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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
mm - for mayank's mother
mm to a sobbing gunjan : areey beta tum kyun ro rahi ho ?
sammy : woh aunty hum sab mayank ke friends hai.....usi ne hum logon ko aap ke b'day bask par bulaya...
mm : par tumhare naam ?
sammy : haan woh to main bhool hi gaya ji....i am samrat....sab log mujhe sammy kehte hain
mm : aur yeh ladki ?
sammy : arrey yeh....ise toh rone se hi fursat nahi milti😉.....by the way yeh gunjan hai....nupur ki behen.....nupur gir gayi isliye rona shuru ho gaya iska.....hai na gunjan ji ?
gunjan : haan...nupur kaisi hai....
mm : ghabrao mat beta....mayank ne aakar sahi waqt par use bacha liya......aur woh dono ab bhi staircase par putle ki tarah khade hain.....dekhna chahogi ?
gunjan : kya ?
sammy : ghabrao mat gunjan ji.....aap bhi theek hain aur aapki behen bhi sahi salamat hai...... ( mayank ki baahon mein 😆 )
gunjan : samrat plz tum mujhe pakadna chodenge....plz main tumse darkhvast karti hoon.....
sammy : gunjan ji....aap ro rahi thi jaise ganga beh rahi ho....isliye maine aapko sambhalna theek samjha...
gunjan : aapki madat kr liye shukriya par plz aap mujhe abhi chodne ki meharbani karenge ?
sammy : maine abhi kya galat kiya ki aap mujhpar itna gussa kar rahi ho ?
mm : bas bas...ab mayank aur nupur ko chudvana nahi hai kya ?
sammy : theek hai aunty....chaliye.....ladies first
mm : thank you
sammy : my pleasure.....gunjan ji....aap bhi jayiye
sajan n mayank's mother climb down the flight of steeps to witness mayur looking into each other's eyes TILL NOW......PHEW ! WON'T THEY'RE EYES BE TIRES OF STARING CONTINUOUSLY ?
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
hey someone continue na....i have written 2 parts...
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13
very nice
it was really good
please continue soon
cant wait to read more
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Posted: 17 years ago
#14

mm : mayank's mom

mm , sammy and gunjan go towards mayur and try shaking them....showing hands over their face.....pulling both of them out of their grasp......but all in vain
sammy : arrey yeh dono toh ekdam jaise chipak hi gaye
then all three of them shout in mayank's ears.......1 2 3 ......MAYANK !!!!!
THEN......1 2 3 .......NUPUR !!!!!
nupur gets out of his grasp and mayank falls down himself leaving nupur fall on the step flat
then both of them get to their senses.....and realise their "bhool" .......
mm looks at mayank with a sharp eye.......and gunjan speaks out in an grim tone : yeh kya ho raha tha di ?
nupur : woh gunjan.... gunjan woh main ......
gunjan : di ab bas bhi karo.....seedhe se batao baat kya hai
nupur : gunjan ......... gunjan ab tu chal ghar jaate hai hum😕
gunjan : di......
mm : gunjan beta ......yeh nupur toh kuch tujhse kehne wali hai nahi....aur mera beta - use kabhi padhai ke alawa kuch karte dekha hai kya ?
.......han toh baat kuch aisi hai.....badshah mayank ji ne nupur begum ko kuch aisa waisa keh diya.....begum ji kuch chid uthi aur badshah mayank ji ke peche jaane lagi .....jaate jaate.....
sammy turns it into a singsong......haan ji jaate jaate badshah ko khel sujha ......aur ve chup gaye .....aage dekha toh thi sidheeyan ......un sidheeyon ko begum ne na dekha na parkha kya kare.....
......isi mein begum nupur jiii gir padi sidheeyon par ....badshah mayank ko laga mazak hai .....
......par na jaane kisne chillaya ......meri behen ko bachao .....
......aur gaya daudkar badshah apni begum ko bachaane ......taaki apni begum ko woh zondagi bhar tak na khoye .......aur mili woh ankahee aankhein jo shayad kabhi na milti ....
mm continues......mili .....mili .....mili toh mili ......itni der tak mili rahi ki kya kare.....
ab iska toh ek hi matlab ho sakta hai
mayank smiles ......😳
nupur feels shy......😳
gunjan : di aapne mujhe bataya nahi ?
sammy : gunjan.....samajh jaata hai ......kyun mayank ?
at his name nupur blushes and runs away smiling to herself ......
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Posted: 17 years ago
#15
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
it was awresome some onecontieu
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Posted: 17 years ago
#16
WOW it was really good
i hope you continue really soon
it was sooooooooooooooooo good
I really can't wait to read more

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