar : Bolo.
Milind : Dekho hume es project main Shiv ki bahut madaat nahi karna chaheyee. Warna woh humpar depend karta rahega. To khud zindagi main aage kaise badega.
Samar : Shayad aap theek keh rahe hain.

Milind leaves , Shiv enters the cabin.

Shiv : Bhaiya, mere liyee presentation taiyaar kar deejeeye.
Samar : Nahi Shiv , khud kar lo, Main kabh tak tumhare maddat karoonga.

Shiv is surprised. Goes out dissappointed. Milind meets him.

Milind : Kya hua Shiv.
Samar : Kuch nahi Milind Bhaiya , woh Samar bhaiya ne.
Milind : Maddat nahi ke , koi baat nahi tumhara ek aur bhai hain jo tumhare maddat karega. tum bilkul fikar mat karo.

Shiv smiles and hugs Milind. Milind gives a DEVILISH smile.


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Posted: 16 years ago
oolala/.....im gettin scard of milind yaar!
i hope i carry on da story well!
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Posted: 16 years ago


continuing here ...

Ria and Ronit are before clients. Ronit gets a chance first. His music is the same one Ria had made ready. She is stunned.

Clients : wow. its Gr88 , This project is urss.

Clients leave.

Ria: Main tumhey jitna kameena samajte thee tum to usse bhi.
Ronit : Haar bardasht nahi kar sakte to compete kyun karte ho.
Ria : Yeh to mera Music tha.
Ronit : Well to saabit karo...
Ria leaves the room in anger.

Milind calls Ria.

Milind : Hi Ria , kaisa raha presentation ?
Ria is crying ..
Milind ; Kyaa hua ria , Ro kyun rahe ho ?
Ria tells everything . Milind acts surprised.

Milind : Aisa kaise ho sakta hain. Koi aisa kyun karega ? Kaun karega aisa ? Kisse pata hain tumne apna file kahan rakha hain ?
Ria thinks Trisha was in her room that night and also the resturant when she met Ronit.

Next Scene :

( lets do Shreya wants to be a model )
Shreya comes very excitedly.

Diya: Kyaa baat hain, bahut khus lag rahe ho ?
Shreya : Haan didi woh mujhe ek badi company ne bahut bada modeling ka offer diya hain.
Diya : Wow yeh to bahut achee baat hain.
Shreya : didi , achaa main chalte hoon audition ke liyee. Mujhe un loogon ne Hotel Moonlight main bulaya hain audition ke liyee.
Diya : All the best.

Next Scene :

Samar gets a call.

Samar: hello.
Caller : Tumhare Kapoor Khandaan ki izzat aaj nilaam ho jaaege
Samar :Shut up, kaun batameez bol raha hain.
Caller : Mere bare main jaanker kya karogee. Tumhare behen Shreya ki saath...
Samar : Kya hua Shreya ko..
Caller : Use model banna hain na, to uske keemat to chukani hain.
Samar : Shut up uuu...
Caller : Hotel Moonlight Pahonchar apne behen ki izzat bacha lo.

Caller cuts the phone and turns back , Milind is standing them. Milind gives him money.
Milind : Well done.

Samar calls home. Diya gets the phone.

Samar: Diya, Shreya hain ?
Diya : Nahi Bhaiya , Shreya to Hotel Moonlight gayee hain kyun..
Samar : Kuch nahi.

Samar calls police.

Samar rushes to the Hotel.

Samar and police go and break the room door open. Samar sees Shreya unconsious and starts hitting the MAN with her. Shreya gets up. She was acting.

Shreya: Bhaiya bas kareye , kyaa kar rehe hain aap.
Police comes and arrests that man.

Man: hey aap yeh kyaa kar rahe hain.
Police: Woh to hum thane main bataeege.
Man : Kya matlab.

Hotel Manger comes.

Manager : Kyaa hua sir ?
Police tells him
Manager: Nahi nahi police, aapko jarror galat fame hue hain. Yeh to bahut Sharif aadmi hain. Kafi dino se yahan par models ka audition le rahe hain.
Police : Sorry sir, Samar sir apko bhi na...
Man : Shreya, aap es ki liyee Select ho jaate lekin jo aapke bhai ne jo mera haal kiya hain uske baad.
Samar tries to say something.
Shreya : Bhaiya aapne yeh theek nahi kiyaa.

Next Scene :

Milind talking to someone on the phone.

Milind : yaar, kya bataoo ? Samar Diya ke bare main aisa kaise keh sakta hain. Mana ki Rohit Trisha ka bhai hai par meri behen Diya kissise kam nahi hain.Aisa kaise keh sakta hain ki Rohit ko Diya se achee ledki mil sakte hain. Mere behen Diya to lakhon main ek hain. Lekin pata nahi Samar ko kyaa ho gaya hain.

Diya is listening to everything .. She feels bad and leaves. Milind knows Diya is listening . And gives and Grin.

Next day :

Sumit on the phone.

Sumit ; Darling tumne yahan phone kaise kiyaa ? Haa main tumse milne aaoga . of course I love u . Acha bad main milte hain. Byee.

