Kranti in Kitchen ----- 2 - Page 5

Dawn,

Pure magic 👏 ... the poem feels so light as if it'll fly away with the birds in the sky to sprinkle the dust of magic on all. Dawn, do take up your writing seriously, it's quite lucid and has a natural flow. 😃 You will excel.

What I like about this jugalbandi is that, both have different styles and different views and both are brilliant in churning out the best.

Jo & An ............

Originally posted by: skeptical

I wonder why you want to see my kudi and not your Beloved?

Originally posted by: Dawn Idol

Huff ........Puff ..........Pant ........Pant .......... Gasp ..........Choke ............

See Skep, this is what happens to me, trying to write verse ............ 😆

I dont know why I even try ...........

But something urges me on .........

It's like a pressing need ......

To make R & K fall in love without any heed .............

*Deep breath * ............So here goes ................

The clock strikes twelve ''

Tis full moon night ''..

The hour is magical ''..

The feel is ethreal ''..

I roll my sleeve '.

And call my pals ''

Together we'll weave ''..

Webs of enchantment ''.

My fairies are waiting ''.

So are Cupids with their arrows shining '..

Goodies - Elves & pixies are fetching ''

Hard at work are the magical beings '..

Our aim is clear ''..

To spread love and good cheer ''

We'll stop at nothing ''..

Till there's a new awakening ''.

Raj's already half smitten''..

There's something in her, he's so aware ''.

Everything said & done & written '.

He's concerned, cant help but care ''..

Kranti in a fit of rage ''..

Wed him and swore she'd make '..

Raj repent and his would loyalty break ''.

But later, can she her own feeling gauge ? ''.

Neither of them will escape ''.

From spells of love '''

And magic of romance ''..

In the web of magic, well entrapped '..

I'm still huffing & puffing Skep ......

If I dont get back to work now, I'll be thrown out of the office ........ C U all in after some real for-bread-and-butter work............. Bye ..............

[QUOTE=morningdew