Sumit turns back sees Trisha standing there.

Sumit : Bhaiya main...
Trisha : main kya, mujhe kabh milaogee usse

Sumit blushes.

Next scene.

Trisha and Sumit are waiting for the girl. Girl comes.

Trisha: Aur kitni der lagege.
Sumit : Bas bhaiya aate hogi.
A Girl comes and her sister too comes. Sister is Sonia.
Sumit : bhabhi yeh hain Mona ( any guess who will play her role )
Trisha : Hello.
Mona : Hello, yeh mere didi hain, enhone mujhe pal poskar bada kiyaa hain.
Trisha : hello , baiteyee na.

They talk for sometime. As they leave.

Sumit : Bhabhi, kaise lage.
Trisha : Main kal hee tumhare bhaiya se baat karonge, tum mom se baat karke unhe kal dinner par bulaao.
Sumit : Oh Bhabhi ,u r GR888.

NExt Scene

Samar - Trisha's bedroom. Samar is upset about Shreya.

Trisha: Samar, kyaa hua ?
Samar : Kuch nahi,
trisha : Chaleyee taiyaar ho gayeeye.
Samar : Kyun kyaa hua .
Trisha : Koi khane par aaya hain.
Samar : Kaun.
Trisha : Woh maine aapse kahan tha na Sumit ke bare main --- Mona aur uske didi. Mujhe to dono hi achey lag rahey hain.

Next Scene:

Sonia and Mona come. Everyone welcome them. Samar comes down and is Stunned to see Sonia.

Samar : Sonia , Tum yahan.

Everyone surprised.

Milind thinks ( abh sahi tamashaa hoga ).

Friends a request I wud like to continue further, I will be back in a couple of hrs and will do the further story .........

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Posted: 16 years ago
OK...SORRY BT EVEN IVE WRITTEN DA STORY i was postin nd u postd...so il post myn....u go very fast,im still dere...so wat i add is added in payal's okz??
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Posted: 16 years ago
nxt scene riya is in her cabin nd she remembrs trisha bhabi givin sum fyl 2 ronit....den ronit cmz insyd her cabin wid a smyl on his face riya suddenly cmz 2 her senses....nd is in srt of shok
RIA: arrey....ronit kisi k bhi room mien KNOK kar k aate hain!!!
RONIT: i kno...lkin tmhare nhi!
RIA: watt do u mean?
RONIT: 4GET IT...Pata hai...miene mr.prateek ko apna thora sa demonstration dikhaya!
RIA: tho mien kiya karoon>
RONIT: cmon tum partner ho...colleague ho...tmhe bta raha hoon apn i kaamyaabi ka frst step!
RIA: huh!? kaamyaabi? gimme a break...u've challengd ria kapoor mr. ronit......nd i neva give up!
RONIT: ooh!....confident...pehle kbhi ria kapoor ka aisa roop nhi dekha.....bachpan se lekar ab tak tho..
suddenly sum1 cmz in whilst dey r talkin
RONIT: xcuxe me! aap ksi k cabin mien aarahe hain....u shud take permission or atleast knock!
ria is lukin at him wid wydely opened eyz nd sarcastic nods
the gy who has cum is drty sort of nd frm da begginin...he lykz ria...nd is aftr her... u kno...secret admirer who iz NOT A SECRET ADMIRER who dznt actually tell bt EXPRESSES da feelings...as soon as he sees her...he falls fr her nd starts day dreamin
RONIT: MADHUR!!!!!
MADHUR: ji...jjji sir
RIA: madhur kiya kaam hai?
madhur starts starin at her nd dreamin...he is smylin wid an opened mouth
ronit kicks him😆 nd he gtz baq 2 senses 😆
RONIT: y were u hre?
MADHUR: woh...sirr mien...mien bhool gaya
RIA: Ohhh.....waise hi mien itni tension mien hoon ooper se tum dono....gt out....both of u gt out of hre!!!!!!!!!😡
mahur rnz out
RONIT: haan...tension tho hogi hi....itne bare playr se challnge jo mil gaya hai!
RIA: oh shutup!😡
shiv nd milind r havin a talk wen milind receives a call
he sees the no.
MILIND: shiv...plz xcuzme
SHIV: sure!
in the meanwyl.....shiv texts a msg 2 nisha
nisha's reply cmz...
"mien class mien hoon!...ab parh loon??"
shiv makez a face!...........par mien bechain hoon!!!!
milind is talkin secretly...makin sure noone hears dis...seeing dis suspicious syd of his bro...shiv keepz lukin at him whylst hidden
he thinks "yeh bhaiyya ka behaviour itna ajeeb sa kyun hora hai fone pe baat krta hue...." bt he conoles himself sayin....zaroor grlfrnd ka fone hoga
milind cmz.....shokd nd surpryzd...nd sort of scard...
MILIND: arrey shiv....tum?
SHIV:haan bhayya....bhabi se kab mila rahe hain??
milind takes a sigh of releif
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Posted: 16 years ago

dis sonia thingg bhi thora early nhi ho gaya?

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